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Potions Under Duress The Runner
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The Runner

1: Chapter One: Hidden Assets

2: Chapter Two: Admiring the View

3: Chapter Three: Drama Queen

4: Chapter Four: Temperature Rising

5: Chapter Five: Fever

6: Chapter Six: Healing

7: Chapter Seven: Teasing

8: Chapter Eight: Research

9: Chapter Nine: Complications

10: Chapter Ten: Speculation

11: Chapter Eleven: Complications

12: Chapter Twelve: Commitment

13: Chapter Thirteen: Relaxation

14: Chapter Fourteen: Retribution

The Runner

sunny33

557 Reviews   |   557 Ratings, 0 Likes, 433 Favorites )

Humor Romance Epilogue What Epilogue? Potions Under Duress 36,698 Words 14 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape Harry Potter Poppy Pomfrey Irma Pince Minerva McGonagall Pansy Parkinson Ronald Weasley Molly Weasley Ginevra Weasley Mr. Granger Mrs. Granger Blaise Zabini Draco Malfoy

Who is the mysterious, early-morning runner out on the Quidditch pitch? Hermione discovers more than just his identity.

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Chapters (14)

Chapter 1: Chapter One: Hidden Assets

Chapter 2: Chapter Two: Admiring the View

Chapter 3: Chapter Three: Drama Queen

Chapter 4: Chapter Four: Temperature Rising

Chapter 5: Chapter Five: Fever

Chapter 6: Chapter Six: Healing

Chapter 7: Chapter Seven: Teasing

Chapter 8: Chapter Eight: Research

Chapter 9: Chapter Nine: Complications

Chapter 10: Chapter Ten: Speculation

Chapter 11: Chapter Eleven: Complications

Chapter 12: Chapter Twelve: Commitment

Chapter 13: Chapter Thirteen: Relaxation

Chapter 14: Chapter Fourteen: Retribution


About sunny33

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sunny33

Member Since 2008  |  129 Stories  |  Favorited by 689  |  8,383 Reviews Written  |  8,235 Review Responses

Hello all,  I am a 53 year old from NZ.  Although SSHG is how I started and still my main pairing, I'll give pretty much any pairing a try, whether it be reading or writing.  Sev and Herms need a bit of variety at times. ;)

Author Website
http://sunnythirty3.livejournal.com

Reviews for The Runner

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10/10

EleanorRigby

Ahhh, very nice, and I'm so glad they have the support of others--I like Helpful Harry, he's ever so much more appealing than Hateful Harry :)  And please tell me the next chapter will be up soon, because I'm barely hanging on to this huge cliff by my fingernails!!  Great job as always!!!

Response from sunny33 (Author of The Runner)

It will be soon, keep on hangin'! :)

8/10

Clairvoyant

Great story, Sunny.  I love the build up.  It's nice to have a sympathetic Harry.

Response from sunny33 (Author of The Runner)

Thank you for your review! :)

10/10

bournespeed

What a tease, poor Sev being left in that state.  And poor me having to wait for the lemons...lol..   Enjoying greatly

Response from sunny33 (Author of The Runner)

Thanks! :)

10/10

Gardengirl

Yum! Oh, the waiting... but I'm sure it will all be worth it. Harry on teasing - very funny! Nicely done. Thanks

Response from sunny33 (Author of The Runner)

Thank you too! :)

10/10

ClayPotter

Great job, sunny. I can hardly wait for chapter 8.

Response from sunny33 (Author of The Runner)

Thanks, Clay. :)

10/10

sregner

Do not leave us hanging (tee hee) for very long please.  We too are all waiting.....

Response from sunny33 (Author of The Runner)

The next two chapters are just being polished.  Won't be long. :)

10/10

makaem

That was a cruel place to leave us!

Response from sunny33 (Author of The Runner)

Not for too long, I promise. :)

10/10

hogwartsgirl007

Well that was a kick in the arse.you stopped at the good part!!!!
Oh ya.....BAHAHAHAH to harry being all hot and bothered!!! Fantabs work as always and I can't wait for the smut!!!!

Response from sunny33 (Author of The Runner)

Muhahaha! Smut? Don't know anything about that... *looks around furtively with fingers crossed* ;)

0/10

mom7knox

beautiful job with this chapter - it is easy to get lost in the humor, but your descriptive word choice is excellent and really add a depth to your characterizations - what a great job you are doing with this story - thanks so much for sharing your work!!!

Response from sunny33 (Author of The Runner)

Thank you for your kind words. :)

10/10

gabi1791

Do you know how frusrating it is to find this gem of a story and to read it through from beginning to end in one go, only to find it ending HERE????? I want more, and I want it soon!!!Great work!gab

Response from sunny33 (Author of The Runner)

LOL.  It's coming, gab!  :)

10/10

FlittterKat

You are my present and my future, Hermione. Only you.”

Awww, I love it. Thank you Sunny for the wonderful story. Also, thanks to Robbi for pushing her to post.

Response from sunny33 (Author of The Runner)

Thanks, Flittter! :)

8/10

Sevvy

Now I won't be able to concentrate for the rest of the day, thinking about this!  You really shouldn't leave us all in such a state of anticipation! If I'm being honest though, I'm not too sure I'm keen on everyone knowing about them; I personally thought it was better to have their relationship as a secret (more exciting that way!)  Knowing that Severus is such a private person I don't think he'd want to be so 'open' about things.  I also can't see SS kissing HG like that in front of others (especially Harry) - it seems very out of character to me. (Sorry, I hate giving critisism - I don't mean it in a negative way -  and it's just my own personal opinion in any case.)  Otherwise this is a really good story and I simply can't wait for the next chapter now! :-)

Response from sunny33 (Author of The Runner)

Response from sunny33 (Author of The Runner)

, my dear, I love that you are honest.  Remember, only Minerva, Poppy, Irma, and Harry know.  Everyone else is in the dark.  And, yes, it was OOC for him to deliberately kiss Hermione in front of Harry, but the payback was that it embarrassed the hell out of him - and now he knows, he can jolly well make himself useful. *rubs hands together evilly*  Thanks for reviewing. :)

Response from Sevvy (Reviewer)

So glad that you didn't take offence at my comments!  I always told myself (when I first started reviewing on fanfiction sites) that I would never offer up critical comments (working on the old adage 'if you can't say something nice, don't say anything at all' I suppose!) So I guess it's testiment to how good I think your story is that I felt confident enough to express my views honestly!It simply doesn't take away the fact that I love this story! :-)

10/10

luvsev

Great chapter, and a nice, little cliffhanger to boot. =)

Response from sunny33 (Author of The Runner)

Thanks, luv! :)

0/10

rachow

Ooh!  I'm so excited.  It's a little strange for them not to have to sneak around, and takes away a little of the excitement, but it's good to know that no one will get into horrible trouble if they're caught.  I hope we don't have to wait long for the next chapter!

Response from sunny33 (Author of The Runner)

Oh, they will still sneak around a bit.  Only Minerva, Poppy, Irma and Harry know, and they want it to stay that way. :)

10/10

neelix

Oooh, anticipation is always the best form of foreplay! Nice update.

Response from sunny33 (Author of The Runner)

Thanks,

Response from sunny33 (Author of The Runner)

.  :)

10/10

snitchette

Awwwwwww That's such a sweet image. I hope she'll get better soon.

Response from sunny33 (Author of The Runner)

With the care she is getting?  Of course she will! ;)

10/10

snitchette

Oh but that is so much a good reason to miss sunrise. I hope next chapter will bring more  hem passionate moments like that. *wink*

Response from sunny33 (Author of The Runner)

Read on and find out... :)

10/10

snitchette

I can't help but giggle to this as lovely and funny as it is. I really enjoy the story immensely, so I'd like to thank whoever it is that gives you the idea and support you along the writing process.

Response from sunny33 (Author of The Runner)

Thanks for reviewing! :)

10/10

snitchette

Lucky her! I'd love to explore Snape-err possibilities... *innocent*

Response from sunny33 (Author of The Runner)

LOL. I'll bet you would! ;)

10/10

snitchette

Who knew Severus had this fine body hidden underneath all those clothes *snickers* I long to read next chapter, which I'm gonna do right now.

Response from sunny33 (Author of The Runner)

I think we all suspected! :)

10/10

BrenaMarie

How awesome that they have two allies already!  Its so great to see Harry being supportive and actually wanting to help.  I can't wait to see how Minerva takes it.  Please update soon!  Much Love ~ Brena

Response from sunny33 (Author of The Runner)

Thanks for the review, Brena! :)

10/10

FlittterKat

An understanding Harry, lovely. So glad to see the devotion Severus has for Hermione. I didn't expect Harry to see it. But I'm not looking forward to Ron's reaction. Thanks for the update, loved it.

Response from sunny33 (Author of The Runner)

Ron.  Well.  He will be... interesting...  ;)

10/10

Persevero

Aaaah.  I am totally in love with this story. The romantic implications of passing notes and sharing books in the library are greatly underestimated in my opinion!

Response from sunny33 (Author of The Runner)

Only a bibliophile would understand.  :)

10/10

Hanagasume

Loving this!I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!Angela~~

Response from sunny33 (Author of The Runner)

LOL Thanks, Angela! :)

10/10

lyn_f

/dabs eyes with a handkerchiefSo so sweet!  I love how Hermione is getting encouragement from Harry and Madam Pince, and how Poppy fully condoned Severus' care during Hermione's illness.So so wonderful!/melts into a puddle of goo

Response from sunny33 (Author of The Runner)

Don't melt, dear.   We need you on Saturday nights!  :)

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