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A Place to Hide

Aurette

27 Reviews   |   27 Ratings, 0 Likes, 0 Favorites )

General Drabble/100-Word Petulant_LDWS 561 Words 1 Chapter Complete
Alastor (Mad-Eye) Moody Other Canon Witch/Wizard

A shared last cup of heaven brings a mixed blessing.

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Chapter 1: A Place to Hide


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Aurette

Member Since 2007  |  15 Stories  |  Favorited by 491  |  126 Reviews Written  |  1,161 Review Responses

Forty-something, married, Professional Colorist seeks intelligent, scrawny man with misunderstood past.  Tattoos a plus, snarkiness a must.

My interests include: Eating, breathing, napping, swearing and chocolate; as well as long, romantic walks from the refrigerator to my computer. 

Needed skills must include: Foot massage, adoration, feeding my kids for me and ironing my husband's work clothes, along with sneering, looming, staring at me with desire, and reading whatever I hand you into my ear in a sultry tone.

 

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10/10

mick42

Chilling, now that we know how thr trunk was used.

0/10

snapify52

Nice!

Response from Aurette (Author of A Place to Hide)

Why, thank you!  

0/10

HermioneJeanSnape

How strange. I think the intensity of their coffee interest is peculiar. Well written, though.

10/10

Mazzy

Awesome way to tie into canon. And Jamican coffee is my fav too. :D

Response from Aurette (Author of A Place to Hide)

LOL!  Actually, I'm not a coffee drinker!  I just Googled "Best coffee" and scrolled through the reams of opinion.  I'm glad I hit on yours.  Thank you for your review!

10/10

herbologist

This is perfection in a drabble. The writing is evocative, the short conversation perfectly portrayes the relastionship between the two characters, and you provide some wonderful colour around a minor canon detail. It is also great to see a character rarely featuring prominently in fanfiction take centre stage. Great use of the prompt, too! Bravo!

Response from Aurette (Author of A Place to Hide)

Thank you so much!

10/10

HBAR

What an original concept.  Of course that is where the trunk came from.“This little beauty is perfect and harmless as a lamb.”Sure, the trunk is harmless.  It's the person who uses it that is trouble!  Nice story.

Response from Aurette (Author of A Place to Hide)

Thank you so much!

0/10

scaranda

This was one of those fics I finished and thought: I wish I'd written that.

Response from Aurette (Author of A Place to Hide)

LOL!  I did the same for several of the others as well...  How much fun it was to see which directions other people's minds went in!

0/10

ofankoma

Oh, to be a fly on the wall at Borgin and Burkes... the dynamics of this relationship are so clearly drawn in so few words - men on opposite sides of the law, who know each other well and somehow seem to like each other despite it all. And your language - "Move your hoof" and "legless worm" and the discussion of Harry at Hogwarts - is fabulous.

Response from Aurette (Author of A Place to Hide)

Thank you!

0/10

nagandsev

OMG - I love these two going at it! Really wonderful, feisty banter! Aww, poor Moody! Love the image of a fierce, weathered warrior needing a place to escape his Mum - great!

Response from Aurette (Author of A Place to Hide)

Thank you! I had to giggle at his Mum too.  

0/10

quaffswinegaily

Now we know where that magic chest came from.

Response from Aurette (Author of A Place to Hide)

It had to come from somewhere!

0/10

nata

You've ascertained my vote. As soon as the voting page loads, I want to support you. The story has camaraderie, long-standing relationship that has a stronger foundation than the characters admit and a setting I haven't read yet. It incorporates a canon detail and makes everything believable for me.My search for a perfect response to the prompt is right here.

Response from Aurette (Author of A Place to Hide)

You have left me speechless.  Thank you.

0/10

sunny33

Hmm, that'll be useful. ;)

Response from Aurette (Author of A Place to Hide)

...for someone! *giggle*

0/10

debjunk

oh, and what a sale!

Response from Aurette (Author of A Place to Hide)

"harmless as a lamb"

0/10

peppermint

Ooh, I wondered where Moody had got that trunk. It figures it'd be from Borgin and Burke's!

Response from Aurette (Author of A Place to Hide)

Of course!

10/10

teshara

I totally cracked up at 'dusting?' haha

Response from Aurette (Author of A Place to Hide)

So glad you laughed!

0/10

Rose of the West

Ooo... creepy! Excellent way to turn the prompt on its head.

Response from Aurette (Author of A Place to Hide)

Thank you!  Glad you liked it!

0/10

Aurette

Good job!  Clever use of the trunk!

Response from Aurette (Reviewer)

Thank you!

10/10

MuseAmusant

Very clever use of Moody and the infamous trunk as well.

Response from Aurette (Author of A Place to Hide)

Thank you!

10/10

blue artemis

Nice twist!  So that's why he got that trunk!

Response from Aurette (Author of A Place to Hide)

It is!  Thank you!

10/10

kyriaofdelphi

Absolutely loved this. You have Alastor down perfectly.

Response from Aurette (Author of A Place to Hide)

Thank you!  I'm glad you think so!

0/10

Severus49

Dun dun DUN!!!! I recognize that chest!!

Response from Aurette (Author of A Place to Hide)

Yes!  That's just the one!

0/10

Dreamy_Dragon

Great use of the prompt and i loved to see how Moody acquired his trunk.

Response from Aurette (Author of A Place to Hide)

Thank you!  I'm glad you liked it!

10/10

lady_rhian

What a well-drawn conversation between friends, and implausible friends at that - Moody and Burke? An inspired combination! The tone was just right, grit permeating the comfortable haze of old friendship, and the nod to the trunk just about made me spit out *my* morning coffee! What an excellent drabble.

Response from Aurette (Author of A Place to Hide)

Thank you so much!

10/10

Owlbait

Intriguing use of the prompt and especially of Moody. Well done.

Response from Aurette (Author of A Place to Hide)

Thank you!

0/10

FabGabW

Brilliant!

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