WHAT!!  NO!!  Why does the author laught and slip into darkness.  I want the author to write, write, write!!  I need more!  I love this story!

wonderful story.  thank you for sharing your talent and vision.

Great chapter. I feel for both Hermione and Severus. It's a no win scenario.Looking forward to more.Truly

BWAHA! your author's note made me laugh so hard.

Thank goodness he's not going to go! Excellant chapter, lots of funny bits too, my favorite being "ten points from Slytherin for snogging in the halls!" Imagine his face, hee!

Loved the romance action! And about time Harry caught on eh? I hope he's going to realise how much Snape can help him.

This is so good! Enjoyed the part about Lilly's death, nice twist, and of course loved their arguing!

Damn Harry, what a time to turn up! And I bet it's all about to kick off! You had me laughing my head off, I love it when Hermione and Snape are at each other, and you did it so well, he is fab when he's being stubborn, I love it, being majorly stubborn myself I find his ridiculous stubbourness wicked!

Great chapter, very dramatic, and moving. They kissed! Eeek!

The wandless magic was amazing, but Harry's got to sort himself out hasn't he?The excahnge between Snape and Hernione at the end was interesting, was he hinting at his feelings?

Wow, Hermione herding Severus back to the castle at wand point. I never thought I'd see that.  I can imagine what that did to him. Severus seemed to really enjoy Hermione's forcefulness, and was probably turned on by it.  I'm worried about his arm still burning though. I know the longer he ignores it, the more painful it will be.  I wonder if there's a way to counteract that.  I am glad he decided to stay, even though this means his cover is blown.  I'm really looking forward to reading more, and seeing how things continue. If Severus still doesn't know Hermione feels about him from this chapter, then he needs to get whacked on the head.

I hope Severus makes it out of this in one piece. No doubt Voldemort is extremely angry for being ignored for so long. Perhaps if he sees Severus' injuries he might have a better understanding, but I'm sure that still won't stop him. I hope Hermione can do all she can to convince Severus that he is important. She had a good start by telling him she cares for him, and doesn't want to see him get hurt. I can only imagine the injuries he will return with.

Wow. Excellent. Poor Severus. Let's hope Voldie doesn't hurt him too much, hmmm.Looking forward to more.Truly

Oh no! I hope nothing bad happens to Severus, but I have a feeling something will happen... Anyways I love this chapter :) it's great!

Wow, what a first chapter! I've been meaning to start reading this fic for ages, and have finally got round to it, and boy am I glad I did! Off to read the next chapter!

I'm glad Severus made the decision not to go to Voldemort. The only downside would be that Voldemort figures out Severus is a spy. I'm glad to see Severus taking things further with Hermione. True, she initiated in the medical wing, but he followed through in the corridor. Severus and Hermione are very lucky to have each other at this point, and I'm looking forward to reading more. BTW, I really loved how Hermione was able to convince Severus to drink the potion. As he said, it was very Slytherin.

I totally love what you've written so far, I hope you post more chapters soon, I can't wait to read more!!

I really just want to tell you this is so engrossing. Amazing chapter, can't wait il the next. I'm sorry for not reviewing more often but please, keep it up.

Excellent chapter!  That duel between SS and HP was amazing and Harry is definitely NOT ready for the confrontation with Lord Moldy-pants.   Why was he hesitating so much?  Why can't he concentrate enough?  Something is keeping him back, but what?I'm really looking forward to the next chapter.  Cheers!

That's a very interesting begining of training. And wasn't that a bit of consent from Severus about his feelings for her? Glad we don't have to wait too long for updates.

Only thing I don't like is that it's too short! More, please? ;) I like your characters and the way they interact. Harry could use a lot of growing up....

I've seen your story before but never had time to properly read these chapters through. Finally took time for that and it was well worth it :) Somehow the entire storyline seems very unique yet it's very believable and very intriguing. I love the way you've portrayed Severus and even though I usually don't particularly enjoy stories where Severus has been in love with Lily, here it seems natural. Also, all your characters are wonderfully written - especially your Severus is quite impressive (I did enjoy his show with the books!). I'm very interested in seeing how the story evolves and hope you can update soon :)

I like this.  I'm totally interested in where this is going. Update soon!

I know I'm repeating myself but THIS is too good. I've always loved their arguments and it seems that only Hermione (and Minerva) can have the final word with him. I'd be watching closely for the next.

Wow I'm so impressed by your writting. The way you describe everyone's feeling with such accuracy and particularly the beginning, well this is just so brilliant. After reading this, I found myself re-reading exchanges between Hermione and Severus "sigh" and add just a bit of Mc Gonagall : it's perfect. Now I'm gonna read the next chapter cause I can't wait anymore to know what Harry's going to do.