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Burning Love

1: One-shot

Burning Love

StormySkize

55 Reviews   |   55 Ratings, 0 Likes, 9 Favorites )

Humor Alternate Universe Epilogue What Epilogue? Potter Place's Anything Goes Challenge 825 Words 1 Chapter Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape

It's not easy living without magic, as Severus Snape learns when Hermione asks him to do her a favour.

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StormySkize

Member Since 2005  |  13 Stories  |  Favorited by 172  |  431 Reviews Written  |  998 Review Responses

I am in my late 50's and I didn't even start reading Harry Potter until after the third book came out. My granddaughter got me 'hooked on Potter,' and while surfing the net one day, I found a fanfiction site. That was it! My first story, "Renaissance," was published on Ashwinder a month later and I've been writing ever since. I am primarily a HG/SS shipper, but I also enjoy reading and writing RL/SS. I live in Tampa, Florida with my wonderfully adoring and supportive husband, and three completely spoiled cats. (Kallie, Mysha, and Smudge {who was the inspiration for the cat that Severus gives Hermione in my story "Renaissance."}) I'm always happy to correspond with my readers and I answer ALL reviews. I'm always looking for plot-bunnies, so feel free to throw some ideas out.

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0/10

Dimac

Ha ha ha! Thank God it was the barbeque because initially I thought fire-in-the-fireplace and that definitely *would* have burned the house down! Love that last line as well :-D

10/10

aura

Very cute!

Response from StormySkize (Author of Burning Love)

Just of bit of silliness, really, but I'm glad you enjoyed.Thanks for reading and reviewing, and for leaving all the stars behind.

Response from StormySkize (Author of Burning Love)

Just of bit of silliness, really, but I'm glad you enjoyed.Thanks for reading and reviewing, and for leaving all the stars behind.

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

I can hear all the male grillers out there in the world, groaning from this story.  Brilliant.  Very funny.

Response from StormySkize (Author of Burning Love)

Oh, yeah ... lolThanks for reading and reviewing and for all the lovely stars!

Response from StormySkize (Author of Burning Love)

Oh, yeah ... lolThanks for reading and reviewing and for all the lovely stars!

9/10

phoenix

LOL Very cute. And I love the idea of him using the whole can to start the grill. Oh, and I had a good laugh about the vinyl siding because we did a little of that on our old house. LOL

Response from StormySkize (Author of Burning Love)

My mother actually bubbled the vinyl siding of her house ... thus my idea!I'm glad you enjoyed.Thanks for reading and reviewing and thanks for all the stars!

Response from StormySkize (Author of Burning Love)

My mother actually bubbled the vinyl siding of her house ... thus my idea!I'm glad you enjoyed.Thanks for reading and reviewing and thanks for all the stars!

0/10

Elise_Wanderer

Severus at the BBQ!  What a marvelous vision!And I do so like the idea that he didn't do it because he was forced or manipulated or blackmailed or tricked.So glad Hermione can follow directions.Nicely done!

Response from StormySkize (Author of Burning Love)

I'm glad you enjoyed.Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Response from StormySkize (Author of Burning Love)

I'm glad you enjoyed.Thanks for reading and reviewing.

0/10

Aldara

This is extremely cute. Kisses for the cook (and the author *g*).

Response from StormySkize (Author of Burning Love)

Aww ... now I'm blushing! Thanks so much.

Response from StormySkize (Author of Burning Love)

Aww ... now I'm blushing! Thanks so much.

6/10

salvamea

first forgetful and then overdoing. where do we know this from? ah yes. these idividuals that perform this are called "men".He is most definitely one of them. but we are all the same proud about them. And Hermione has reasons for being it.the one motivation that counts, that's new in his life. For love.  short but to the point. Thank you!!!!

Response from StormySkize (Author of Burning Love)

Thanks so muchh.

Response from StormySkize (Author of Burning Love)

Thanks so muchh.

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

You have yourself a hit here my dear.

Response from StormySkize (Author of Burning Love)

Thank you so much, glad you enjoyed.Thank you for the stars, too!

Response from StormySkize (Author of Burning Love)

Thank you so much, glad you enjoyed.Thank you for the stars, too!

0/10

kimjo2

lovely!  thanks so much

Response from StormySkize (Author of Burning Love)

Glad to know you enjoyed. Thank you!

Response from StormySkize (Author of Burning Love)

Glad to know you enjoyed. Thank you!

0/10

ofelia

nice diddy!

Response from StormySkize (Author of Burning Love)

I'm glad you liked it. Thanks a lot!

9/10

Lysithea

Oh, this is lovely. Very nice.

Response from StormySkize (Author of Burning Love)

Thanks so much for the kind words.

9/10

beaweasley2

For the love of Merlin! The whole can? I thought that a guy who knew about matches enough to a matchbox in Harry’s second year would be able to light the grill! Teehehe Really cute – really!

Response from StormySkize (Author of Burning Love)

Severus never does anything by half measures, does he?I'm glad you liked it.Thanks a lot!

0/10

elsolel

That is impressive.  I can't even light a charcoal grill, I use gas.  blow kisses to him from me, please.

Response from StormySkize (Author of Burning Love)

I use a gas grill, too. I have memories of my father trying to light the charcoal, though. Forty-five minutes worth of work to cook 4 hamburger patties.Those were the good old days.Thanks for the review!

10/10

Dreamy_Dragon

That's so sweet and funny!

Response from StormySkize (Author of Burning Love)

I'm glad you liked it. Thanks so much.

0/10

hgelman

Very funny!  I now have a great image in my head of Snape in a "Kiss the Cook" apron - I think with frills around the edges.

Response from StormySkize (Author of Burning Love)

Yeah, and maybe one of those chef's hats! I'm glad you liked it. Thanks a lot!

10/10

Shadow

This is the tupe of thing that makes this ship work. hermione is intelligent and sensitive enough to realise he would be able to do this better if she gives up her magic with him, and then to see that he is so pleased with himself because he was able to do something she asked him to do. Wonderful!

Response from StormySkize (Author of Burning Love)

I'm glad you like it. Thanks so much.

9/10

helshez

lol! Poor Sev. Hope he doesn't burn the sausages!

Response from StormySkize (Author of Burning Love)

Not this time, just his eyebrows and the tip of his nose!Thanks for reading.

10/10

Prof M McGonagall

Tee hee!  Very funny.  Triumphant!Snape at his finest, and Hermione knows how to appreciate him.

Response from StormySkize (Author of Burning Love)

Glad you liked it. Thanks so much!

10/10

snitchette

It's a sweet home scene. Can I kiss the cook too?

Response from StormySkize (Author of Burning Love)

I'm glad you liked it, thanks.Can you kiss the cook?The line forms to the left.

Response from snitchette (Reviewer)

I'm sorry. I must be a bit dense but I don't understand your last line. I was just teasing by asking if I could kiss Sev ;)

Response from StormySkize (Author of Burning Love)

lol ... yes, I'm saying that the line forms to the left. You'll have to get in line to kiss Sev -- he's pretty popular around here!

Response from snitchette (Reviewer)

*slap on my head* thanks

0/10

cricket

Oh, excellent!  Well done, Severus! :D

Response from StormySkize (Author of Burning Love)

He's persistent anyway. Thanks!

10/10

kyriaofdelphi

TDF! SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO cute. Thanks.

Response from StormySkize (Author of Burning Love)

TDF?  Totally dumb fanfic? But you said it was cute and you gave me stars ... so thanks!

Response from kyriaofdelphi (Reviewer)

To die for. Sorry, I get too fond of using the netspeak of my young friends in our discussion groups. Loved it.

Response from StormySkize (Author of Burning Love)

My only other guess was "Too damn funny." I guess I'm not into netspeak.Thanks for the info.

0/10

sunny33

very funny, and what man needs to be a wizard without his wand to act like that?

Response from StormySkize (Author of Burning Love)

Ah, so very true. I'm glad you liked it. Thanks!

0/10

kimbee73

Wow...I can see using a full can of lighter fluid. It's hard without magic. Thanks for the laugh!

Response from StormySkize (Author of Burning Love)

Happy to supply the chuckle. Thanks for the nice review.

0/10

MollysSister

Its oh so very tempting to squirt out the whole container of lighter fluid. Makes a much more impressive grill. Tee hee

Response from StormySkize (Author of Burning Love)

That's why I have a gas grill. Thanks for reviewing!

10/10

anastacia

What an incredibly sweet story! Short, to the point, and well written.Thank you for it darling!!!A big kiss to you.

Response from StormySkize (Author of Burning Love)

Thanks for the great review and for the big kiss.

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