Child and Choice

Seventh

3 Reviews | 3 Ratings, 0 Likes, 0 Favorites )

Drabble/100-Word Hogwarts Castle 228 Words 1 Chapter Complete

"As I slowly feel myself passing away
I look into the eyes of my child..."

Excerpt from "Child and Choice" by Seventh.

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Chapters (1)

Chapter 1: A Death

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Seventh

Member Since 2007 | 7 Stories | Favorited by 4 | 35 Reviews Written | 46 Review Responses

This is the Beginning of the End of My Story

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10/10

Katie616

Oh. That was wonderful. It was wonderfully clear, but so sad. Short, sad, lovely, with a lonely-heart voice. Sadness always hits me more than passionate love or happiness. It's always sadness. I know for a fact that this is going to be read and reread by me, at least. It's just so wonderfully wonderful.

Thank you.

Response from Seventh (Author of Child and Choice)

Thanks for a great R&R!I did intend for it to be sad, but I tried to put love in aswell. Hermione, knowing she was going to die, tries to calm the child before her, but unfortunately I think she knows there is nothing she can do to help the child understand she won't be coming back.Thanks again,Seventh

0/10

Cissy_n_Snape

Haunting.

Response from Seventh (Author of Child and Choice)

I hope that "Haunting." is a good thing!I kind of hoped it would be something that hit someone srtsight in the heart - creating terrible atmosphere that 'haunted' the mind and soul.Seventh

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

Oh my that was beautiful

Response from Seventh (Author of Child and Choice)

Thank you very much! I was doing it on a 'spur-of-the-moment' type thing. I was sitting writing an English essay about Dulce et Decorum est, and it suddenly came to me.Thanks for the review!Seventh

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