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Potions Under Duress King of Swords
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King of Swords

1: Chapter 1: Significator

2: Chapter 2: Crossing Card

3: Chapter 3: Crowning Card

4: Chapter 4: Place of Promise

5: Chapter 5: Place of Increase

6: Chapter 6: Fate and Spirit Combined

7: Chapter 7: Face to Face

8: Chapter 8: What Lies Beneath

9: Chapter 9: Speak

10: Chapter 10: Seedlings

11: Chapter 11: Shatter

12: Chapter 12: Mirrors in the Dark

13: Chapter 13: Stone and Glass

14: Chapter 14: Ashes to Ashes

15: Chapter 15: Amber and Innocence

16: Chapter 16: Lost and Found

17: Chapter 17: Reunions

18: Chapter 18: The Luminance of Memory

19: Chapter 19: A Cacophony of Sound

20: Chapter 20: Acknowledging that which is in ourselves...

21: Chapter 21: That which is peace, that which is joy...

22: Chapter 22: That which is love, and that which is light...

King of Swords

shefa

440 Reviews   |   440 Ratings, 0 Likes, 125 Favorites )

Angst Romance Psychological Potions Under Duress 84,807 Words 22 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape

It was only after Snape followed her into the neglected shop, moving furtively between the shafts of sunlight that pierced the gloom, that it occurred to him to wonder why, ten years after the Battle of Hogwarts, Hermione Granger was running. And why, in a world with magic, real magic, she should be seeking the counsel of a Muggle Tarot reader.

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Chapters (22)

Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Significator

Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Crossing Card

Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Crowning Card

Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Place of Promise

Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Place of Increase

Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Fate and Spirit Combined

Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Face to Face

Chapter 8: Chapter 8: What Lies Beneath

Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Speak

Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Seedlings

Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Shatter

Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Mirrors in the Dark

Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Stone and Glass

Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Ashes to Ashes

Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Amber and Innocence

Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Lost and Found

Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Reunions

Chapter 18: Chapter 18: The Luminance of Memory

Chapter 19: Chapter 19: A Cacophony of Sound

Chapter 20: Chapter 20: Acknowledging that which is in ourselves...

Chapter 21: Chapter 21: That which is peace, that which is joy...

Chapter 22: Chapter 22: That which is love, and that which is light...


About shefa

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shefa

Member Since 2007  |  24 Stories  |  Favorited by 151  |  73 Reviews Written  |  944 Review Responses

Relatively longtime reader of this OTP, fervent SSHG shipper. 

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http://machshefa.livejournal.com/
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Reviews for King of Swords

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10/10

sbrande

This story was wonderful! Loved every word that was carefully placed.Thanking you for being such a fanatstic writer, and I appreciate the time and effort put into this story.Loves you, Sonia :)

Response from shefa (Author of King of Swords)

*beams...  Thank you, S!  I'm absolutely thrilled that you enjoyed the style and story so much.  It makes me so, so happy to hear that. I really appreciate you taking time to let me know.  *smooches you... 

10/10

braye27

What a great first chapter!  I cannot imagine what Darkness is following Hermione, but clearly Severus seems to know where this reading is going.I'm looking forward to following along.Beth

Response from shefa (Author of King of Swords)

Thanks, Braye!  So glad you're reading.  I'm polishing up Chapter 16 now, so you've got quite a big a head of you.  I hope you continue to enjoy the story!

0/10

mock_turtle

so very very cool.

Response from shefa (Author of King of Swords)

*grins... thank you!

10/10

Muggline

What a powerful chapter. And a universal truth that applies to the world in general: as soon as we fail to see other people as individuals and emphasise with them, we start thinking about "them" and "us" and confrontation ensues. This development is always at the beginning of such things as racism and genocide. Oh, to have such a mirror room for the world...

Response from shefa (Author of King of Swords)

Very true, very true.  A mirror for the world would be a powerful thing, wouldn't it?  Thanks so much for sharing your thoughts.  I'm so glad you're enjoying the story. :)

10/10

Dianne64

Light?  What a hopeful sign.  I am enjoying your story very much!

Response from shefa (Author of King of Swords)

Precisely :)  Thank you so much, and thanks for letting me know!

10/10

ClayPotter

What an amazing chapter! Hard to find words to express my feelings. A brilliant idea to have each one see different versions of themselves in the other mirrors. Most of us are often too critical of ourselves, scrutinizing every minute flaw, selling ourselves short. And our friends and family usually see nothing wrong where we see imperfection and ugliness. When Severus acknowledged the source of its pain, apologized to the mirror and showed it affection, so to speak, it responded by healing itself? Yes? I'm assuming that something similar would have to happen for the humans to heal as well? Acknowledgement, forgiveness, love... Sounds logical to me.Pardon my ramblings and musings. I impatiently await your update.

Response from shefa (Author of King of Swords)

Yes, exactly.  Perception is so important in our experience of ourselves, and others.  You're on the right track here... I'm enjoying your ramblings and musings, don't hesitate to share them if you don't mind!  And thank you :)  chapter 15 is nearly done, should be uploaded soon.

0/10

debjunk

Wow, what will they find?

Response from shefa (Author of King of Swords)

Chapter 14 is up... go see! :D

10/10

RobisonRocket

I am really enjoying this story and the many layers it contains.  It's not every day that I come across a story that I think about at odd times during my day.  I will be looking forward to the next chapter ... and the next, and the next!  What a well-written, captivating story!

Response from shefa (Author of King of Swords)

Thank you so much.  I can't tell you how happy it makes me that the story comes to mind at odd times during your day.  The writing itself is a pleasure, but engaged readers are a joy in and of themselves.  :D

0/10

kimjo2

amazing!  most especially how you wrote about the room's awaking.  thanks you so much for this most wonderfulstory and mucho smoochies

Response from shefa (Author of King of Swords)

Thank you, Kimjo :)  I'm so happy that you're  enjoying this.  *hugs  Chapter 14 is up!

10/10

Redzer

I love this story ! it's keeping me on the edge of my seat.... please update soon. I was so glad to find you updating this story frequently as I remember I read the first 2 chapters earlier last year (2009!!) and wished you would continue to write. It's simply brilliant, and wonderfully written, with such depth of emotion and descriptives. I find myself chuckling everyso often too. I get lost in your words and imagine myself there, even I have shed a few tears too along side Severus' silent inward ones (the depth of emotion) and Hermione's too).... hopefully the Room will be healed too .... I await for your next chapter with glee.

Response from shefa (Author of King of Swords)

Thank you so much,

Response from shefa (Author of King of Swords)

.  It makes me happy to know that you enjoyed the story even when it had so few chapters posted.  I got derailed by life and other writing pressures (like the SSHG exchange), but things have gotten back on track. My hope is to finish this before I have to start writing for the NEXT SSHG exchange :)  Stay tuned, I'm writing fairly rapidly at this point!  Oh, and Chapter 14 just posted today :D

10/10

ClayPotter

That was simply amazing! What a great idea, to ask the Room of Requirement!I'm so glad the others welcomed Severus with open arms, but then again, I always knew they would. ;)

Response from shefa (Author of King of Swords)

Squee!  Thank you :)  They've come a long way in ten years.  Far further than the 7 afflicted...  Thanks for reviewing! Chapter 14 is up!

10/10

blackeyedlily

Outstanding chapter! I loved these lines - “We will have an after, Severus, won’t we?” “If we succeed.” He brushed his lips against hers. “If we survive, hopes for after will be largely responsible, I’m sure.” She smiled and deepened the kiss. A hope, and promise. I felt that hope and promise were strongly felt throughout this chapter. I loved how the other professors took on the challenge, making those afflicted feel less alone. Finally, I've always wondered what the results of the fiendfyre had wrought of the RoR. I like the story you are developing for it. Great job, I eagerly await your next contribution.

Response from shefa (Author of King of Swords)

Ah, yes.  The hope is really seeping in at this point.  Finally.  I'm delighted you're enjoying this -- Chapter 14 just posted and Chapter 15 is nearly complete.  :D

10/10

HBAR

Review quizThe reason that I haven't reviewed this story much is:a)It has been a really hectic time of year- no time to reviewb)I have been really lazyc)This has been so good that I just couldn't stop to reviewd)All of the above If you picked d, you passed.  If you want extra credit, get the next chapter up soon!  I should give specifics of what I've liked so far, but I've  just liked it all!

Response from shefa (Author of King of Swords)

*laughs  ... these are quite excellent reasons.  I'm delighted that you're enjoying it so much.  The next chapter is up!  *grins Thank you for reviewing!  It really does make my day :D

10/10

makaem

Wow,  I can't wait to see what is in the room. 

Response from shefa (Author of King of Swords)

Yay!  Take a look, Chapter 14 just posted :D

10/10

ClayPotter

Yes, staying at Hogwarts is always a good idea.Interesting chapter. I wonder if Severus' or Hermione's patronus will change after all they must go through to find themselves again.I love how much they need each other and how they don't care who is watching. But it is scary to me to see how fragile their relationship is. Part of the Horcrux effect, but frightening, none the less. If they can hold it together through the healing process, they should last forever.

Response from shefa (Author of King of Swords)

They are very fragile, indeed.  It's a mark of their desperation and need that they no longer are wary of who is watching.  If you're interested in patronuses and how they might change, take a look at my Exchange story from last year, "Tree of Life."  That dimension gets thoroughly explored in that story!  Thanks so much for reviewing!  Chapter 14 just posted and Chapter 15 is nearly done.

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