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Night of Darkness Chapter 2: A Difficult Life
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Night of Darkness

1: Night of Darkness

2: A Difficult Life

3: Visit from Hagrid

4: Ride to Hogwarts

5: Welcome to Hogwarts

A Difficult Life

Night of Darkness

Chapter 2 of 5

HermioneWeasley1972

The trials that Harry faced growing up with the Dursleys

Drama Angst Action/Adventure Poetry/Prose Drabble/100-Word Hogwarts Castle 1,146 Words 5 Chapters WIP
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A Difficult Life

One morning Petunia

Opened her door to find

The boy named Harry

Dumbledore had left behind.

"Vernon, come quick!"

She cried with disgust.

"My nephew, it seems,

Has been left in our trust."

"He'll be just like them,

A bloody magical freak!

We can't let that happen

We must keep him weak!"

From that day forward

When he performed a feat

They locked him away

And wouldn't let him eat.

Every day Harry worked,

He slaved and he toiled

Scrubbing the floors

And pots that were soiled.

Then suddenly it happened

Before his birthday

Hundreds of letters

Were coming his way.

Vernon turned purple

And shouted,"Enough!"

I promised we would

Put an end to this stuff!"

"They'll never find us,

They'll leave us alone!"

He packed up and headed

For places unknown.

They first tried a hotel

But they were found there.

Soon Vernon and Petunia

Were pulling their hair.

Vernon's face brightened

All lit up in glee,

Petunia, we're headed

Out into the sea!"

So they found an old shack

Where they settled the night

Confident that everything

Would at last be all right.

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Latest 25 Reviews for Night of Darkness

4 Reviews  |  5.0/10 Average

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DawnEB

I think  prefer this to the previous chapter, not because I got caught out reading it in HCR Poetry Class, either.  It has a better rhythm, I think.

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karelia

This is absolutely beautiful.

10/10

karelia

I am absolutely baffled why there are no reviews for this lovely piece. Cute, lovely and heartwarming! Oh, and not to forget original!

Response from HermioneWeasley1972 (Author of Night of Darkness)

Thank you so much ladyinthecloak.  I'm having a little trouble with the next part of this - I know how I want the sorting to go but it's getting them to that point.  Oh well.  It will come to me.

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DawnEB

I'm sorry I needed nudging from litc to review this (she has hard elbows, I'm sure I'm going to bruise).I thought this was an interesting start,  and I fully intend to read the rest, but I have to get in the proper mood to read poetry or I tend to skim it and you deserve better than that :)

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