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Potions Under Duress Traitor
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Traitor

1: Part I, chapter 1

2: Part I, chapter 2

3: Part I, chapter 3

4: Part I, chapter 4

5: Part I, chapter 5

6: Part I, chapter 6

7: Part I, chapter 7

8: Part I, chapter 8

9: Part I, chapter 9

10: Part I, chapter 10

11: Part I, chapter 11

12: Part I, chapter 12

13: Part I, chapter 13

14: Part II, chapter 1

15: Part II, chapter 2

16: Part II, chapter 3

17: Part II, chapter 4

18: Part II, chapter 5

19: Part II, chapter 6

20: Part III, chapter 1

21: Part III, chapter 2

22: Part III, chapter 3

23: Part III, chapter 4

24: Part III, chapter 5

25: Part III, chapter 6

26: Part III, chapter 7

27: Part III, chapter 8

28: Part III, chapter 9

Traitor

averygoodun

307 Reviews   |   307 Ratings, 0 Likes, 156 Favorites )

Drama Angst post-HBP/HBP compliant Potions Under Duress 28,084 Words 28 Chapters Complete
Antonin Dolohov Hermione Granger Peter Pettigrew Severus Snape Tom Riddle (Voldemort)

The need to survive is ingrained within the human psyche, but where does self-preservation end and self-destruction begin? Hermione is captured by Death Eaters and is held hostage by Snape and Pettigrew, but she comes up with a plan to escape. Not a romance.

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Chapters (28)

Chapter 1: Part I, chapter 1

Chapter 2: Part I, chapter 2

Chapter 3: Part I, chapter 3

Chapter 4: Part I, chapter 4

Chapter 5: Part I, chapter 5

Chapter 6: Part I, chapter 6

Chapter 7: Part I, chapter 7

Chapter 8: Part I, chapter 8

Chapter 9: Part I, chapter 9

Chapter 10: Part I, chapter 10

Chapter 11: Part I, chapter 11

Chapter 12: Part I, chapter 12

Chapter 13: Part I, chapter 13

Chapter 14: Part II, chapter 1

Chapter 15: Part II, chapter 2

Chapter 16: Part II, chapter 3

Chapter 17: Part II, chapter 4

Chapter 18: Part II, chapter 5

Chapter 19: Part II, chapter 6

Chapter 20: Part III, chapter 1

Chapter 21: Part III, chapter 2

Chapter 22: Part III, chapter 3

Chapter 23: Part III, chapter 4

Chapter 24: Part III, chapter 5

Chapter 25: Part III, chapter 6

Chapter 26: Part III, chapter 7

Chapter 27: Part III, chapter 8

Chapter 28: Part III, chapter 9


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averygoodun

Member Since 2005  |  19 Stories  |  Favorited by 316  |  122 Reviews Written  |  1,064 Review Responses

Right.  I would like to state, for the record, that I WILL finish "She Married Her Choice".  I will.  Assuming I am in control of my own destiny and accomplishments, that is. ;-)

Unfortunately, real life (mainly an attention craving three-year-old) and inspiration have been keeping me from creative endeavors for a while now.  I do foresee a time when that shall pass, but until then, I ask for your patience.

Thank you!

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Reviews for Traitor

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orm irian

Now I see why you weren't shy about the warnings.  A compelling, but disturbing read; I find your summary especially ominous.  Good start. 

Response from averygoodun (Author of Traitor)

Yeah, I've been guilty of overdoing the warnings before, but this story really does warrant them.  Thanks.

10/10

togspled

Ok, you need to write more, right now! This story is looking AWESOME. Can't wait for the next installment!

Response from averygoodun (Author of Traitor)

Thanks.  The next chapter will be up soon, and the updating will be frequent on this story. 

10/10

Subversa

I see, love.  I see what it was that you wrote that upset you so.  *nods*  You're a brave girl.  I want to read the rest.

Response from averygoodun (Author of Traitor)

Oh, and that's not the worst of it.  No, this is... I guess it's my first foray into psychodrama with not so nice characters (really quite horrible characters, actually). 

I hope you can make it through to the end.  I've rewritten the end to the point where I'm satisfied, so hopefully you and everyone else will be more or less satisfied as well.  

Thank you,

Response from averygoodun (Author of Traitor)

.  I appreciate the support! 

10/10

septentrion

Extraordinary how you come from humour and romance to this dreadful story (dreadful for Hermione, I mean). I'm looking forward for the next installment.

Response from averygoodun (Author of Traitor)

I was so tempted not to respond to your review simply so that it would be there every time I looked at my unanswered review page because I laugh every single time I read it.  Partly because that is something I would say (only I'd forget to mention the disclaimer, assuming it's obvious) but mostly because this is a dreadful story!  Well written, perhaps, but highly dubious.

Thank you for the giggle and for the support!  I think I would lose my nerve to post more without reviews such as yours.  

0/10

Fawkes_07

Yikes. 

Response from averygoodun (Author of Traitor)

Definitely.

10/10

Southern_Witch_69

I shudder to think what the jerks are doing to her. Creeps, the lot of them. Sadly, there are people like this in the world. Your writing is great as usual. I'm interested in seeing where this story goes. :)

Response from averygoodun (Author of Traitor)

Yeah, so do I.  In fact, I'm not going to think about it, which is why I didn't write it!

Hope you like the rest, Sun.  And thank you!!! 

10/10

RedOrchid

Wow. I applaud you! This is magnificent. I was thinking "God, I hope she kills Wormtail before this is over" a few chapters back, but now I'm almost sorry for it. I would love to read a sequel to this. Good job!

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