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Potions Under Duress This Present Darkness
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This Present Darkness

1: The Untold Past

2: Remembrance

3: Confrontation

4: At Home

5: Conversations

6: Revelations

7: Decisions

8: Discoveries

9: Hogsmeade

10: Explanations

11: Redemption

12: Return

13: Doubts

14: Hope

This Present Darkness

kizzy7

236 Reviews   |   236 Ratings, 0 Likes, 178 Favorites )

Mystery/Suspense Drama Angst Romance Potions Under Duress 45,404 Words 14 Chapters WIP
Hermione Granger Original Character Severus Snape Harry Potter Ronald Weasley Luna Lovegood

Hermione is forced to consult a bitter Snape on a mysterious potion... Rating is for later chapters. Completely AU.

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Chapters (14)

Chapter 1: The Untold Past

Chapter 2: Remembrance

Chapter 3: Confrontation

Chapter 4: At Home

Chapter 5: Conversations

Chapter 6: Revelations

Chapter 7: Decisions

Chapter 8: Discoveries

Chapter 9: Hogsmeade

Chapter 10: Explanations

Chapter 11: Redemption

Chapter 12: Return

Chapter 13: Doubts

Chapter 14: Hope


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I'm a sucker for happy endings. 

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Reviews for This Present Darkness

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10/10

sinbad

Oh God, how sad.  Surely he will be freed after all of this?

Response from kizzy7 (Author of This Present Darkness)

But who would believe him? Pretty much just Hermione. But there is definitely more in store for them both!

10/10

sinbad

Interesting that you brought Ron and his family into the picture.  I really didn't expect it.

Response from kizzy7 (Author of This Present Darkness)

A little snippet from her past made her feel more guilty, I think. And I love writing Luna!

10/10

sinbad

Well, well, well, maybe I wasn't too far off after all.  Great chapter I loved the things that were said, but not as much as what wasn't said.  If that makes sense.

Response from kizzy7 (Author of This Present Darkness)

Completely makes sense. The things that were not said will continue to plague them!

10/10

sinbad

The only theory I have is someway, somehow Severus will be free and he and Hermione will hook up.  Maybe is a delusion as opposed to a theory.

Response from kizzy7 (Author of This Present Darkness)

Oh, not delusion, as I am sure you are aware now!

10/10

sinbad

Great chapter, although it appears to be heavily influenced by Silence of the Lambs.

Response from kizzy7 (Author of This Present Darkness)

Now, who doesn't love a dose of the good doctor and his lovely FBI trainee?!

10/10

sinbad

Ouch evil cliff hanger... there has to be more to Severus killing nine people than because he 'wanted to'.

Response from kizzy7 (Author of This Present Darkness)

~chuckles~ Oh, you will see...

10/10

sinbad

Damn, Severus didn't escape going to prison.  Perhaps he can be paroled...OK you have me thinking already.  Good thing there's more chapters to read.

Response from kizzy7 (Author of This Present Darkness)

Hello,

Response from kizzy7 (Author of This Present Darkness)

! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

9/10

Anonymous

Beautiful chapter. I hope so that there is some solution for them, and something they can do for Severus!

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm very happy you found it beautiful, as that is what I was hoping to convey through the lemons. More will be up soon.

10/10

sinbad

Boy they can't seem to get their 'one night' straight.  I'm still hoping for 'many nights'.  I'm a closet romantic I guess.  lol

Response from kizzy7 (Author of This Present Darkness)

Me too! SSHG forever and ever...

8/10

feisanna

oh...I can't quite decide who the baddie is... and I desperatly want to know who controlled Snape to make him commit the murders...

Response from kizzy7 (Author of This Present Darkness)

More about the baddie in the next chapter! Thanks very much. Glad you are enjoying! And, as we all know now, Snape made the deliberate choice to murder Emma Rochester, and then he was Stunned by an unknown opponent who presumably killed the other eight. Thanks,

Response from kizzy7 (Author of This Present Darkness)

!

10/10

Muggline

Oh, but you sure won't let him return to Azkaban, will you?

Response from kizzy7 (Author of This Present Darkness)

Now, am I that evil? Maybe, maybe not! Next chapter will be up soon. Thanks,

Response from kizzy7 (Author of This Present Darkness)

, as always!

10/10

Nessa

An update!!!That was such a lovely chapter. Please don't make him go back , he's not a monster. But slightly worried that he will have to. Look forward to more.

Response from kizzy7 (Author of This Present Darkness)

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Response from kizzy7 (Author of This Present Darkness)

Thanks,

Response from kizzy7 (Author of This Present Darkness)

! More will be up soon, and you will find out next chapter if he goes back or not!

0/10

cmwinters

Yay an update!(Can you loan me your muse and some spare time?  I haven't updated my WIP in forever!) ;)

Response from kizzy7 (Author of This Present Darkness)

My Muse often runs off (I'm assuming with the pool boy); she's a fickle, impatient thing. LOL! But, I will send you good thoughts! And now I am lured by the thought of your stories. SSHG? (because I am an addict). Must go check them out.

Response from cmwinters (Reviewer)

The WIP I haven't updated in a year is going to be SS/HG "eventually", yes.  But Snape's currently a fifth-year in that story, so Hermione isn't even born yet. If I were you, I wouldn't hold my breath. ;)

Response from kizzy7 (Author of This Present Darkness)

Wow, quite the endeavor you have undertaken! When I first discovered fanfic (after I finished DH), I thought, 'I am going to write Snape's history.' I even started it. But. I have nowhere near the patience to write something that huge. Excellent that you have started, and, who knows, you may get some time eventually!

10/10

joyfulheart

What will she do without him when he goes back to prison? I just don't see how they can get him out now as he truely is a murderer. I love the intensity of their love here.

Response from kizzy7 (Author of This Present Darkness)

"The intensity of their love." *grin* Thanks so much, that was exactly what I was going for! And what will they do without each other? More soon.

10/10

debjunk

Oh, finally!  You updated!  I've been wondering where this story went.  Their admissions of love were so beautiful, and Hermione's worry about him leaving... very heartbreaking.So glad they finally got to this point where she knows everything and he can express himself.

Response from kizzy7 (Author of This Present Darkness)

I know! I've been so horrible about both writing AND reading. I'm way behind, but hopefully this week I can catch up with everything. Thanks, deb! And finally they are on the same page. Now, they have Azkaban and a crazy murderer to deal with...

0/10

shellsnapeluver

Speakin of teases'... yes, Kizzy darling. I am speaking of you. MOOOOOREEEEE!!!! What's gonna happen??? Will he go back to prison? NOOOOOOO!!!! And I really liked the part when he says that he doesn't want her pity and then she ASKS what he wants then... That is the first time I have read that. Yes, I have read, and maybe even wrote, I don't want your pity. And then no one asks what he wants then. And she did and that THAT is a first, and I really liked that.

Her forgiveness. Lovely.

*hugs*

Response from kizzy7 (Author of This Present Darkness)

Me? A tease?? *grins* Maybe a little. Thank you very much, Shell! And all he needed was her forgiveness. Now, what will happen next?! *chuckles evilly* You will see. Thanks, dear! *hugs back*

8/10

feisanna

oooh....just found your story and can't wait to keep reading - but this chapter as a Silence of the Lambs feel to it.  Very Hannibal and Clarice

Response from kizzy7 (Author of This Present Darkness)

*grins* Ah, the good doctor and his lovely FBI trainee. A 'Silence' feel is exactly what I was going for! Thanks so much.

10/10

MollysSister

Nice job on the hot sexxors! I am wondering why Severus was spelled unconscience after the murder of Emma Rochester. That does not seem consistant with something Voldyshorts would do. Are you being sneaky Miss Kizzy?

Response from kizzy7 (Author of This Present Darkness)

*looks about innocently* Me? Sneaky? Oh, you will see. :) Thanks, Molly!

10/10

MollysSister

Good heavens Severus is really in a pickle! Who is going to beleive him that he lied about killing 8 people? I wish they would have just aperated to Barbados and left the war to Harry.

Response from kizzy7 (Author of This Present Darkness)

Yup, they totally should of Apparated to Barbados, completely agree with you!

0/10

rhiannon113

You're an absolute genius! *cheers* What a lovely way for them to come together again, sweet yet never over the top. Thanks for giving him a bit of snark in bed, it's just sad when he goes all hearts and flowers...

Response from kizzy7 (Author of This Present Darkness)

Oh, thanks so much, rhia! This was the absolute first smut scene I've ever written. I was worried it would be too out of character, or something. *grin*

0/10

sunny33

See what happens when you are open and honest.  Lots of good stuff! :)

Response from kizzy7 (Author of This Present Darkness)

Yes! lots of goodies! Hopefully, the both learn that particular lesson! Thanks so much.

0/10

snapefan2007

They have to run away together or she has to get him a new trial or something!  they have to be together!

Response from kizzy7 (Author of This Present Darkness)

*Grins* Indeed, they do. I agree with you... now, we'll see! ;-)

0/10

Terab

Well I'm glad Hermione knows the truth and they are finally together, but what happens now??  Hope we don't have to wait long to find out.

Response from kizzy7 (Author of This Present Darkness)

I promise that I will faithfully update this 'til the end, dear. Thanks so much!

0/10

kimjo2

*sigh* delicious!  thanks so much

Response from kizzy7 (Author of This Present Darkness)

Thanks! The absolute first lemony scenes I have ever written, ever! Glad you enjoyed.

10/10

makaem

Don't let him go back to Azkaban, please.

Response from kizzy7 (Author of This Present Darkness)

Oh, you will find out next chapter if he does or not! Which, I faithfully promise to update soon. Thanks,

Response from kizzy7 (Author of This Present Darkness)

!

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