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JTBJAB

69 Reviews   |   69 Ratings, 0 Likes, 53 Favorites )

Drama Romance General Epilogue What Epilogue? Potions Under Duress 7,734 Words 8 Chapters WIP
Hermione Granger Severus Snape

Hermione discovers the main reason why Severus married her...

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Chapters (8)

Chapter 1: Chapter One

Chapter 2: Chapter Two

Chapter 3: Chapter Three

Chapter 4: Chapter Four

Chapter 5: Chapter Five

Chapter 6: Chapter Six

Chapter 7: Chapter Seven

Chapter 8: Chapter Eight


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JTBJAB

Member Since 2006  |  8 Stories  |  Favorited by 22  |  173 Reviews Written  |  208 Review Responses

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10/10

snitchette

I just realize that they don't know each other. She surely need to know more of him but he will have to talk to her. And that's not the easiest part.

0/10

debjunk

At least she's giving him a chance.  I hope things get better.

Response from JTBJAB (Author of Want)

They will... they both need to be patient with each other though!

0/10

MollysSister

WAs this their wedding night? Oh my

Response from JTBJAB (Author of Want)

Indeed it was :s Severus has such a way with words, don't you think :S *shakes head* he does learn though!

9/10

gabi1791

Yes, I enjoyed it. I like how we are moving forward in the story while getting bits and pieces of information about the past. Good work!

Response from JTBJAB (Author of Want)

:D thank you... I try not to lag too much in the storyline just to give facts, I'm glad you liked it :D

10/10

snitchette

I'm glad she decided to try again. I wonder if she could have really done it with that guy?

Response from JTBJAB (Author of Want)

I really don't think Hermione would have been able to go through with it. She was in love with Severus after all.

9/10

pearl city princess

I'm thrilled she is willing to give it another try.  I hope it works out for them.

Response from JTBJAB (Author of Want)

:D Hermione is a very forgiving person... especially when it concerns something that she wants as well!

10/10

FlittterKat

Even the house elf thinks she's treating Severus badly. I do think Hermione has a good point, marriage is hell if there's no trust. I'm enjoying your story and looking forward to your next chapter.

Response from JTBJAB (Author of Want)

Trust is very important... but never trust a snarky house elf... ;p

8/10

mistress brewster

I love his fierce devotion! Did she really think she could just walk away from him?

Response from JTBJAB (Author of Want)

Hermione is very silly with her opinions of what she can and can't do ;p

10/10

snitchette

I hadn't expected such an outcome when he founs her. I hope he'll be able he truly love her, not just possess her.

Response from JTBJAB (Author of Want)

He will, how could he do anything else :)

0/10

sunny33

Poor Sev! :)

Response from JTBJAB (Author of Want)

He should have been more thoughtful over the words he was using *shakes head* and now he's paying for it!

9/10

gabi1791

So how did they come to be married at all???

Response from JTBJAB (Author of Want)

Everything is explained in later chapters ;p

10/10

neelix

whoa! Go Hermione!!  ...still think he's going to be her first though! :)

Response from JTBJAB (Author of Want)

*snigger* ah there is but hope ;p

9/10

pearl city princess

Hermione needs to at least listen, really listen to what Snape is saying.  She needs to calm downs a litttle and give the poor guy a chance to make amends.  I love it so far, Can't wait for the next chapter.

Response from JTBJAB (Author of Want)

:D Hermione does seem to have a problem with listening... or being logical... thank you for reviewing!

10/10

FlittterKat

Hermione is rather unforgiving in her anger and hurt. Instead of talking things over with her husband, she's cutting off contact with him. Severus is possessive but they should talk things out. ~sigh~ It's too bad...

Response from JTBJAB (Author of Want)

They need their heads knocked together... or to be shut in a very small cupboard ;p lol

0/10

debjunk

She's being quite rediculous.  What does he need to do to convince her?  I hope she doesn't regret turning him away again.

Response from JTBJAB (Author of Want)

Hermione does need to remember, that Severus is much more forceful than he used to be. He takes everything so very seriously and is meant to be protecting her. I don't see him every giving up ;p

10/10

makaem

Fabulous, I can't wait to read the rest.

Response from JTBJAB (Author of Want)

Coming soon!

0/10

JongKhan

"It was time to try stepping back into the snake pit."  I thought she loved (or had loved) Severus.  Yet she considers interacting with him being in a snake pit?  Did SHE really love HIM?  They both seem to be acting too childishly to me.

0/10

JongKhan

Hmm.  Severus is right in what he says, yet he is being rather peremptory.  Both of them, it seems, are being unreasonable in their own way, and not listening well at all to what the other wants or is trying to say.  Not a winning combination.

0/10

JongKhan

Cute little chapter; I like Leafer and her new allegiance to Hermione very much.  I would not be surprised to find there will be some tension in a future chapter where Leafer comes to Hermione's aid.  One thing, though: In the penultimate (next-to-last) sentence, you should know that "lavender" is not a proper noun, so should not be capitalized.  Unless, of course, that is the brand name for that incense (made by Lavender Brown, perhaps?).  Anyway, I look forward to reading the next (already completed--what a luxury!) chapters!  Thanks for all your hard work, even if it isn't a new story.

0/10

JongKhan

I have to say I have been a bit confused as to why Hermione's temper has been in such a snit.  This chapter is making it clearer, yet I still find her petulant and childish. 

0/10

debjunk

Well, he told her, didn't he?

9/10

gabi1791

Liked the chapter. I would love to see the two of them together again...

10/10

snitchette

I'm glad she'll be having a bit of help to cope with Severus. God knows he can be difficult sometimes *snicker*

7/10

zenobia

Oh, houseelfs always amaze me.

0/10

salvamea

Hermione and house elfes and mini house elfes that never had had a master and imply bindings.
who would have ever dreamed of reading a thing like this.

what will happen in this house. and with this strangest of all households.

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