Another good smut chapter - loved it - cannot wait to see how all their activities are going to effect them both.

With the potion seems to have kicked in - Severus is getting attached even though he did not want to.  Hermione has gone from someone he did not desire to his siren over the weekend - like the chapter

Loved the sex scenes in this chapter - oh so very sexy.  Now she is thinking "mine" - this is great.  It is a definite sexy Hermione/Severus fic

Oh you do write a delish Possessive!Jealous!Snape.I see he did learn his lesson about shutting up. XD

Yep was right - Severus carefully built plan is going by the wayside and the sudden thought he had of "mine" - Hermione has him all she has to do now is reel him in

It's not working as Severus has planned...what do they say about carefully laid plans... She is just not getting quite what she needs do to the curse.  The spanking scene was so wicked - loved it

Great smut scene - she was on fire and poor Severus - I do not think he will be able to show restraint with this curse - he is going to be getting more than he bargained for ...

What a curse and poor Hermione.  I like the concept and cannot wait to see what adventure this takes them on.  Poor Snape - yeah right - he has a young thing to provide services rendered to - LOL

I loved the curse you that you came up with - original thinking the the tension between Dumbledoor and Severus was a great way to start the story - good first chapter.

great great great great great......I love this story ---so well done....please please please MORE!

Like Manna from Heaven. If I had a piece of bread I'd sop up this juicy chapter and relish it a second time. Yum!! Thank you, Subversa -- you rock my universa!!

first, thank you SO MUCH for updating so quickly.  i am relieved about the circumstances of the curse.  i was distraught to think that hermione's faith in viktor might have been misplaced - just what she needed on top of everything else! - and was happy that it wasn't so.  poor hermione.  i had thought her situation couldn't get any worse, but you proved me wrong.  it was awful to see her so completely out of control like that.  i am very grateful you resolved it quickly, and so satisfactorily.  at least now severus knows and accepts that he wants her.  hopefully that will make the situation more tolerable. and last just - thank you for this story.  i'm glad it grew a plot and you let it get too big for its britches and run amock, because it's a terrific story.

I LOVED it, but I hope the story isn't completed!! Best chap so far!

finally!!  he's figured it out.  thanks so much for this psudoux PWP where the P never gets in the way of the P.  love it and thanks in advance for further updates.

I think he needs to explain his behaviour to Hermion, as well as giving her apologetic orgasms. :)

Wow, Severus is definitely territorial! But he's also in love, even though he won't acknowledge that fact.  I think the jealousy can be excused.  I thought that was brilliant to make love like that under the Gryffindor Quidditch stands. Severus was able to learn all the Gryffindor plays, assuring that Slytherin will win all their games.

That was a satisfying chapter! At first I thought Viktor was being a gentleman, behaving himself and genuinely trying to help her, but alas, he took advantage of her situation, the bastard. Why did Albus let him get away with that! Wouldn't mind to see Severus or Hermione get even with him on that score. Severus still has some growing up to do, obviously, with his 'MINE!'. But he seems willing to reconsider his behaviour, at last, so there's still hope - of course we all hope for a loving relationship in the end! Please write on!

*sighing in relief* I'm so glad you got the two back together. More! More!

I know that Viktor was helping Hermione but it seemed to me that he was helping himself too.  At least coping a feel until after practice anyway.  lol   Damn that Albus for showing up for Viktor's ass kicking.  He deprives Severus all the fun things in life.  As for the kidish "MINE",  thats his way of staking his claim.  But that will lead to him never knowing if she really wants him or if she is there because he demands it.  And the curse.  She is so going to give him hell about himself.  And finally,  Slythrin wins against Griffindore even if it was be cheating, thats so Slythrin.  lol   I love this story.

Severus can stake his claim on me any day!

Love this chapter.  Feel a little sorry for Viktor - just a little.

More please. 

I know I have seen this before, but it was still a pleasure to have it to read before I went to work.  You are marvelous!  Is 17 ready yet?

Whew! I'm quite relieved--been worrying since the last installment :) I love this story. It's delicious.

I do feel sorry for Viktor, stuck with such a crazy situation -- the Imperio was a clever stopgap in a nasty, desperate sort of way. But the mirror vision and the reunion were just lovely. Especially as Severus had the presence of mind to eavesdrop on Quidditch strategy in the middle of it all. Interesting reaction from Hermione , who must have figured out how Slytherin won.

This story is very good!  I like what you are doing with the characters of Hermione and Snape.  By the way, very sneaky Snape to hear the opposition's planning session!  Brilliant.

This is my favourite chapter yet!!! I like how you described Severus reaction, that's exactly what you can expect of an insecure git :-)Update soon please