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Potions Under Duress The Runner
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The Runner

1: Chapter One: Hidden Assets

2: Chapter Two: Admiring the View

3: Chapter Three: Drama Queen

4: Chapter Four: Temperature Rising

5: Chapter Five: Fever

6: Chapter Six: Healing

7: Chapter Seven: Teasing

8: Chapter Eight: Research

9: Chapter Nine: Complications

10: Chapter Ten: Speculation

11: Chapter Eleven: Complications

12: Chapter Twelve: Commitment

13: Chapter Thirteen: Relaxation

14: Chapter Fourteen: Retribution

The Runner

sunny33

557 Reviews   |   557 Ratings, 0 Likes, 433 Favorites )

Humor Romance Epilogue What Epilogue? Potions Under Duress 36,698 Words 14 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape Harry Potter Poppy Pomfrey Irma Pince Minerva McGonagall Pansy Parkinson Ronald Weasley Molly Weasley Ginevra Weasley Mr. Granger Mrs. Granger Blaise Zabini Draco Malfoy

Who is the mysterious, early-morning runner out on the Quidditch pitch? Hermione discovers more than just his identity.

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Chapters (14)

Chapter 1: Chapter One: Hidden Assets

Chapter 2: Chapter Two: Admiring the View

Chapter 3: Chapter Three: Drama Queen

Chapter 4: Chapter Four: Temperature Rising

Chapter 5: Chapter Five: Fever

Chapter 6: Chapter Six: Healing

Chapter 7: Chapter Seven: Teasing

Chapter 8: Chapter Eight: Research

Chapter 9: Chapter Nine: Complications

Chapter 10: Chapter Ten: Speculation

Chapter 11: Chapter Eleven: Complications

Chapter 12: Chapter Twelve: Commitment

Chapter 13: Chapter Thirteen: Relaxation

Chapter 14: Chapter Fourteen: Retribution


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sunny33

Member Since 2008  |  129 Stories  |  Favorited by 689  |  8,383 Reviews Written  |  8,235 Review Responses

Hello all,  I am a 53 year old from NZ.  Although SSHG is how I started and still my main pairing, I'll give pretty much any pairing a try, whether it be reading or writing.  Sev and Herms need a bit of variety at times. ;)

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http://sunnythirty3.livejournal.com

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0/10

Amathya

rofl the shade of tom riddle indeed

Response from sunny33 (Author of The Runner)

Would be a spooky date! :)

10/10

Mooncat

Oh, poor Severus! You're absolutely right - Ron IS a prat. Loving this story, ma'am - thank you very much for posting it. Cat

Response from sunny33 (Author of The Runner)

Hehe, poor old Ron. The bad guy again.  We just can't help ourselves! :)

10/10

Nessa

Ron what a git! Poor Severus, can he never be happy . He better not call it all off! Update soon please!!

Response from sunny33 (Author of The Runner)

It would take more than Ron being a git to influence Severus! :)

Response from Nessa (Reviewer)

Hexing his bollocks off will do then

10/10

BrenaMarie

What an amazingly idiotic a**hole!  I swear she was too easy on him when he came pounding on that door!  I seriously would have hexed the living crap out of him.  And the whole telling his mum...OMG!!  I know I'm babbling but that's just insane!  I hope Hermione can settle Severus down.  I'm seriously afraid that after the howler he's not going to want to be with her because it made him feel so bad for her still being a student and all.  Argh!  Stupid Ron!!!  Please update again soon!  Cheers!  ~Brena

Response from sunny33 (Author of The Runner)

Everyone just loves Ron, don't they? :)

10/10

Prof M McGonagall

Oh, my!  Ron really messed up by owling Molly.  And what the heck was she thinking?  Molly ought to know better than to send a howler to a professor in front of the whole school!I don't know whether to hope that they will all get over this and be friends, or that Severus hexes the bejeebees out of her before they get over it and be friends.  :-)And I love Hermione's bossiness after Ron leaves.  There will be no further interruptions.  And get those pants off!That made me laugh, but she's a bit scary, isn't she?Well, I hope that Chapter 10 will be coming soon.  Once again, well done, sunny!

Response from sunny33 (Author of The Runner)

Hermione on a mission = always scary! :)

Response from Prof M McGonagall (Reviewer)

So, I was thinking... Didn't Ron tell Molly that Minerva approved?  Because if Molly crossed Minerva, then Minerva can do the hexing. 

Response from sunny33 (Author of The Runner)

She will have something to say on the matter! :)

0/10

kimjo2

poor severus!  a howler from molly is not to be sneezed at!  love hermione and severus together in your story.  thanks so much

Response from sunny33 (Author of The Runner)

Thanks, kimjo! :)

10/10

snitchette

It was time they had a bit of privacy. I'm sure ot was worth the trouble of the morning. I hope Severus will not get "cold feeted" after that.

Response from sunny33 (Author of The Runner)

More likely hotheaded! :)

10/10

luvsev

Grr... Ron is such a prat. To me, it doesn't matter if he cares or not; he still had no right to drag his mother in on a very private matter that wasn't even his business. Great chapter, dear. I look forward to seeing Hermione try to smooth over the mess that Ron caused.

Response from sunny33 (Author of The Runner)

Shows how mature he is when he has to run to mummy! :)

10/10

neelix

lol... true love doesn't run smoothly does it!

Response from sunny33 (Author of The Runner)

That would be boring... :)

10/10

FlittterKat

Oh, that stupid ass Ronald Weasley. Hermione should have given him the ears of a donkey since he acts like one. ~grrr~

Anyway, lovely chapter, I hope Severus is okay. Maybe Hermione should give Molly a taste of her own medicine. Either that or they could share matching ears! LOL

Response from sunny33 (Author of The Runner)

Now that's a thought... :0

10/10

debjunk

No, I think Harry's wrong here.  Ron deserved every word Hermione threw at him, plus a few hexes and possibly an Unforgivable.  And after she appeases Severus, she needs to get permission to Floo Molly and punch her out!  Great chapter, you really got me riled!!!I did like Ron's initial tirade.  Very funny, and the inbetween part... lovely.

Response from sunny33 (Author of The Runner)

Hehe.  Poor Harry, caught in the middle! :)

0/10

RhiannonAvon

Stupid Weasleys, particularly Ron.  You can just see him going crying to his mom when something doesn't go his way.  If I were Hermione, I'd have let him have it too.Looking forward to the next chapter. =)

Response from sunny33 (Author of The Runner)

Thanks, Rhiannon! :)

10/10

MollysSister

A howler from Molly? Not the best introduction to Hermione's "friends" is it? Methinks Severus will need some cossetting.

Response from sunny33 (Author of The Runner)

I know just the girl to do it! :)

10/10

kizzy7

Oh, RON!! Telling his mother!!!! *shakes head* Although... that does definitely seem like something he would do. Oh, so glad the losing virginity went off well. Hope Sev is fine, am sure he will be with Hermione!

Response from sunny33 (Author of The Runner)

Ron= no idea  :)

10/10

Sampdoria

I am trilled with this update:-) Not that I in any way think Ron had any business doing what he did, but because of the reaction from Hermione and Severus. Way to often when there is a confrontation between Hermione and Ron and Harry, she is presented as rather weak, trying to placate their immature feelings rather than telling them exactly whats going on, how little it really is any of their business and to butt out. Nope, you solved this very well and in quite the entertaining way:-)) Molly deserves to get a howler or three from Hermione, Severus and Minerva. The first two for obvious reasons, and Minerva because Molly insulted one of her employees in front of his colleguas and all the students!

Response from sunny33 (Author of The Runner)

Thanks

Response from sunny33 (Author of The Runner)

.  I used your idea of a Hermione sending Molly a Howler and credited you in the A/n for the next chapter! :)

0/10

snapefan2007

Ron and Molly are both idiots, that's all there is to it.  can't wait to read more!

Response from sunny33 (Author of The Runner)

LOL.  :)

10/10

Myst

I did NOT see THAT coming (the howler).  Oh, how mortifying.  I'm afraid things will be bad before they get better.  Oh, my.

Response from sunny33 (Author of The Runner)

Hehe.  Gotcha!  :)

10/10

ClayPotter

I can imagine what Snape will say and perhaps do to Ron when next they meet in private!I just hope he stands his ground and doesn't have any regrets or second thoughts. But isn't "angst" Snape's middle name?

Response from sunny33 (Author of The Runner)

I suspect Ron will be avoiding that possiblity! :)

0/10

ginnylovesharry07

wow ron was really a git, owling his mum like that.can't wait to see severus' reaction.

Response from sunny33 (Author of The Runner)

Yep.  He shows True Git!  :)

10/10

sregner

Goodness!  I can hardly wait for the next chapter.....

Response from sunny33 (Author of The Runner)

Thanks! :)

10/10

Hanagasume

Haha! Deflowerment at last!But f?@&%>!!!! at Ron for being a dunderhead!They just cant get a break, can they?Looking forward to the next chapter!Angela~~

Response from sunny33 (Author of The Runner)

Deflowering is such a lovely word, don't you think? :)

0/10

rhiannon113

Excellent use of the dreaded Howler!!! I feel horrible for poor Severus. No one would like to have their sex-life put over the A.P. wire, so to speak. I hope he jinxes Ron into oblivion. Grrrr. I am glad they were able to complete the task. *evil grin*

Response from sunny33 (Author of The Runner)

They are definitely "task-oriented" people! :)

10/10

arianwen

Ron should thank his lucky stars he got off with a mere telling off ... he thoroughly deserves to have his bollocks hexed off as Hermione threatened. How DARE he presume to tell her who she should or shouldn't be with ... and Molly was no better. Hermione is a grown woman perfectly capable of making her own choices, thankyouverymuch! They mean well, but they are just WAY too judgemental for their own good. At least Harry has the good sense and heart to put Hermione's happiness above his own person opinions!*Ahem*Superb writing as always, my dear!

Response from sunny33 (Author of The Runner)

Here, have some hot chocolate.  Feel better? Thanks for the review,

Response from sunny33 (Author of The Runner)

! :)

10/10

gabi1791

I can't believe they still did it after all the interruptions. Great chapter!!

Response from sunny33 (Author of The Runner)

Thanks, gabi! :)

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JunoMagic

Can't wait for the next installment. BWHAHAHAHAHA!

Response from sunny33 (Author of The Runner)

LOL. Thanks for the review! :)

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