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Can't Take My Eyes Off You
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Severus and Hermione are both feeling disgruntled after the war is over. Especially with each other. Watch the fireworks when they are sent on a special mission together.
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Hello all, I am a 53 year old from NZ. Although SSHG is how I started and still my main pairing, I'll give pretty much any pairing a try, whether it be reading or writing. Sev and Herms need a bit of variety at times. ;)
Reviews for Can't Take My Eyes Off You
Woohooo!! Thanks for sharing!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
Thanks. :)
It's so good to see Severus come around and fight for his woman.I hope the next chapter is coming soon, I love this story.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
It will be this week. :)
eeeewwwww Malfoy is touching Hermione, I hope she hexes him.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
He's a prat. He'll get his comeuppance when he finds out exactly which Slytherin she fancies. ;)
I love Minerva, she always looks out for Severus, like sending him to read the school regulations, she's brilliant.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
Sometimes he needs things spelled out for him, doesn't he? :)
I can't wait to see how long he can avoid her once they are back at Hogwarts. I have a feeling she won't put up with him hiding from her for to long.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
Nope. She's the Gryff after all! :)
I like the W.I.L.F. Button , very clever gift idea.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
I want one! :)
I love the hug at the end, it said a lot.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
Exactly. She doesn't just want him for sex. She actually cares for him as well. :)
I can understand Hermione's strong feelings about the speech Snape gives to the first years, it is incredible.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
Very memorable. :)
love your skill with dialogue! faboo update. thanks and mucho smoochies
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
Thank you. I suspect it's 'cos I like talking so much! :)
cool! at laaaaaast...and uuuuuudaaaaaaaaate! and i know who that "she", which must be a "he" who sports greasy hair that looks like a "she"'s.. Haha. So cute, at least they're fresh roses... not dried ones...:)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
Yep. fresh in this story! :)
I can't believe Malfoy is still suffering from the terrible illness of still being attached to his mouldy ol' balls :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
ROFL. A disability, to be sure! :)
I just... All I can do is smile :)Can't wait for more!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
Smile away! :)
Well, you can't blame her for not just assuming it is Severus. He hasn't exactly been receptive to any of her advances. Lucky for him, he isn't too late. One can't help but wonder, if Hermione's admirer turned out to be a "she", would Severus be more jealous, or freakishly turned on?
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
Good point. Don't know if he could cope with two women though; he has enough trouble with one! :)
I think this was my favorite chapter so far. Having Snape and Hermione duel at the end was pretty funny. I loved it when the girls asked if witches and wizards always kissed and made up after they were done dueling:D Great chapter.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
Thanks! :)
How funny--now everybody knows. What did they call Snape's wand--his special baton? Snape is kind of a funny drunk:D Great chapter.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
I love Drunk!Severus. He always says things that he would never say while sober. :)
Hmm, was the pendant truly magical? Maybe someone had a pendant and that left residual magic. I like to guess but I'm usually wrong. Maybe Hermione said too much and now those girls are following her. Great chapter.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
Yes, it was made of the magical clay. It had the sparkles in it. :)
How cute--Snape played the pity card and it got him kissed:D You know, I think I've heard of chili chocolate. I don't think it sounds that good though. Great chapter.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
Chilli chocolate is awesome. Sweet, with just a hint of bite. You should try it. :)
Wow....Severus is a romantic....now Hermione you are the brightest witch of your age please figure this out
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
Well, let's just say he is doing whatever it takes. ;)
Whoohoo!!!!!! An update....I Love it, NOW IF Hermione will just WISE UP and get a clue that its SEVERUS who is sending those roses.... Bless his heart...HE DOES LOVE HER!! CAN'T WAIT for more!!!!!!!!!! Well done!!!!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
She'll figure it out... eventually! :)
OMG! I can't believe Sev finally chose to do something to get her! I can't wait for him to reveal himself.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
It'll be an eye-opener, I promise! :)
That duel was the perfect way to end this chapter.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
Thanks! :)
Hermione your the brightest witch of your age.. work it out!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
She's a bit slow today. :)
I love it when his patronus changes.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
Had to get rid of the damned doe. :)
Looks like they may be getting closer to who ever is using magic.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
Very close. :)