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Chocolate Enchantment

1: 1: Making Contact

2: 2: Messengers

3: 3: The Interview

4: 4: Confessions

5: 5: Trouble in Class

6: 6: Secret Meeting

7: 7: Pain Brings Enlightenment

8: 8: Telling His Other Master

9: 9: A Night of Bonding

10: 10: Unknown Curses

11: 11: Softer than Indifference

12: 12: Castle Under Attack

13: 13: The Aftermath

14: 14: The Funeral

15: 15: Confronting the Dursleys

16: 16: Getting Even

17: 17: Face to Face

18: 18: Settling in at the Dursleys

19: 19: The Word Gets Out

20: 20: Searching for RAB

21: 21: Dates and Animagus Unveiling

22: 22: Making Memories

23: 23: Seeking Assistance

24: 24: A Little Shopping

25: 25: Scenting The Truth

26: 26: Facing Off and Finding Space

27: 27: Coming Clean

28: 28: Hell Hath No Fury

29: 29: Wedding Day Disaster

30: 30: Cleaning Up

31: 31: Visiting Godric's Hollow

32: 32: One More Down

33: 33: Adulthood Acknowledged

34: 34: Meeting at The Weasleys

35: 35: Proof of Trust

36: 36: Jealous Rages and Bequests

37: 37: Gathering the Pieces, Making Amends

38: 38: Finding the Comb

39: 39: Injuries and Discoveries

40: 40: Sweet And Sour Revelations

41: 41: Coming To An Understanding

42: 42: Putting On A Show

43: 43: Another Meeting At The Burrow

44: 44: The Search For The Cup

45: 45: Meeting the In-Laws

46: 46: Birthday Surprises

47: 47: The Final Horcrux Falls

48: Chapter 48: Going to Battle

49: 49: Arranging a Trial

50: 50: The Trial

51: Epilogue

Chocolate Enchantment

Vivian B

595 Reviews   |   595 Ratings, 0 Likes, 304 Favorites )

Drama Romance Action/Adventure Potions Under Duress 199,892 Words 51 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape

When the Weasley twins decide Hogwarts could use a little love in times of war, Hermione Granger and Severus Snape get caught in the crossfire—finding themselves pulled together by true love chocolates. As Severus Snape is pushed to fulfill his Unbreakable Vow, the two of them must work together to help the Order and Harry prepare for the final battle. This story was completed prior to the publication of DH and is HBP compliant

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Chapters (51)

Chapter 1: 1: Making Contact

Chapter 2: 2: Messengers

Chapter 3: 3: The Interview

Chapter 4: 4: Confessions

Chapter 5: 5: Trouble in Class

Chapter 6: 6: Secret Meeting

Chapter 7: 7: Pain Brings Enlightenment

Chapter 8: 8: Telling His Other Master

Chapter 9: 9: A Night of Bonding

Chapter 10: 10: Unknown Curses

Chapter 11: 11: Softer than Indifference

Chapter 12: 12: Castle Under Attack

Chapter 13: 13: The Aftermath

Chapter 14: 14: The Funeral

Chapter 15: 15: Confronting the Dursleys

Chapter 16: 16: Getting Even

Chapter 17: 17: Face to Face

Chapter 18: 18: Settling in at the Dursleys

Chapter 19: 19: The Word Gets Out

Chapter 20: 20: Searching for RAB

Chapter 21: 21: Dates and Animagus Unveiling

Chapter 22: 22: Making Memories

Chapter 23: 23: Seeking Assistance

Chapter 24: 24: A Little Shopping

Chapter 25: 25: Scenting The Truth

Chapter 26: 26: Facing Off and Finding Space

Chapter 27: 27: Coming Clean

Chapter 28: 28: Hell Hath No Fury

Chapter 29: 29: Wedding Day Disaster

Chapter 30: 30: Cleaning Up

Chapter 31: 31: Visiting Godric's Hollow

Chapter 32: 32: One More Down

Chapter 33: 33: Adulthood Acknowledged

Chapter 34: 34: Meeting at The Weasleys

Chapter 35: 35: Proof of Trust

Chapter 36: 36: Jealous Rages and Bequests

Chapter 37: 37: Gathering the Pieces, Making Amends

Chapter 38: 38: Finding the Comb

Chapter 39: 39: Injuries and Discoveries

Chapter 40: 40: Sweet And Sour Revelations

Chapter 41: 41: Coming To An Understanding

Chapter 42: 42: Putting On A Show

Chapter 43: 43: Another Meeting At The Burrow

Chapter 44: 44: The Search For The Cup

Chapter 45: 45: Meeting the In-Laws

Chapter 46: 46: Birthday Surprises

Chapter 47: 47: The Final Horcrux Falls

Chapter 48: Chapter 48: Going to Battle

Chapter 49: 49: Arranging a Trial

Chapter 50: 50: The Trial

Chapter 51: Epilogue


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8/10

serket

Well, everything considered I even think Ron took it to well, just hope Harry and the others will let it drop to. Keep up with the good work.

Response from Vivian B (Author of Chocolate Enchantment)

Don't worry, Ron hasn't really let it go, he's just sucking it up for the moment. There will be a bit more drama over her soul mate, never fear.

10/10

aura

Love! Lovelovelove it!

I'm glad that she chose to go to Remus, that he was available and trusted her.  I'm also glad she gave him as much info as she did an was honest with everything she said rather than resorting to half-truths.

This part got me thinking: “So, Hermione? What’s up with Fred and George’s freckles, anyway? You gonna tell us why they’re multi-colored?” Charlie slid an arm behind her on the chair and turned his whole body toward her from his seat to her left. Hermione had to admit to herself that had she not already established a relationship with Severus, and her past interest in Ron not withstanding, she would have a terrible crush on the man. He was hot. “I’d just as soon not get into it tonight.” “I know,” Bill said with a somewhat loopy grin, and Hermione doubted he had heard her response. “Seems they helped her way to a soul mate with their chocolates, and she’s not too happy about it.” “Not Ron or Harry then, huh?” Charlie’s smile became a bit forced. Me thinks that Charlie had a wee bit of a crush as well.

  Bill called over to her, “So, are all their freckles multicolored, or just the ones we can see?” She had to smirk; it was impossible to hold back. “All of them. And they glow in the dark.”    She so could've been in Slytherin.

I'm glad she told this to Ron: “I can’t for the same reason I couldn’t tell you during the school year. And it’s a good thing you don’t intend to kill him, as no person affected by Amoriata has survived more than a few years after their soul mate died. And that few years was plagued with madness. A huge madness and growing need for the lost love. This is a war, Ron, and if one of us dies, the other won’t be far behind.”  Since he's staying the night at the Burrow, I hope he shares this lovely tidbit with the others, especially Molly, and they hex the twins as well.  Ginny and the twins still don't know about this side-effect, and Harry doesn't even know it applies to him yet.

I'm looking forward to the next!

Response from Vivian B (Author of Chocolate Enchantment)

I'm so glad you enjoyed it, I loved writing that scene because it was so ripe for drama and interesting responses. I would so love to respond to something you aid here, but I would far rather keep you guessing. lol

0/10

cattyll

Wonderful story - I check every day to see if a new chapter has been posted.

Response from Vivian B (Author of Chocolate Enchantment)

That's very flattering. If only the Admins didn't have so much work on their hands validating all those other stories too! lol

10/10

andyourbirdcansing

Thanks... =)... I love the story!!!

Response from Vivian B (Author of Chocolate Enchantment)

I'm so glad your enjoying it!

10/10

rlc

Thank you for another fun chapter! 

Response from Vivian B (Author of Chocolate Enchantment)

You're welcome (you all have me grinning hugely about now) Another coming soon.

10/10

jadecadence

well... not of immediate urgency i guess! surely a potions master wouldn't require permission of dumbledore merely an informing?

10/10

jadecadence

awesome cliff-hanger. :) so did severus start brewing the birth control potions yet?

10/10

jadecadence

Even after leaving the school, it seemed
the twins couldn’t help but knick food from the
kitchens.

- nick, not knick.

0/10

lipa

This story is fun to read. I hope you won't stop writing it until it's completed.

0/10

alina612

Horay! Way to go, Hermione! Those Dursley's had that coming! Can't wait to see what happens when they stay there. I'm looking forward to the reunion with Snape too.

10/10

rlc

I loved Hermione giving the Dursleys their due.  This story is turning out quite fun!

10/10

Charmaine

Super chapter, I am looking forward to the next

0/10

Anathema

So little... snifff.Your stoey is like a box of chocolates, you can't just have ONE chapter.Lovely.Now go write more.

10/10

snitchette

I knew that : in each fic Severus and Hermione are soulmate because she is just like him. Sarcastic and so subbtle in the same time. She just hides it much more than he does. This chapter was very funny and as I notice your updates are quicker I really hope it will continue this way. Thanks for the good job.

10/10

Merlinsbeard

Oh my, that chapter was brilliant!  I so want to slap Vernon for the way he has abused Harry, glad to see Hermione is getting that job done for me.

More please. 

0/10

mugglemomof3

ROFLMAO!!!! Great chapter. Poor Hermione has NO ONE to talk too. I can't wait until Sev is back in the picture.

0/10

Gwenog Jones

I'm really glad that Hermione stood up to the Dursleys.  That was quite enjoyable.  I'm anxious for more!

10/10

aura

I loved, loved, loved the confrontation with the Dursleys!!! 

I can't wait to see what Hermione has planned and happens next.    I'm sure the confrontation with the twins is going to be great!  Seeing Severus again will be interesting too.

Thanks for the quick update, I'm looking forward to the next!

10/10

snitchette

I feel sad reading this chapter but it's so beautiful at the same time. Many thanks to you. Keep up the good job.

9/10

Merlinsbeard

Such a sad chapter but beautifully written.

I would like to slap Lav-Lav too. 

Response from Vivian B (Author of Chocolate Enchantment)

Thank you!

0/10

Gwenog Jones

Sadness all around, however, your alternative to cannon seems to at least promise a little happiness for our favorite couple, particularly our leading man.  Nice chapter.

Response from Vivian B (Author of Chocolate Enchantment)

I'm all about happily-ever-afters. We just have to slog through a pile of crap to get there sometimes. lol

10/10

aura

Does anyone else out there really want to smack Lavender after reading this chapter? 

It's good that Hermione was able to shed some light on the potion's side effects to Ginny, I imagine she'll have to sit down and have 'the talk' with Harry at some point too, but it's even better that Ginny agreed to keep Hermione's secret and not ask too many questions.

I wonder who the new secret keeper is...

I'm looking forward to seeing how she manages to meet up with Severus (especially since it's suppossed to happen the following day) I doubt her parents will want to let her out of their sight so soon...unless she didn't tell them which day she was returning, she is a sneaky one.   Also, to finding out what she was so eager to research at the end of the last chap.  It could just be Horcruxes, *snort*just*shakes head at self* or it might be something she wanted for when she next encountered her hubby.  I hope she's kept up with her animagus training, something tells me it'll be helpful, if not needed, soon.

And speaking of soon, *hint hint* I'm looking forward to your next chapter!

Response from Vivian B (Author of Chocolate Enchantment)

I guess you could tell I'm not all that fond of Lavender, but then, neither is Hermione, so it follows well enough. You brought up some good points and questions and I promise an answer to them all . . . eventually. lol

Thanks for the review! 

10/10

sregner

Please hurry with the next chapter...this is such a good story

Response from Vivian B (Author of Chocolate Enchantment)

Thanks!

0/10

Gwenog Jones

Ahh, I knew this time would come--the aftermath, how apropos.  Very sad, but well articulated.  You did a wonderful job depicting the tumultuous emotions.

Response from Vivian B (Author of Chocolate Enchantment)

If only I knew all of my characters in my other stories as well as I know these guys! I guess that's what happens when you live with them in your head for so many years. lol

10/10

Merlinsbeard

Yet again a brilliant chapter.

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