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Unconscionable Collateral
Leilani King6 Reviews | 6 Ratings, 0 Likes, 4 Favorites )
Although the metaphor of a woman being a flower or especially a rose is nothing new. I tried it too. I was in business law and missed a class. Our instructor Gary gave us one legal term to learn and discuss each week so I had last week's "Unconscionable" and that week's "Collateral." I put them together in a poem. Well, in the title of the poem, anyway.
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cute poem
~stands and claps loudly~ Bravo ~throws flowers and chocolates to author~ SpeechlessTamara
*applauds* Brava!! Good! And good for you!
That is powerful I am glad you found your worth, your strength
Brava!! *claps and whistles loudly*
Absolutely Perfect!!!
This is a very strong, very awesome poem. It says something profound about the strength of women.
Well Done!
GG
You've got a good rhythm too this, and you keep control very well of what you're expressing. I felt uncomfortable with the word "bullshit", but I think that's because it's not really a British word and I'm unused to it.
On the whole, I liked it. Well done.