I like the way they are getting along - I guess it help that they have a common goal :) But I think these very slight hints - her noting that he's not that greasy up close, him lingering on the kiss a half second longer - are very nice touches to the story, building a slow simmer between them without going from indifference to love in the blink of an eye. Good job on that. It's the subtlties that make the difference IMHO :)

too cute. Can't wait to see these dates.

Much fun!  Thanks for sharing. :)

very funny!  Thanks for this lovely romp.  I have occasionally read a story called a 'romp' in a book blurb, but this really is one.  Delighfull!  Many thanks.

That was hilarious. However, you were right, the ending was kinda  a let down. I was craving more fluffy romance!!! But it was wonderful all the same!

love it!! so sweet.

Wow, that was the most wonderfully ridiculous story that I've read in a while. Thank you for writing it.

Yay! Or rather: Oh no! I'm so sad that it is over, but (of course) I'm really happy Snape and Hermione are together. The serious bit in the middle was really quite funny, as the one green apple in the sea of red ones. It really is quite a funny story, and the fluff is also funny in it's own way.

I just adore the 'revenge' part, and how it totally backfires. It's still really good. 

Well, I'm off to read more of your stories, and hopefully review.

Katie 

Love the Pig Latin. Just had to say that. I'll keep reading and probably leave at least one other review; this one is just something I had to add. Had to.

Back to the story!

Katie 

Bloody brilliant!

I absolutly love this story!I was looking for a HP/HG fic but found this instead, it was so worth it!

This gave me such a good laugh! Very light, very skimming, yet tender, soft, and fluffy in a heart-warming way. averygoodun, you did a marvelous job in this story. 

lovely!

When I read the part about Albus being Severus' lover I burst into hysterical laughter.  What a fun read, thanks.

This tale was alot of fluffy fun. It was just what I needed to make my cold feel better.

Very funny. Very fluffy.Just what I like.I really had a blast reading this, which doesn't surprise me, as I have fully enjoyed everything else you've written.Peace, Love, and Potter,Sue :o)

I'm not sure how I missed this one when it came out.  It's wonderfully irreverent--I really like it.

I loved it! You are a great writer :)

This was so much fun to read! Thank you for making a cold, gray day that much more enjoyable.

I didn't realize this was updated!  It was a really fun piece, and I loved the wild things you had Circe wear.  *grin* Muu Muu indeed!  Cheers! GG

wow. that was done really well. The whole 100 100 word'ers thing sounded kinda sketchy, but I liked it alot.

That was (to coin a Weasleyism) Bloody Brilliant!  Just added it to my favourites because it's the sort of fic you can read over and over.  Fantastic!

wowee, fantastic story. circe did the best thing ever i think for hermione and severus. they always turn out to be the best couple. others are good i suppose but hg/ss is always the best.thanks for posting such a fantastic story, averygoodun

The Snake Man is dead! That was the best war scene I have read for its silliness. =]

Had to read again..  love fluffy lemon sherbert....  waiting for more.. please