Broken
potterbrat180 Reviews | 180 Ratings, 0 Likes, 57 Favorites )
Draco Malfoy has changed sides. When he decides to leave Malfoy Manor, he needs help packing. While at the Manor, a surprise arrival changes everything. The warnings show abuse and violence, but I promise that nothing will be bad. It really is more of a romance, but the other stuff is necessary.
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I've been posting on here for a while and have decided to update my profile. I'm 30ish... I have a husband... I have two daughters... and other various creatures living at my house. My real life consists of work, fanfiction (which sometimes supercedes work), and chasing after my teen and tween.
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Reviews for Broken
Oh jeez... the final battle is coming, isn't it? *Cringe*Hope to see more soon, cheers!
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
It is... however, I'm not good at writing those scenes. I'm trying very hard to figure out what I want to do there. The battle itself might be anticlimatic, actually. I'm trying to stay close to Draco/Hermione. I needed Voldie in the beginning, but it's time to put him in the rubbish bin.
WHAT!Married? Oh my god.I just can't stop laughing. This is going to so much fun.Especially when they aren't friends. You wrote Hermione wasn't Dracos first choice to go help packing.Nice twist.Hugs Carmille
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
Draco and Hermione were working on a tentative friendship before. It was more of an indifference toward one another. There was too much history for them to become the best of friends anyway. They will have to take baby steps now.
I love this story. I can't wait for some more chappies!!!
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
Thank you so much. I'm currently working on the revisions for Chapter 4, but if I can get it beta'd by tomorrow, I should have it out by Monday.
what happened to chapter one? theres chapter 0., 2. , and 3.
???
am i just really that stupid? oh dear.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
The "0" is chapter 1. I noticed that myself this morning and I'm not really sure why that happened. I'm afraid to try to fix it, cuz I don't want anything to happen to it.
oh this could get very very interesting...
the way im understanding it, forgive me if ive misconstrued, is that Hermione is now bound to draco and must do everything he asks, similar to the imperius. if im right, this could get very interesting. *as draco*: "Oh, go take a flying leap." *she does* "Granger, what the hell are you doing?!"
hahaha... sorry,the image my mind conjured up of Hermione leaping about in the hospital wing... hahaha.
anyways, cant wait for what happens next. <3
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
That is a very interesting interpretation. However, at one point Snape said he was positive THEY were bound. You will find out exactly what that means in chapters 4 and 5 which are being rivised and should be up by next week. Thank you so much for the review!!! By the way, I did laugh out loud at the image of Hermione leaping out of the hospital wing.
Response from togspled (Reviewer)
the they... doesnty mean DM/HG... it means SS/HG??
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
I'm sorry... I was a bit vague in my response. The "they" is referring to DM/HG. They are bound. You shall see, you shall see.
Response from togspled (Reviewer)
no, cuz that woulda been first person plural... does he mean LM?! but the curse the dark lord put on lucius... oh im confused. is uppose i better re-read and wait for more.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Broken)
This is the paragraph I am referring to:
“Black light. It shot straight from his wand and engulfed Miss Granger and Draco. Draco jumped on top of her just as the jet hit them. I don’t even think Miss Granger is aware of what happened. I’m not even sure that Draco is aware. But I am positive they are bound.”However, I can see how that can be confusing. I will make sure to be more specific in the chapter I am currently writing. You will get your anwers in chapter 4. Thank you for opening my eyes on this one. I will have to be more careful with my wording.