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Watching Shadows Chapter 1: Watching Shadows
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Watching Shadows

1: Watching Shadows

Watching Shadows

Watching Shadows

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Ladymage Samiko

She watches, silent, hidden. …He watches, mystified, invisible.
Small moments from the lives of Hermione and Severus during the last year.

Drama Angst Drabble/100-Word Friendship GrangerSnape100 120 Words 1 Chapter Complete
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She watches, silent, hidden. He paces, back and forth, back and forth. His fingernails bite the Mark bloody.

She leaves healing salve and chamomile tisane for him to find.


He's crying— wretched, ugly sobs. She's listening. He begs forgiveness for his sins.

She isn't Lily. Nor Dumbledore. But she pins a note to a hand-knitted blanket.

I forgive you.


She grieves, huddling by the marble slab. He watches, mystified, invisible.

He approaches, one step.


The blanket is heavy and smells of sage, smoke, and copper. She looks up, all hope and disbelief.

She stands. His hands are warm. Solid.

Alive.


A/N: Written for GS100's 'present tense' challenge.


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Latest 25 Reviews for Watching Shadows

5 Reviews  |  /10 Average

10/10

TheCopperDragon2004

Aww, such a short little piece, but it speaks volumes. One of my favorites! (I'd actually LOVE to see this made in to a full-length fic, if you were ever so inclined!) ;)

0/10

Minerva

You have me sniffling with just 128 words ... Thank you!

10/10

articcat621

I love this. You did a wonderful job capturing both of their emotions <3

10/10

mick42

So much longing and love in so few words.

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Sampdoria

Very well told with few words, I loved it.

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