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Just a Little Bit

1: Objects at Rest

2: Gravity

3: Third Law

4: Forces of Nature

5: Momentum

6: Charge

7: Induction

8: Frame of Reference

9: Resonance

10: Impulse

11: Position

12: Random

13: Simultaneity

14: Fulcrum

15: Resultant

16: Equilibrium

Just a Little Bit

Melenka

214 Reviews   |   214 Ratings, 0 Likes, 179 Favorites )

Mystery/Suspense Drama Romance Erotica Smut Psychological Potions Under Duress 39,490 Words 16 Chapters Complete
Crookshanks Hermione Granger Severus Snape Sirius Black Arthur Weasley Ginevra Weasley Harry Potter Ronald Weasley

Hermione is stuck in a house with two difficult men, one bored cat, a hapless mouse - and a physics problem.

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Chapters (16)

Chapter 1: Objects at Rest

Chapter 2: Gravity

Chapter 3: Third Law

Chapter 4: Forces of Nature

Chapter 5: Momentum

Chapter 6: Charge

Chapter 7: Induction

Chapter 8: Frame of Reference

Chapter 9: Resonance

Chapter 10: Impulse

Chapter 11: Position

Chapter 12: Random

Chapter 13: Simultaneity

Chapter 14: Fulcrum

Chapter 15: Resultant

Chapter 16: Equilibrium


About Melenka

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Melenka

Member Since 2008  |  20 Stories  |  Favorited by 82  |  104 Reviews Written  |  967 Review Responses

Writer of various fiction, prone to putter in the garden, recovering costumer, dedicated wonk.

Author Website
http://pushcomestoshove.blogspot.com/

Reviews for Just a Little Bit

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10/10

braye27

I have no idea what Hermione is working on, but it has Snape worried, and that has me worried.Is she working on some kind of time travel, using M-Theory or branes and parallel universes?  Where did the number 29 come from?  I'm so confused...............But it's a great tale, and I'm enjoying myself , thank you very much.Beth

Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)

Good question.  I will say it's not time travel, but it has as much potential to unravel the world as they know it. I am glad you're enjoying it.  I promise to make things clearer as it goes along.  Can't give away all her secrets at once, after all.  :)

Response from braye27 (Reviewer)

I didn't really think you would tell me answers to my questions... Even I know better than that, but you can't blame a girl for trying. 

Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)

Good question.  I will say it's not time travel, but it has as much potential to unravel the world as they know it. I am glad you're enjoying it.  I promise to make things clearer as it goes along.  Can't give away all her secrets at once, after all.  :)

Response from braye27 (Reviewer)

I didn't really think you would tell me answers to my questions... Even I know better than that, but you can't blame a girl for trying. 

0/10

timestep

Now you have me curious.  I do think Snape has met his sneaky match.

Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)

She did spend six years hanging out with Harry and Ron, so she had plenty of practice sneaking...

Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)

She did spend six years hanging out with Harry and Ron, so she had plenty of practice sneaking...

10/10

HogwartsClassof91

Excellent chapter... love the interaction!  Lovely tension, too.  I'm hooked!

Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)

Thanks!  I know from tension. ;) 

Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)

Thanks!  I know from tension. ;) 

9/10

DawnEB

Ooo, just a fraction more of the mystery about The American revealed, likewise what she's working on.Looking forward to the next update, even if we are only getting crumbs, like the mouse

Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)

What fun would it be if I gave you everything at once?  I promise the crumbs lead somewhere, if not where she thinks.

Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)

What fun would it be if I gave you everything at once?  I promise the crumbs lead somewhere, if not where she thinks.

0/10

sunny33

How does he know something like that has happened?

Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)

After years of watching changes in students, not to mention his experience as a spy - where the slightest shift can mean life or death - he knows something significant happened to her.  He just doesn't know what.

Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)

After years of watching changes in students, not to mention his experience as a spy - where the slightest shift can mean life or death - he knows something significant happened to her.  He just doesn't know what.

10/10

Elisabeth

This is so absorbing. The shifts in POV are very effective, and I'm really enjoying the way each character's inner voice is developing -- each of them has a lot of baggage to contend with. Hermione's research is starting to sound a little ominous, though. Looking forward to the next step.

Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)

Thank you for your comments!  They are a fraught trio, aren't they?  The only thing I'll say about her research is that it gets down to the fundamentals of both magic and science.  That's fairly ominous by itself.

Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)

Thank you for your comments!  They are a fraught trio, aren't they?  The only thing I'll say about her research is that it gets down to the fundamentals of both magic and science.  That's fairly ominous by itself.

0/10

AdrianaGodric

This fic is incredibly intriguing and entertaining. I love the new perspective that is being taken with the classic HM and SS relationship. So other ideas are repeated over and over, but this angle seems to be original and fresh. I can not wait for the next update! Keep up the great work!

Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)

Thank you very much!  I am really enjoying their dynamic - and learning more about physics than I'd thought possible. ;)

Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)

Thank you very much!  I am really enjoying their dynamic - and learning more about physics than I'd thought possible. ;)

9/10

irishredlass

hmm so apparently she had a less than romantic encounter over the summer.  Why does it disturb her so much and why does Severus want her to write of it?

Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)

He wants to see what she'll reveal. Well, that and his cruel streak hasn't abated entirely.

Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)

He wants to see what she'll reveal. Well, that and his cruel streak hasn't abated entirely.

10/10

snitchette

If you make this a threesome I won't blame you. On the contrary I'll gladly approve...  ;)

Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)

I'm not entirely sure that those two men could exist in the same room without trying to make each other miserable. But nothing is impossible.

Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)

I'm not entirely sure that those two men could exist in the same room without trying to make each other miserable. But nothing is impossible.

10/10

sinbad

I agree with Hermione, she should be a little afraid.  Sirius being able to smell her scent on books and what not is a bit creepy.  I wonder if his sense of smell developed because of his animagus being a dog.  Why didn't hearing increase instead, see what I mean?

Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)

Very good question.  The amount of time he spent in dog form had already sharpened those senses.  Absence of light for so long made them even more accute.  He mentions smell in this chapter because it's how he figured out what she's been reading.  And despite his protest regarding his intellect, he's obviously curious about her research.

Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)

Very good question.  The amount of time he spent in dog form had already sharpened those senses.  Absence of light for so long made them even more accute.  He mentions smell in this chapter because it's how he figured out what she's been reading.  And despite his protest regarding his intellect, he's obviously curious about her research.

10/10

HogwartsClassof91

This is wonderful... I am eagerly anticipating more!

Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)

I am so glad you're enjoying the story.  More is on the way.

Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)

I am so glad you're enjoying the story.  More is on the way.

10/10

HogwartsClassof91

Wheeee! Better and better...

Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)

Or better and worse, depending on perspective. ;)

Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)

Or better and worse, depending on perspective. ;)

10/10

HogwartsClassof91

Oooh... I love, love, love this story!!

Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)

Why, thank you!  I'm loving writing it!

Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)

Why, thank you!  I'm loving writing it!

9/10

irishredlass

Hmm I wonder what spell she is working on and what part Sev and Sirius will play?

Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)

Good question.  The answer will unfold over time.

Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)

Good question.  The answer will unfold over time.

10/10

irishredlass

So apparentley Sirius has healed quite well.  This certainly puts Hermione in a pickle.

Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)

Darned near a whole barrel of pickles, actually. :)

Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)

Darned near a whole barrel of pickles, actually. :)

10/10

braye27

What is she going to do with both of those men under the same roof?  How long will they be there?  When will her friends come back?Hermione has a lot on her plate, and the sexual tension grows and grows each day.Can't wait for the next chapter.Beth

Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)

There's not too much time left before the semester begins, so she'd best figure something out soon.  I have faith.  She's Hermione, after all.

Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)

There's not too much time left before the semester begins, so she'd best figure something out soon.  I have faith.  She's Hermione, after all.

10/10

Vampire_Exotica

Ooo yummy.  I'm very pleased to see an update today.  I always like to see my fave stories updated but its even better when they are updated on my birthday!  I consider this a birthday treat. lol :)loving this!

Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)

Happy Birthday!  I am glad I could give you something that makes you happy.

Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)

Happy Birthday!  I am glad I could give you something that makes you happy.

9/10

pythia_delphi

Your story has me hooked. From the quirky summary to the unique plot. Every chapter seems to reveal a little bit of the mystery while promising us that still more secrets abound. I especially like the way you manage to convey the stifling sexual tension in the air, along with their mutual confinement in a claustrophobic house. Well done!

Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)

Thank you very much!  I'm a huge fan of sexual tension. :)  Guess that's sort of obvious.

Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)

Thank you very much!  I'm a huge fan of sexual tension. :)  Guess that's sort of obvious.

10/10

braye27

Sirius seemed not to recognize himself when he looked in the mirror.  From the thoughts he had before he looked in the mirror, I had thought he had "emerged, pale, skeletal and bald, every nerve rubbed raw. The feel of fabric on his chest still made his skin crawl."  But when Hermione saw him, she thought he looked like a young god.I don't know what will happen now that Severus has caught them getting "frisky" in the attic, but it promises to be interesting!Beth

Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)

Sirius spent months in the dark, so he while he knew how he was healing, he had no idea how he looked.  And Severus is very, very displeased.  That's always fun...

Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)

Sirius spent months in the dark, so he while he knew how he was healing, he had no idea how he looked.  And Severus is very, very displeased.  That's always fun...

0/10

pyjamapants

The sexual tension in that house is oppressive! I wonder who will break first.

Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)

That's the question, isn't it?  ;)

Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)

That's the question, isn't it?  ;)

0/10

sunny33

Which of the three is going to give in to their desires first?

Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)

Funny thing about triangles - they create such interesting dances. Anything can happen and probably will.

Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)

Funny thing about triangles - they create such interesting dances. Anything can happen and probably will.

10/10

faeriebell

Interesting chapter in a really good story, so far! Enjoyable, I like the tension. Looking forward to the repercussions of Severus catching them in the act!

Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)

It's going to be one heck of a dance, considering that they're all in the house for lack of other options at the moment.  I'm glad you are enjoying it.

Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)

It's going to be one heck of a dance, considering that they're all in the house for lack of other options at the moment.  I'm glad you are enjoying it.

10/10

Anonymous

Wow.  That was amazing.  The dichotomy of Hermione and Sirius's opinions on what he'd become were fascinating.  I anxiously await the next entry.

Author's Response: Thanks!  More is on the way.

10/10

Anonymous

A great start to what promises to be a fascinating story.  Well written and a joy to read.

Author's Response: *blush*  Thank you. 

9/10

serpantstongue

wow i wasnt expecting that. maybe the time that sirius spent recovering from the veil left him like a grown-up newborn? since he's apparently in his youth now. what was that stuff that they had to keep feeding him? i'm sorta apprehensive about him and hermione. and i know that snape will be pissed. i wonder what dumbledore will say now that sirius can venture out of his room now? Great story! i'm glad that you're updating it pretty regularly.

Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)

Thanks!  I'm glad you're enjoying it.  No one really knows what happend to Sirius, but the price he paid for coming back was returned with interest in the restoration of youth.  I'm fairly sure he wouldn't recommend it.  And Snape is already pissed - nothing new about that.

Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)

Thanks!  I'm glad you're enjoying it.  No one really knows what happend to Sirius, but the price he paid for coming back was returned with interest in the restoration of youth.  I'm fairly sure he wouldn't recommend it.  And Snape is already pissed - nothing new about that.

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