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Sweet Memories Chapter 8: Seven - The Final Battle, Part II
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Sweet Memories

1: Prologue - In the End

2: One - Meeting Victoria

3: Two - Dervish & Banges

4: Three - A Man Cloaked in Shadows

5: Four - Victoria Kidnapped

6: Five - Sweet Memories

7: Six - The Final Battle, Part I

8: Seven - The Final Battle, Part II

Seven - The Final Battle, Part II

Sweet Memories

Chapter 8 of 8

x_dobby

The final final battle.

Action/Adventure Hogwarts Castle 8,409 Words 8 Chapters Complete
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Seven

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The Final Battle Part II

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Harry watched as his friends and his girlfriend stalked off into the Forest. He wasn’t entirely sure he wanted to do this, but then he thought of Ron—Hermione—Ginny—the rest of the Weasleys—and he knew this was right.

From here, the Forest looked dark and foreboding. Harry remembered Draco Malfoy’s declarations that there were “werewolves” in here in their first year and smiled a bit, shaking his head at the memory. It had been so long ago, but it only seemed like a day or two had passed since he had first entered Hogwarts.

His reminiscing stopped short when he realized what he was about to do—fight the most evil wizard of all time and possibly die for his friends. Voldemort was coming, and there was nothing Harry could do to stop him. It was like one of those dreams where something is chasing you, but your legs don’t move.

A dark cloak suddenly emerged from the darkness. “Hello, Harry Potter,” an icy, high-pitched voice said. “You have been valiant in your struggles, and for that I commend you.”

Harry swallowed as Voldemort came closer still.

“But all that is set aside now, for you are going to die.”

Voldemort drew his wand, and Harry lifted his. “No, Tom,” he replied calmly, wondering where his unshaking voice was coming from. And the “Tom”—Voldemort was going to be pissed.

He was right. The red eyes grew wide, lifting up into the cloak he was wearing. “You dare!”

“I dare, Tom.”

“Avada Kedavra!”

“NO!”

A huge, black figure leapt in front of Harry, whose mouth was frozen open in horror. It only took him a second to realize that it was Snape. Snape! Snape had saved his life.

Voldemort was now staring at the ground in shock, seemingly mesmerized by the sight of his own supporter hurling himself in front of his Killing Curse. The crumpled figure on the ground seemed to hypnotize the Dark Lord. Harry took this as a moment of opportunity.

“AVADA KEDAVRA!”

Another body crumpled to the ground.

Oh, God. Was it really over? Voldemort, defeated? Victory, here?

Yes.

Harry ran into the Forest to find his friends.

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A/n: I know this was a short chapter, but most of my last chapters are… Just go see my other stories, and you’ll realize what I’m talking about. Anyway, did you like it? Hate it? Vomit? Wet yourself with joy? Lemme know. See that little box down there? It’s called the review box! Isn’t that just magical? (No pun.)

xxolivia

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Bentwaters

Ahhhh, the battle has begun.  I like it and can't wait to see what happens.  ^.^

Response from x_dobby (Author of Sweet Memories)

thanks!!look out for the final chapter in a week or so. xxolivia

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Kailin

Curiouser and curiouser!  Can't wait to see what happens next.

Response from x_dobby (Author of Sweet Memories)

thanks!! i'm glad you like it! 'curiouser and curiouser' is ollivander's line, right? i have to reread book 1. :] xxolivia

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Bentwaters

Gee, now who could be both "terrifying and familiar" and "everything about him is black"??? ^.~  hehehe This is just so interesting. 

Response from x_dobby (Author of Sweet Memories)

hee! thanks for being such a faithful reviewer! i'm glad you think it's interesting, too. :] xxolivia

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pottermania

well its pretty clear as to who the characters are...... just cant guess how the story is gonna develop.... u've got me hooked now

Response from x_dobby (Author of Sweet Memories)

haha, thanks! i'm glad you like it! look out for chapter three soon!! xxolivia

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Bentwaters

OOOOOO  That sure is one big cliffie.  I can't WAIT for his explanations.  And of course we all know the lightning bolt birthmark just can't be a coincidence!!! ^.~  *doing the Happy Dance 'cos I dont' have to wait long for the next chappie!!!*

Response from x_dobby (Author of Sweet Memories)

awww, thank you! and, well, i'm juuuuust saying that it COULD possibly maybe be just a coincidence... or not... ;] and you're right, i just submitted the next chapter. thanks for reading!! xxolivia

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Bentwaters

hmmmm  verrrry interesting.  ^.~  Need more clues before I start to try to put everything together.  But I like Patrick and Victoria.  they're cute.  Oh and don't worry about the cheese.  There's always room for a little bit!! =D  hehe

Response from x_dobby (Author of Sweet Memories)

Lol! Thanks! I was a bit worried about the cheese; I feel better now. :] Glad you like it! I just put up Chapter Two and it's in the queue now. xxOlivia

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Bentwaters

OOOO  I'm very intrigued.  Nice "hook" ^.^  I'll be hoping that you'll post the next chapter soon too!!

Response from x_dobby (Author of Sweet Memories)

aw, thank you! i'm glad you liked it :] actually, i was going to go post the new chapter now! so stay tuned! xxOlivia

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Bentwaters

I liked that he began to reminisce (sp?) when he walked into the forest.  And I LOVE that Snape saved him but I would have liked it a little bit more if he had given Severus a "thank you" at least before he took off to find his friends.  But all in all nice.  ^.^  Thanks for finally getting this up here. hehehe (had to tease a little bit!! )

Response from x_dobby (Author of Sweet Memories)

No, it's fine. ;] I will be the first one to admit that I'm a procrastinator. I'm glad you liked it! xxolivia

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Kailin

So, the action will heat up like crazy now...  Hope Harry's headache goes away soon.  *sends cyber-aspirin to Mr. Potter*

Response from x_dobby (Author of Sweet Memories)

cyber-aspirin... HA! (i bet i'm the only person on the planet who would have laughed out loud at that like i did... lol) xxolivia

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Bentwaters

OOOOO neat!!  Altho I must confess I had a little giggle to myself as Severus "summed up" everything.  In my head I heard Inigo (from the Princess Bride) say "Let me 'splain. No there is no time. Let me sum up" But then that's how the brain works without it's first cup of coffee. ^.~  But I will admit that I didn't put 2 and 2 together enough to realize that Elphan and Grace were Ron and Hermione.  Silly me. Can't wait for the next two chapters.

Response from x_dobby (Author of Sweet Memories)

finally!! someone else who is a princess bride fan!!! my friend can do this hilarious imitation of inigo saying, "my name is inigo montoyo. you killed my father. prepare to DIE!!" lol. :]but getting off my princess bride spiel, thanks for the review! yeah, i'm working on chapter 6 now and it's just a little bit done, but i'm prolly going to finish it soon. :] xxolivia

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Aoibheann

Is the character named Elphan  or Elphonse because you have both in this chapter.

Response from x_dobby (Author of Sweet Memories)

eek! i just went back and checked and thanks so much for pointing this out! *grovels at your feet and kisses your shoes* it's supposed to be Elphan, sorry. *cringe cringe cringe* xxolivia

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Bentwaters

Took me a few days to get around to this (RL sure can do that to a person, huh?)  But I'm so glad I finally got the time.  I just love the pace of this.  It clips right along without feeling pushed.  I can't wait to see how Patrick/Harry handles the "lifting of the spell".  Write fast!!! ^.^

Response from x_dobby (Author of Sweet Memories)

thanks so much!! i'm trying to write fast, but school is making me busy... i'm about 1/2way through chapter 6 though, and it's going good. :] xxolivia

Response from Bentwaters (Reviewer)

Well then I suppose I'll be a bit more patient.  ^.~  School is important. 

Response from x_dobby (Author of Sweet Memories)

is it? i never realized. lol ;] stay in school, kids!!

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