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Potions Under Duress Angels With Broken Wings
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Angels With Broken Wings

1: The Things That Get Overlooked

2: A New Friendship

3: Mixing Messages

4: Dawning Comprehension

5: Starting Point

6: Another Weakness

7: Easier Than He Thought

8: Experiments

9: A Happy Ending After All

Angels With Broken Wings

felinefelixfelicis

101 Reviews   |   101 Ratings, 0 Likes, 1 Favorite )

Drama Friendship Epilogue What Epilogue? Potions Under Duress 5,203 Words 9 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Ronald Weasley Severus Snape Nagini Minerva McGonagall

The war may have ended, but for some of its heroes there doesn't seem to be a happily ever after.

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Chapters (9)

Chapter 1: The Things That Get Overlooked

Chapter 2: A New Friendship

Chapter 3: Mixing Messages

Chapter 4: Dawning Comprehension

Chapter 5: Starting Point

Chapter 6: Another Weakness

Chapter 7: Easier Than He Thought

Chapter 8: Experiments

Chapter 9: A Happy Ending After All


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10/10

Grace52373

This story sounds like its going to be good already, I can tell! One thing frustrates me though, when Hermione is portrayed as independant, and strong-minded, she seems to be in all ways that matter except in one, her love life. Why doesn't she just leave him when he refuses to compromise! That is what most would do. It is hard, but if someone isn't willing to meet you halfway, and refuses to listen to you, than they don't love you. It seems cruel to me for her to abort her baby, but I am pro-life, so I have a bias, but her reaction seems like a kind of revenge with an innocent baby as the collateral damage. If someone had tricked me into getting pregnant (wouldn't happen, I believe in waiting til at least I am engaged), I would have the baby, take them to court and sue them for fraud and child support, and they would have to take care of the baby while I worked.  That's my opinion though.

Response from felinefelixfelicis (Author of Angels With Broken Wings)

It is rare for someone to be independant and strong-minded in their love life once they are to the point of a serious relationship. She DID ask Ron to talk to her about where they were going and should they keep going, but I feel she'd try to end it maturely rather than storm out like a petulant child. Though she's headed that way.And Hermione doesn't know he tricked her. She just knows that for some reason her birth control failed. That happens sometimes. She's not ready for children, and Ron has no good reason to know that anything's happened, so as far as she's concerned he has no reason to find out. He may be being kind of a dick, but I don't think Hermione wants to believe that he'd go as far as to tamper with her birth control. She'd rather believe it was an accident.

Response from felinefelixfelicis (Author of Angels With Broken Wings)

It is rare for someone to be independant and strong-minded in their love life once they are to the point of a serious relationship. She DID ask Ron to talk to her about where they were going and should they keep going, but I feel she'd try to end it maturely rather than storm out like a petulant child. Though she's headed that way.And Hermione doesn't know he tricked her. She just knows that for some reason her birth control failed. That happens sometimes. She's not ready for children, and Ron has no good reason to know that anything's happened, so as far as she's concerned he has no reason to find out. He may be being kind of a dick, but I don't think Hermione wants to believe that he'd go as far as to tamper with her birth control. She'd rather believe it was an accident.

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