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Potions Under Duress The Love You Take
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The Love You Take

1: Chapter 1: The Predicament

2: Chapter 2: The Quagmire

3: Chapter 3: The Morass, Part 1

4: Chapter 4: The Morass, Part 2

5: Chapter 5: Complications

6: Chapter 6: The Confrontation

7: Chapter 7: Acclimatization

8: Chapter 8: Imbroglio

9: Chapter 9: Involvement, Part 1

10: Chapter 10: Involvement, Part 2

11: Chapter 11: Escalation

12: Chapter 12: Confusion

13: Chapter 13: Regrouping

14: Chapter 14: Recovering

15: Chapter 15: Regression

16: Chapter 16: Possession

17: Chapter 17: Confession

18: Chapter 18: Exposure

19: Chapter 19: Recognition

20: Chapter 20: Consternation

21: Chapter 21: Prostration

22: Chapter 22: Manifestation

23: Chapter 23: Manifestation, Part 2

24: Chapter 24: Validation

25: Chapter 25: And, In the End ...

26: Chapter 26: The Love You Take

27: Chapter 27: ... Is Equal To ...

28: Chapter 28: The Love You Make

The Love You Take

Subversa

1,365 Reviews   |   1,365 Ratings, 0 Likes, 978 Favorites )

Drama Angst Romance Erotica Potions Under Duress 153,637 Words 35 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape Viktor Krum

Now Complete! ~Winner Rd 3 Quill to Parchment for Best Fanon Het, Best AU, Best WIP!~ Hermione is cursed by the Death Eaters, and Dumbledore believes Professor Snape is the only one who can help her and keep her safe. Hermione is 18 years old in this story, but she is still a student.

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Chapters (28)

Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Predicament

Chapter 2: Chapter 2: The Quagmire

Chapter 3: Chapter 3: The Morass, Part 1

Chapter 4: Chapter 4: The Morass, Part 2

Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Complications

Chapter 6: Chapter 6: The Confrontation

Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Acclimatization

Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Imbroglio

Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Involvement, Part 1

Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Involvement, Part 2

Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Escalation

Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Confusion

Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Regrouping

Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Recovering

Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Regression

Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Possession

Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Confession

Chapter 18: Chapter 18: Exposure

Chapter 19: Chapter 19: Recognition

Chapter 20: Chapter 20: Consternation

Chapter 21: Chapter 21: Prostration

Chapter 22: Chapter 22: Manifestation

Chapter 23: Chapter 23: Manifestation, Part 2

Chapter 24: Chapter 24: Validation

Chapter 25: Chapter 25: And, In the End ...

Chapter 26: Chapter 26: The Love You Take

Chapter 27: Chapter 27: ... Is Equal To ...

Chapter 28: Chapter 28: The Love You Make


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10/10

ylang_two

Bwha...  some Super (vote Tuesday!) Hot Sex!! {{with a Rebel Yell/she cried/more, more, more!!}} Viktor meant well, and I hope things don't go too badly for him.  He deserves someone who'll love him for him, and not as some second-best, second-rate substitute.

10/10

Shadow

whew. I thought Hermione was going to bear the brunt of Severus' anger.I love how Severus uses the opportunity for a spot of lovemaking to gain information on the opponents!

10/10

Lkmaide

Damn thats good stuff!! Is there more on the way soon?

10/10

KingPig

*drool*

10/10

Mazzy

Great chapter. I'm glad Sev has finally given in to his desires. I also can't help but wonder just how far Krum got in his quest - I know it's unimportant, but since Hermione had to 'lift her hips' it implies that they at least got as far as getting her jeans off, which is of course, not a good sign. I like how Severus is handling it though, as if he knows something went on but he's not going to push her about it, or be a bastard to her for it. And as always, Sev staking his claim (Mine!) is just dead sexy! :)

10/10

mia madwyn

Thank Merlin you got them back together.  I don't think my hart would have survived if you hadn't.

Excellent chapter.  I love how you used Viktor, and how he was truly a good man, despite what Snape thinks.

0/10

IndigoAngel

Wonderful as always, and I'm definitly looking forward to the next chapter.

Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)

Thank you, love!

Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)

Thank you, love!

10/10

livvy6

Well, I'm glad to see Severus didn't go completely psychotic and go ape shit on Hermione. I was scared he was going to call her every filthy name in the book and make her suffer.

That was some hawt sex!  I don't care for the "mine" thing. THey haven't reached that level of emotional and psychological intimacy for him to be pulling that shit - but I've always mainatained that Snape is an emotionaly stunted man. He may be a man with a man's body, but he's no better than a toddler screaming "MINE!"

Now, when he spills his guts and tells her he worships the ground she walks on and isn't afraid to let the world know that he would die for her, then he can say "MINE" all the day long and I'll say Amen to that!

But now--it's just damn scary. But I'm glad to see there is progress, looks like Severus is turning a corner. Man, this fic is good!

Livvy 

Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)

Hi, Livvy.  The "mine" thing is definitely politically incorrect, but as you say, Severus doesn't have a clue about how to behave.  No one has really ever taught him how to be a proper man and how to treat a woman.  There is definitely a Serious Relationship Talk in the offing, though.  Thanks so much for the note!

Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)

Hi, Livvy.  The "mine" thing is definitely politically incorrect, but as you say, Severus doesn't have a clue about how to behave.  No one has really ever taught him how to be a proper man and how to treat a woman.  There is definitely a Serious Relationship Talk in the offing, though.  Thanks so much for the note!

10/10

harrypotterwanter

Well, I am glad that Viktor did not cast the Imperius curse to seduce Hermione. However, I am disappointed that he was going to take advantage of her. Thankfully Hermione stopped him in time. I would have thought she would be better at resisting the Imperius curse after fourth year, since they got lots of practice at that time.Hopefully Severus won't be such a git to Hermione now. Since Viktor now knows about Severus and Hermione, he might decide to let the imformation slip. If so, I hope they deal with the event reasonably well.

Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)

Viktor was definitely not being a perfect gentleman this time around.  They did have practice with the Imperius Curse in fourth year, but Harry was the only one who threw it off consistently.We can't be confidant that Severus won't be a git anymore, but he definitely has given himself permission to feel something for her.I think Dumbledore and Severus convinced Krum to keep his mouth shut about Hermione's situation ...

Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)

Viktor was definitely not being a perfect gentleman this time around.  They did have practice with the Imperius Curse in fourth year, but Harry was the only one who threw it off consistently.We can't be confidant that Severus won't be a git anymore, but he definitely has given himself permission to feel something for her.I think Dumbledore and Severus convinced Krum to keep his mouth shut about Hermione's situation ...

10/10

Lady K

I'm relieved that Viktor didn't turn out to be QUITE the villain I had him pegged for. Now I can only hope that it will occur to Severus that Hermione is more than a possession. Great chapter!

Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)

I think it's reasonable to hope that Severus can come to view Hermione as a person in her own right.  Viktor was bad, if not a complete villain.  Severus really did want to kick his ass!

Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)

I think it's reasonable to hope that Severus can come to view Hermione as a person in her own right.  Viktor was bad, if not a complete villain.  Severus really did want to kick his ass!

9/10

CharmedForce

Another great chapter in this wonderful story! Severus is finally admitting that he wants her, but I worry about whether he will come right out and say it to her. I don't think Hermione will be able to read between the lines and that may cause more problems.

Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)

There's definitely a serious talk in the offing between those two.  I agree that she can't be expected to read his mind ALL the time!  Thanks!

Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)

There's definitely a serious talk in the offing between those two.  I agree that she can't be expected to read his mind ALL the time!  Thanks!

10/10

rlc

Thank you for another lovely chapter.  I'm so glad Severus is finally starting to accept his feelings.  What was Viktor thinking?  I love that Severus was managing to hear the Quidditch strategy.

Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)

I honestly think Viktor thought he was helping her out, considering the state she was in.  It's a big relief for Severus to give himself permission to feel for her.  He was very devious about hearing the game strategy, wasn't he??

Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)

I honestly think Viktor thought he was helping her out, considering the state she was in.  It's a big relief for Severus to give himself permission to feel for her.  He was very devious about hearing the game strategy, wasn't he??

10/10

pickles

I had to read this again.
It was as wonderful as it was the first time around.
thank you for writing marvelous stories.

Today school was canceled so I must try to get some housework done but I'm glad I was able to complete this story. 

10/10

Glykera

Wow. This was a wonderful story, I loved reading it, have no words to describe it properly, but it was amazing. I loved every minute of it. Amazing job writing it. :)

10/10

Glykera

It seems Severus has chosen a bad time to distance himself from hermione, when Viktor is coming back LOL

great chapter ! :)

10/10

Glykera

How can the whole family know what's happening? Does it have something to do with the Nexus? Or is it just because if their knowledge of the Dark Arts?

great chapter!

10/10

Anonymous

Ah, yes. Krum. Hermione will have to get a grip on her defense spells then, if he's going to be anything like Snape's cousin. Harry better hurry up and kill Snakeface. Preferably while Snape and Hermione are in bed! ;-)

9/10

Anonymous

These are beautiful roses. If only my boyfriend would buy me some!

10/10

Anonymous

IMHO, the Voldemort scene was amazing. The simultaneous action upon Severus and Bella. Plus, I can totally see Voldemort and Bella having that sort of relationship. Great job! :-)

0/10

cabepfir

Voldemort should have been defeated by an act of love in canon. Period.

0/10

cabepfir

Durmstrang, A History killed me XD

10/10

Glykera

Well me must give thanks to minuet99 for getting you to include that "goody trail"
lol

Great chapter! :)

0/10

Glykera

Wow, great chapters so far, Its a great fic, and im looking forward to more reading of it :)

I think Severus is not going to last much longer holding true to his "rules" of no attachment, he seems to be realizing it may not be as easy as he had previously thought.

10/10

Iamgin

.....I think I am going to cry.  This is one of the most perfectly wrapped up, glorious endings I've ever read.  And your wonderful grasp of vocabulary has delighted me to no end.  Thank you for this.  Lifetime fan now.

0/10

Elavie34

Wonderful story, new take on getting them together. I can't wait to read more.

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