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Potter Place Winter 2007 Prompt Challenges Snape's Shakespearean Revelation
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Snape's Shakespearean Revelation

1: Sinus Amor Cupido Declaro

2: Shakespearean Snape - Act I

3: In Search of Answers

4: Shakespeare, Act 2

5: Cupido Declaro, The Final Act

Snape's Shakespearean Revelation

snapemylove

84 Reviews   |   84 Ratings, 0 Likes, 58 Favorites )

Humor Romance Parody Potter Place Winter 2007 Prompt Challenges 8,254 Words 5 Chapters Complete
Dennis Creevey Hermione Granger Minerva McGonagall Original Character Severus Snape

My response to the Potter Place's Winter Prompt Challenge, Prompt #22. What happens when Snape is inadvertently hit with an obscure curse that forces its victim to declare his secret love? He doesn't even release he has a secret heart's desire until the spell forces him to declare it, publicly, in Shakespearean prose no less!

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Chapters (5)

Chapter 1: Sinus Amor Cupido Declaro

Chapter 2: Shakespearean Snape - Act I

Chapter 3: In Search of Answers

Chapter 4: Shakespeare, Act 2

Chapter 5: Cupido Declaro, The Final Act


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0/10

mugglemomof3

Very cute. Can't wait for more!!!

Response from snapemylove (Author of Snape's Shakespearean Revelation)

Thanks.  I'm hoping to have the next chapter up soon.

10/10

GeminiScorp

Great start. I hope she isn't to shocked at Snape being all mushy toward her. If it was me I might think hell had froze over! Looking forward to the next chapter.

Response from snapemylove (Author of Snape's Shakespearean Revelation)

Thanks!  Hermione's reaction will be in the next chapter so "stay tuned"!

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Kailin

Very promising start.  Can't wait to hear Severus gush some more.  More soon, please!

Response from snapemylove (Author of Snape's Shakespearean Revelation)

Thank you so much for your encouragement.  Much more Shakespeare yet to come! 

10/10

azulkan2

Interesting start.  Looking forward to more.

Response from snapemylove (Author of Snape's Shakespearean Revelation)

Thanks.  Chapter 2 will be posted as soon as I get it back from my beta.  It shouldn't be much of a wait. 

10/10

amsev

Oh, my LOL! Severus is in for it now! I look forward to reading more.

Response from snapemylove (Author of Snape's Shakespearean Revelation)

LOL.  More Shakespeare and Hermione's reaction coming in the next chapter.  Thanks for your encouragement!

0/10

sunnyrosalia

Great start, I really like it :)

Response from snapemylove (Author of Snape's Shakespearean Revelation)

Thank you so much.  I really appreciate the encouragement. 

0/10

septentrion

It was mean to stop just here.

Response from snapemylove (Author of Snape's Shakespearean Revelation)

LOL.  Sorry.  I didn't intend to be mean.  More Shakespeare and Hermione's reaction to come soon.  Thanks for reviewing.

10/10

Keladry Lupin

*clapping my hands over my eyes*  Oh, how embarrassing!  Poor Severus!  I can hardly wait to read Hermione's reaction.

Response from snapemylove (Author of Snape's Shakespearean Revelation)

I'm so glad to hear that you are getting into the story.  Unfortunately for poor Severus, there's a bit more embarassment to come before we get to see Hermione's reaction.  Should be up soon.  Thank you for reviewing!

0/10

Shiverrus

It's fun!  Keep it coming.  I like your Snape.  He seems real.

Response from snapemylove (Author of Snape's Shakespearean Revelation)

Thank you!  My characterizations are very important to me.  It means a lot to me to hear that they are appreciated.  Thanks again.

10/10

Southern_Witch_69

Hehehe! Great start!

Response from snapemylove (Author of Snape's Shakespearean Revelation)

Thanks for the review.  I'm so glad you are enjoying it.  The story is complete so the chapters will be posted as soon as I get them back from my beta. 

8/10

swim559

I loved this story! The last bit was hilarious. Good work on getting the Shakespeare quotes.Any chance you'll continue on with the story??? :-)

Response from snapemylove (Author of Snape's Shakespearean Revelation)

Thank you so much for the review.  I hadn't read that much Shakespeare since high school (which was many years ago)!  It was fun though.  I'm so glad you enjoyed it!  Unfortunately, there will not be a sequel to this one though :(

10/10

mick42

I love Shakespeare, and I love the thought of Severus speaking those lines.

10/10

mick42

Run Creevey, run fast, run far.

0/10

ayuh

This is beautiful!  I adore the Shakespearean plays - you integrated them perfectly into each appropriate scene.  Hats off, also, to your excellent editing skills (or beta, I didn't read those notes).

Response from snapemylove (Author of Snape's Shakespearean Revelation)

Thanks!  I really don't think I'd ever read that much Shakespeare before as I did researching this and never in one sitting!  LOL.  And I've got one of the greatest betas (and friends) in the world.

0/10

snapeophile

I was audibly laughing at your conclusion.  All your research paid off, in the form of a very entertaining and well-written story! 

Response from snapemylove (Author of Snape's Shakespearean Revelation)

Thank you so much.  I'm say glad to hear you like it and that all the research was worth it. 

9/10

Maddy Riddle

Sweet and funny story.

Creevey will look very paranoid waiting for Severus revenge. *LOL*

Response from snapemylove (Author of Snape's Shakespearean Revelation)

Thank you!  Yeah, I would hate to be Dennis Creevey right now!  LOL.

9/10

LettyBIRD

Great stuff.

Response from snapemylove (Author of Snape's Shakespearean Revelation)

Thank you.

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WriterMerrin

Oh, he's figureing it out.  I like this!  Now I'm really curious whether he's going to be able to avoid Hermione or if there will be more Shakespeare.

Response from snapemylove (Author of Snape's Shakespearean Revelation)

Chapter 4 is currently with my beta.  It should answer your question.  *hee hee*  I'm so glad you are enjoying the story.  Thanks so much for the review.

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ladyofthemasque

But...what if Severus wrote the letter for the main apothecarist, NOT for Hermione...and took it to give to the apothecarist, NOT Hermione?  If Hermione were then to read the letter (which could contain an explanation that he's cursed to speak in Shakespear around the apothecarist's apprentice), it would circumvent the problem of flowery prose, since Snape wouldn't have intended for Hermione to read it...(and would probably have done whatever he could to keep said note out of her hands, though she would've snatched it from him whilst he was spouting yet more iambic pentameterisms...)~LotmP.S.  Purrrrpurrrrpurrrrrrr!  *twines around your ankles, tripping you into your keyboard determinedly*

Response from snapemylove (Author of Snape's Shakespearean Revelation)

LOL.  Lupinschewtoy asked a very similar question.  To be completely honest, I never really gave any thought to Snape writing rather than speaking.  The idea just never popped into my head.  But then again, I get a rather fiendish delight out of forcing Snape to confront Hermione under the spell's effects and since writing a letter not destined for Hermione would probably negate the spell's effect, where's the fun in that?  I know that Snape will absolutely hate me for it (although I hope he will forgive me in the end because I really do love him), neither he nor the readers have seen the last of Snape on Shakespeare quite yet.  The next chapter has been altered slightly and e-mailed to Ravine (my beta) so hopefully it'll be ready to post soon.  So, please, I'm begging you, no more nuzzles.  The purring I rather enjoy, but the nuzzling tickles tremendously!  :)  *giggling way too much for my age thanks to my overly ticklish ankles*

Response from ladyofthemasque (Reviewer)

*wicked-kitty-smirk**tail-flicks, starts to crouch in stalk-the-ankles-mode...*~Lotm

9/10

MaevePotter

wah.... this chapter wasn't long enough! I want more interraction! hehe.. Please write more soon :) BTW I am pretty positive your latin is way off.

Response from snapemylove (Author of Snape's Shakespearean Revelation)

The latin was chosen word by word through an English-Latin online translator so I have no doubt that it is way off, but it was the best I could do at the time.  I promise more interaction in the next chapter though.

8/10

remy

I'd like to tell you that as tired as I am after a singularly horrible day of exams - the Shakespeare Severus uttered to Hermione actually had me laughing so hard I almost fell out of my chair.  :)  

Response from snapemylove (Author of Snape's Shakespearean Revelation)

I'm so glad I could help!  Your review has made my day! 

0/10

LillaQ

I like it! :) I really look forward to read more!

Response from snapemylove (Author of Snape's Shakespearean Revelation)

Thanks!  I'm reworking part of the next chapter, but I will try to get it to the beta in the next day or two.  Promise!

10/10

mistaria

Enjoying it a lot so far. Especially Sev spewing Shakespeare in chapter 2. :D Minervas reaction is priceless. <3

Response from snapemylove (Author of Snape's Shakespearean Revelation)

Thanks!  I'm so glad to hear you are enjoying it!

10/10

ylang_two

Of course the voice of Snape's conscience would sound just like Dumbledore.  I bet he'd be highly amused by this turn of events. 

Response from snapemylove (Author of Snape's Shakespearean Revelation)

I can just imagine all the twinkling this situation would have caused!  Especially if Minerva is an indication!

10/10

ylang_two

Your hard work is wonderful reading, let me assure you!

Response from snapemylove (Author of Snape's Shakespearean Revelation)

I'm so glad you are enjoying it.  The response this story has generated has made the effort SO worth it!  Thanks so much for the review.  *blush*

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