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Potter Place Winter 2007 Prompt Challenges Snape's Shakespearean Revelation
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Snape's Shakespearean Revelation

1: Sinus Amor Cupido Declaro

2: Shakespearean Snape - Act I

3: In Search of Answers

4: Shakespeare, Act 2

5: Cupido Declaro, The Final Act

Snape's Shakespearean Revelation

snapemylove

84 Reviews   |   84 Ratings, 0 Likes, 58 Favorites )

Humor Romance Parody Potter Place Winter 2007 Prompt Challenges 8,254 Words 5 Chapters Complete
Dennis Creevey Hermione Granger Minerva McGonagall Original Character Severus Snape

My response to the Potter Place's Winter Prompt Challenge, Prompt #22. What happens when Snape is inadvertently hit with an obscure curse that forces its victim to declare his secret love? He doesn't even release he has a secret heart's desire until the spell forces him to declare it, publicly, in Shakespearean prose no less!

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Chapters (5)

Chapter 1: Sinus Amor Cupido Declaro

Chapter 2: Shakespearean Snape - Act I

Chapter 3: In Search of Answers

Chapter 4: Shakespeare, Act 2

Chapter 5: Cupido Declaro, The Final Act


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Reviews for Snape's Shakespearean Revelation

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10/10

janis

This is a very clever story.  What makes it a delightful parody is the way you've kept the characters true to themselves.  It takes skill to keep the characters believable. 

Response from snapemylove (Author of Snape's Shakespearean Revelation)

Thank you!  My beta and I have worked very hard to keep the characters as true as possible.  I truly appreciate my comments!  Thank you so much for review.

0/10

Gwenog Jones

I thoroughly enjoyed that chapter.  You write with a very easy humor that is quite refreshing to read.  Well done.

Response from snapemylove (Author of Snape's Shakespearean Revelation)

Thank you.  I'm so glad you are enjoying it!

10/10

KarenDetroit

Encore!

Response from snapemylove (Author of Snape's Shakespearean Revelation)

Thanks.  Chapter 3 is currently with my beta.  I hope to have it ready to post soon.

0/10

Cissy_n_Snape

great!

Response from snapemylove (Author of Snape's Shakespearean Revelation)

Thank you.

10/10

pickles

EXCELLENT!

Oh my is Creevy going to die....

Once this has been completed will refer hubby to your story.  He will get a kick out of this.

Thank you. 

Response from snapemylove (Author of Snape's Shakespearean Revelation)

Thank you!  Thanks so much for spreading the news.  I really appreciate it.  I'm really glad you're enjoying it so much.

10/10

pickles

Oh you are brilliant!

Onto the next chapter. 

Response from snapemylove (Author of Snape's Shakespearean Revelation)

Oh my.  *blushing furiously*  Thank you.

0/10

sinbad

Oh man label this a romantic comady!  Snape quoting Shakespeare lolo. I love it!

Response from snapemylove (Author of Snape's Shakespearean Revelation)

You're right, of course, given everyone's responses, I should post this as a comedy.  I'm so glad to hear that you're enjoying it.

0/10

LettyBIRD

Marvellous stuff - looking forward to more.

Response from snapemylove (Author of Snape's Shakespearean Revelation)

Thank you.  I'm hoping to have Chapter 3 up soon.

0/10

LettyBIRD

Marvellous stuff - looking forward to more.

Response from snapemylove (Author of Snape's Shakespearean Revelation)

Thanks.

9/10

Keladry Lupin

Poor Severus!  At least he wasn't compelled to touch her or make any physical gestures, as well.  Poor Hermione has to be so confused!

Wicked cliffhanger, leaving us before showing Minerva's reaction. 

Response from snapemylove (Author of Snape's Shakespearean Revelation)

I think Poor Hermione is rather offended!  But you're right, at least he hasn't had a physical response, yet :)  I hope you're not too disappointed with the next chapter.

Response from Keladry Lupin (Reviewer)

I must've given the wrong impression; I highly doubt I'll be disappointed!  Besides, it's your story, not mine ... I'm just along for the ride and enjoying the scenery immensely.

10/10

lupinschewtoy

Great use of Shakespeare.  Funny and sweet, a great combo.  Can't wait for more.

Response from snapemylove (Author of Snape's Shakespearean Revelation)

Thank you.  I'm so glad you like it.  I'm hoping to have the next chapter up soon.

10/10

KMJ

YAY that was sooo cuteness!!!

update soon!~ 

Response from snapemylove (Author of Snape's Shakespearean Revelation)

Thanks.  The next chapter is with the beta at the moment, but we're certainly trying to get it ready quickly.

9/10

Elisabeth

I'm sorry to hear this was harrowing to write, but it is a lot of fun to read.  Poor Snape. At least he gets a break from iambic pentameter when he's not around Hermione.

Response from snapemylove (Author of Snape's Shakespearean Revelation)

I'm glad it's turning out so well.  I was really worried when I started collecting quotes.  Snape and I will both get a break in the next chapter though, thankfully, but don't worry, the curtain hasn't dropped on Shakespeare quite yet. 

10/10

amsev

okay. An evil cliffie!  What's Minerva going to say in response to that?

Response from snapemylove (Author of Snape's Shakespearean Revelation)

LOL!  Sorry.  I hope I don't disappoint when it comes to Minerva's response.  It's pretty minimal.  Thanks for reviewing.

10/10

laiannon

this story is amazing, as I love shakespeare and these quotes are fun to try to translate and decide which play/sonnet they are from, although I'm not big on the sonnets.  I encourage you to continue this story, as it is also hilarious! Cheers! :-D

Response from snapemylove (Author of Snape's Shakespearean Revelation)

LOL.  To be honest, I'd never read the sonnets until I sat down to start writing this fanfic.  Who would have thought that fanfiction would have me reading Shakespeare!!  It was definitely worth it though.  Thanks for reviewing.

0/10

Zolana DeMagius

Isn't the "perfumes of Arabia" line a little, um, odd for the tone of the story?  I mean, Lady MacBeth is referring to the murders she cannot wash from her conscience and keeps seeing blood on her hands...  That always evokes a chill from me.  I find it weird for a man spouting his love (albeit a curse-driven declaration) to use such an example for Hermione's innocent hand.  Anyway, I love the rest of it so far, please keep updating; I can't wait to see Minerva's reaction!

Response from snapemylove (Author of Snape's Shakespearean Revelation)

Yes, if you read within the original context, it is a bit weird, but isn't it so like Snape to twist something to suit his own purposes?  I am glad you are enjoying the majority of the story though.

10/10

mmesnape

*giggles* Oh my! LOL  This is way too funny... I can't imagine how frustrated he must feel.  If he doesn't remove any un-necessary appendages from Creevey after this, I'll eat my hat!Great stuff, hope to see more very soon.  Cheers!

Response from snapemylove (Author of Snape's Shakespearean Revelation)

I'm so glad to hear you are enjoying it. 

0/10

ladyofthemasque

*purrrrrrrrrrrrrrs, twining around your ankles, doing her fuzzy furry feline best to trip you into your keyboard so you'll update faster faster purrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr!*~Lotm

Response from snapemylove (Author of Snape's Shakespearean Revelation)

*sits down before she faints*  I absolutely adore your stories.  I can't believe you're actually reading one of mine!  Thank you, thank you, thank you for reviewing!

Response from ladyofthemasque (Reviewer)

...If you faint, you won't be able to write...and in this form, I have claws with which to wake you up again.*tail flick*...Got it?*purrrrrrrrrrnuzzle*~Lotm

0/10

Kailin

What fun!  It's like an English Lit refresher course!  Thanks for writing.

Response from snapemylove (Author of Snape's Shakespearean Revelation)

I'm trying this again.  For some reason, TPP doesn't want to accept my response.  Thank you so much for reviewing.  I'm so glad you are enjoying the story.

0/10

Kailin

What fun!  It's like an English Lit refresher course!  Thanks for writing.

Response from snapemylove (Author of Snape's Shakespearean Revelation)

Thanks.  I'm glad you're enjoying it.

0/10

Robby

I enjoyed this first chapter and can hardly wait to read the next chapter. 

Response from snapemylove (Author of Snape's Shakespearean Revelation)

Thanks for the encouragment.  The story is completely written so the chapters will be posted as soon as I get them back from my beta! 

9/10

Horserider

Off to a great start! Please, more soon! :D~HR

Response from snapemylove (Author of Snape's Shakespearean Revelation)

I'm so glad you are enjoying it so far.  I hope the have the next chapter back from my beta and posted soon. 

10/10

rajani

heheehe!  That last little bit of self commentary Snape has is priceless.

Response from snapemylove (Author of Snape's Shakespearean Revelation)

LOL.  I'm so glad you liked it.  There will be plenty more of Snape-ish grousing yet to come :D

10/10

sregner

Well, how will Severus explain this...

Response from snapemylove (Author of Snape's Shakespearean Revelation)

I don't want to give away too much of the storyline, but unfortunately for our poor Severus, it's going to be awhile before he can say anything to Hermione under his own free will :D

9/10

sinbad

This has the ear marks of a great story.  I really can't judge one chapter, but I like what I see! keep me posted!

Response from snapemylove (Author of Snape's Shakespearean Revelation)

I'm so glad you are enjoying it!  I hope the remaining chapters will live up to your expectations :D  Thank you so much for all your encouragement.

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