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Summer Storm
sunny3321 Reviews | 21 Ratings, 0 Likes, 3 Favorites )
Hermione and Severus have let their sex-life become boring over the years. But one day...
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sunny33
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Hello all, I am a 53 year old from NZ. Although SSHG is how I started and still my main pairing, I'll give pretty much any pairing a try, whether it be reading or writing. Sev and Herms need a bit of variety at times. ;)
Reviews for Summer Storm
A older body can never do or look like a younger one. To bad. This was cute. I loved the imagery of the garden.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Summer Storm)
Yep. We all get past that sort of thing. :)
Well at least they added some excitement back into their sexlife!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Summer Storm)
They tried! :)
Anonymous
I can't believe I didn't review this before, given how much I... liked... the story.
Your use of imagery, descriptions and... the word "redlolent," filled me with joy, as the realism and beauty involved helped clear a bowel obstruction that's been lurking for some time.
Well done.
Author's Response: And you STILL can't spell redolent. I need to work on you more.
Anonymous
Beautiful, and so true! Great response to the challenge, too.
Author's Response: Thanks! :)
how beautiful! Wonderful imagery - love your descriptive touch - deft and perfect!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Summer Storm)
Thanks! :)
I want someone to draw some fan art of Snape cavorting naked. Wouldnt that be grand! Thank you for a beautiful mental picture nonetheless.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Summer Storm)
He probably won't stay outside long enough to pose! :)
the thought of a geriatric Snape out in the scud gives me the heebee jeebies. Tuck the old man up in bed before he catches his death of cold
Response from sunny33 (Author of Summer Storm)
He will need a doc. Know any good ones? :P
Response from quaffswinegaily (Reviewer)
all the good ones are taken!
lovely and sooo true at that certain age. thanks so much
Response from sunny33 (Author of Summer Storm)
We get soft as we get older!)
Beautiful scene of them out in the rain.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Summer Storm)
Thanks! :)
It is the thought that counts, and as I know the "pleasures" of creaking joints and aching limbs first hand, I think their chosen solution to the chilling rain showed utter dedication to the ... err... project at hand!Well done, sunny!Beth
Response from sunny33 (Author of Summer Storm)
Thanks, Beth! :)
Oh I can feel their pain! On to the companion.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Summer Storm)
LOL :)
Getting cold with a few little rain drops. They're disapointing me because I'm sure a bit of foolish wand waving would have solved the problem.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Summer Storm)
Yes, but wouldn't that defeat the purpose of it all? :)
The chattering teeth made me giggle. Nothing like a warm, dry, comfortable bed...
Response from sunny33 (Author of Summer Storm)
So true! :)
Heh, heh, at least they tried to relive their youth! Cute and realistic.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Summer Storm)
Give 'em points for trying! :)
Oh, that is utter cuteness. Yes, the dry, warm bed is better after all.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Summer Storm)
Absolutely! :)
Loved this! (I'm looking towards the heavens as I write in the hope of a 'spring' storm myself - not likely actually as it's a lovely, relatively warm, sunny day here!) The realism in this brought a real smile to me today however - thank you! :-)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Summer Storm)
Thanks,
Response from sunny33 (Author of Summer Storm)
! :)
LOL - so realistic! Loved it.But have they forgotten they are witch and wizard in their passion? Hello warming charm?
Response from sunny33 (Author of Summer Storm)
That's cheating! :P
well, it was fun while it lasted - and now they can have a little fun getting warm again. hehe
Response from sunny33 (Author of Summer Storm)
The thought was there! :)
Hello, warming charm. Problem solved! XD
Response from sunny33 (Author of Summer Storm)
But wouldn't that kind of defeat the purpose of braving the elements? :P
Response from KellyH (Reviewer)
Braving the elements? Nah that is too vanilla. It's all about the risk of getting caught ;)
Funny ending. :) They make a cute couple here.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Summer Storm)
Thanks, broom! :)
First reaction: brrr.Second reaction: naw.What a lovely little piece./M
Response from sunny33 (Author of Summer Storm)
Thanks, morgaine! :)