You're creating a great atmosphere by allowing us to see Hogwarts and Snape though Hermione's father's eyes. I love the weather report in the leaves on the lawn (from Chpt. 2) and the fact that her textbooks appear to be blank to Muggle eyes. I also like your version of Snape - abrupt and sharp, but with a background of exhaustion and care for his students.

very nice - I'm really intrested to see where you'll take this story

I really like the fact that Hermione's father seems to be the same type of suspicous grouch as Snape. That explains a lot ...

Lovely start. I love original stories, and adore this POV. Usually I am a bit put off by a "first-person-POV" but not in this case.

Still loving it!  Great writing!

Such a great start!  I love David's voice.  You've contrived to make him seem so very real.  What an auspicious start to the birth of our favorite know-it-all.  I'm eager to read more!!

Nicely written, original, and touching!

I'm looking forward to more. :D

What a FANTASTIC start!!  I look forward to more!

This is a wonderful beginning. I find myself quite involved in the backstory about Hermione's parents (having been an elderly mother myself - first and only girl child at age 43). Now I'm intrigued to see how Snape will eventually fit into the new world you've created for us.

Great idea to make a story from Hermione's father point of view! I love it. Thank you!

This is fantastic! Thank you for bringing a smile to my face... Very well done! 

I held off on leaving chapter reviews because I was torn about reading something from a Muggle point of view. However, this story caught me up in it's talons and wouldn't let go. Good job. It's been added to my keeper list. ^_^

This tale is beyond words. I rarely see one told from somebody else's perspective with the warm effect that it is you actually who is telling (and feeling) the story. Love it.

This is such a gorgious background for Hermione, i really love it.