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Malfoy Manor Must Go On
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Must Go On

1: Chapter 1

2: Chapter 2

3: Chapter 3

4: Chapter 4

5: Chapter 5

6: Chapter 6

7: Chapter 7

8: Chapter 8

9: Chapter 9

10: Chapter 10

11: Chapter 11

12: Chapter 12

13: Chapter 13

Must Go On

darktidings

56 Reviews   |   56 Ratings, 0 Likes, 1 Favorite )

Romance post-HBP/HBP compliant Slash Epilogue What Epilogue? Malfoy Manor 28,953 Words 13 Chapters WIP
Harry Potter Lucius Malfoy Narcissa Malfoy Severus Snape Draco Malfoy Original Character Arthur Weasley Charlie Weasley Hermione Granger Millicent Bulstrode Neville Longbottom Nymphadora Tonks Remus Lupin Daphne Greengrass Gregory Goyle Luna Lovegood Ronald Weasley Viktor Krum

After a car accident leaves Harry Potter a single father of an infant, he returns to Britain and the wizarding world, as well as a much-improved Hogwarts. His next-door neighbor in Hogwarts is fellow single parent Draco Malfoy.

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Chapters (13)

Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Chapter 13: Chapter 13


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darktidings

Member Since 2011  |  1 Story  |  Favorited by 4  |  9 Reviews Written  |  89 Review Responses

I'm a 30-something mother of three who juggles work and full-time university with a bit of fanfiction writing for stress relief.

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gurlimargrethe

sad start, well written. Looking forward to follow this

Response from darktidings (Author of Must Go On)

I hope you enjoy the rest of the story.  I've got about 11 chapters completed and am very near to finishing it up so no worries it won't be finished.

0/10

feisanna

lovely!!!  so heartwarming - love each additional chapter

10/10

reader76

That was really lovely.  A powerful chapter, full of heavy emotion without being saccharine.   Well done.  This might even be my favorite chapter of the story so far, and that is saying quite a bit. 

10/10

Amiella

I do hope you'll continue to update this awesome story. Really enjoying it, so far. :) 

0/10

feisanna

:)

10/10

snitchette

*toes curling* I just love that chapter! Really worth the wait.

Response from darktidings (Author of Must Go On)

I'm glad you liked it.  The next chapter is queued... but somewhat bittersweet in tone.  Just a couple more left, including an epilogue.

Response from darktidings (Author of Must Go On)

I'm glad you liked it.  The next chapter is queued... but somewhat bittersweet in tone.  Just a couple more left, including an epilogue.

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roosickle

wonderful chapter, I'm now left wondering if the ex Mrs Malfoy has something to do with Ally's lack of magic, but I guess thats what you want isnt it : )

Response from darktidings (Author of Must Go On)

I always figured that if a child was frightened enough, they could surpress their own magic. Allie's childhood may get touched upon in the Snapshots sequel I've set up with the story, although there aren't any more traces of ex-Mrs. Malfoy in this one really.

Response from darktidings (Author of Must Go On)

I always figured that if a child was frightened enough, they could surpress their own magic. Allie's childhood may get touched upon in the Snapshots sequel I've set up with the story, although there aren't any more traces of ex-Mrs. Malfoy in this one really.

10/10

Sampdoria

Thank you so much for another brilliant update, I loved it! I love that Ally was loved unconditionally by those who matters before they now know she is a witch, but I also love that she is magical, can someone give her a wand so she can hex that boy who bullied her?

Response from darktidings (Author of Must Go On)

Hehe. I kinda feel sorry for the bully, in a way. He'll still be in Hogwarts when Allie starts... and she's an honorary Weasley. Can you even begin to imagine how dangerous picking on her might be to someone's health when there are a dozen or so cousins about? :)

Response from darktidings (Author of Must Go On)

Hehe. I kinda feel sorry for the bully, in a way. He'll still be in Hogwarts when Allie starts... and she's an honorary Weasley. Can you even begin to imagine how dangerous picking on her might be to someone's health when there are a dozen or so cousins about? :)

10/10

felinefelixfelicis

Okay, I can't resist asking. Harry was living in the States until recently and presumably started with sign language before he knew they were moving, so which sign language are they using? ASL or BSL?

Response from darktidings (Author of Must Go On)

You know, I never incorporated it into the story, but in my notes, he'd gotten a BSL tutor (I figure with Harry's fortune, he could import one if he had to go that far). Severus had recruited him to move back home while Richard was still in NICU, since he figured Harry would need family much closer than an intercontinental portkey away, being a single father.

Response from darktidings (Author of Must Go On)

You know, I never incorporated it into the story, but in my notes, he'd gotten a BSL tutor (I figure with Harry's fortune, he could import one if he had to go that far). Severus had recruited him to move back home while Richard was still in NICU, since he figured Harry would need family much closer than an intercontinental portkey away, being a single father.

10/10

snitchette

Severus might be okay with the new developpement but what of the students? Won't they be  bit shoked to have two of their male professors becoming a couple?

Response from darktidings (Author of Must Go On)

It's not something I cover in specific detail in the story, but this version of the wizarding world doesn't have the homophobia issues that would lead to the children being shocked.  I hint at it here and there (like Draco advising Harry to meet with The Quibbler to release the story of his marriage to the press to avoid false stories about him being heartbroken over Ginny), but it just wasn't something I went into great detail.  And to look at it from the couple-professor angle (regardless of gender), the students are used to this Hogwarts being family friendly since a good number of the professors are married with spouses and children in residence (such as Remus/Tonks, Severus/Andromeda, Millicent/Charlie).

Response from darktidings (Author of Must Go On)

It's not something I cover in specific detail in the story, but this version of the wizarding world doesn't have the homophobia issues that would lead to the children being shocked.  I hint at it here and there (like Draco advising Harry to meet with The Quibbler to release the story of his marriage to the press to avoid false stories about him being heartbroken over Ginny), but it just wasn't something I went into great detail.  And to look at it from the couple-professor angle (regardless of gender), the students are used to this Hogwarts being family friendly since a good number of the professors are married with spouses and children in residence (such as Remus/Tonks, Severus/Andromeda, Millicent/Charlie).

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roosickle

: ) so good to see them finally get it together. I'm reccing this over at Harry/Draco shippers on Facebook

Response from darktidings (Author of Must Go On)

Glad you enjoyed it!  And thanks for the rec. 

Response from darktidings (Author of Must Go On)

Glad you enjoyed it!  And thanks for the rec. 

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moiramountain

Nice to see Lucius and Cissa as doting grandparents.  Nearly losing their only son in war has had a major impact on their perceptions, eh?

Response from darktidings (Author of Must Go On)

That's how I see it.  That sort of near-loss is enough to change even the sternest of characters, I think.  Chapter 11 will actually have Lucius show up, with a wee dash of Narcissa too.

Response from darktidings (Author of Must Go On)

That's how I see it.  That sort of near-loss is enough to change even the sternest of characters, I think.  Chapter 11 will actually have Lucius show up, with a wee dash of Narcissa too.

10/10

Sampdoria

Yoho, they finally took the next step, I loved it. Perfectly written as always:-))

Response from darktidings (Author of Must Go On)

Thanks!  I wanted to keep it sweet.  This was one of my favorite chapters of the whole story actually.

Response from darktidings (Author of Must Go On)

Thanks!  I wanted to keep it sweet.  This was one of my favorite chapters of the whole story actually.

8/10

feisanna

:)  nice.  i'm not usually a slash person, unless it's well written - but you've developed your characters nicely and I'm excited to see where you take this.

Response from darktidings (Author of Must Go On)

I'm glad you're enjoying it, even with the slash element.  When I originally posted this on FF, I did have some grumbles that the story had no lemons.  But the idea that had plagued me for ages for this wasn't about the guys' bedroom antics, but rather about building a family after heartbreaking loss.  Hopefully that'll continue to shine through. ;)

Response from darktidings (Author of Must Go On)

I'm glad you're enjoying it, even with the slash element.  When I originally posted this on FF, I did have some grumbles that the story had no lemons.  But the idea that had plagued me for ages for this wasn't about the guys' bedroom antics, but rather about building a family after heartbreaking loss.  Hopefully that'll continue to shine through. ;)

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roosickle

YAY for the update and YAY for Draco and Harry finally getting it together : ) 

Response from darktidings (Author of Must Go On)

lol  I am trying to keep 2 chapters in the queue at all times, so that readers aren't kept waiting.  It is complete, so no worries about WiP tottering out.  And yes, I had a Yay moment myself when they finally agreed this was the proper chapter for them to snog.

Response from darktidings (Author of Must Go On)

lol  I am trying to keep 2 chapters in the queue at all times, so that readers aren't kept waiting.  It is complete, so no worries about WiP tottering out.  And yes, I had a Yay moment myself when they finally agreed this was the proper chapter for them to snog.

10/10

snitchette

I hadn't expected things to move so quicly between them but I absolutely don't mind it. I'm sure Allie will love to have her favourite uncle become her step-Dad

Response from darktidings (Author of Must Go On)

It's sort of a mix on the speed for me (as the author).  Granted, it's only been two months since Harry returned to Britain, but they're next door to each other and sharing a nanny, so I figure they're spending more time than average for coworkers around each other.  I sort of drew on watching old schoolmates of my own getting into relationships in later life.  Seems like they move fairly swiftly since they don't need as much "get to know you time".  I always saw Draco and Harry as being quite stalkerish on each other, so it was just a matter of catching up on the decade absence.

Response from darktidings (Author of Must Go On)

It's sort of a mix on the speed for me (as the author).  Granted, it's only been two months since Harry returned to Britain, but they're next door to each other and sharing a nanny, so I figure they're spending more time than average for coworkers around each other.  I sort of drew on watching old schoolmates of my own getting into relationships in later life.  Seems like they move fairly swiftly since they don't need as much "get to know you time".  I always saw Draco and Harry as being quite stalkerish on each other, so it was just a matter of catching up on the decade absence.

9/10

MsTree

Not that fond of Drarry, but this isn't bad. ^_^

Response from darktidings (Author of Must Go On)

Glad to be turning out a Drarry that's enjoyable! ;)  When I started writing this, it was because there simply aren't a lot of family-oriented Drarry fics.  Lots of action or angst or bed-romping, but few content family pieces.  So I've tried to keep the focus on them as fathers and as they knit into a family unit together.

Response from darktidings (Author of Must Go On)

Glad to be turning out a Drarry that's enjoyable! ;)  When I started writing this, it was because there simply aren't a lot of family-oriented Drarry fics.  Lots of action or angst or bed-romping, but few content family pieces.  So I've tried to keep the focus on them as fathers and as they knit into a family unit together.

0/10

moiramountain

Oh, I do appreciate the sweet tenderness of this.  And the Barbie... priceless.   Those of us with daughters know you could probably finance a proper British boarding school education with what you can spend on those darn dolls and their gear !!

Response from darktidings (Author of Must Go On)

They are very sweet.  It's a fine line between that tenderness and going utterly OOC with both guys, but at the same time, part of my reasoning for setting it 10+ years after the war's end was so that they both had time to grow up and move far beyond any childhood resentments toward each other. As for Barbie, that's part of how she crept in here.  My youngest child (and only daughter) has gotten old enough that Barbie has now invaded with drawers-full of accessories.  Although with older brothers, Barbie (and her Disney princess look-alikes) often are carrying guns and swarming Lego castles against trolls and other monsters.  lol

Response from darktidings (Author of Must Go On)

They are very sweet.  It's a fine line between that tenderness and going utterly OOC with both guys, but at the same time, part of my reasoning for setting it 10+ years after the war's end was so that they both had time to grow up and move far beyond any childhood resentments toward each other. As for Barbie, that's part of how she crept in here.  My youngest child (and only daughter) has gotten old enough that Barbie has now invaded with drawers-full of accessories.  Although with older brothers, Barbie (and her Disney princess look-alikes) often are carrying guns and swarming Lego castles against trolls and other monsters.  lol

10/10

Sampdoria

Loved the update, this is such a sweet story:-))

Response from darktidings (Author of Must Go On)

Glad you're enjoying each chapter - and thanks for the faithful reviews. :)

Response from darktidings (Author of Must Go On)

Glad you're enjoying each chapter - and thanks for the faithful reviews. :)

10/10

MsTree

Good for Harry! If it had been me walking in like that, I'd have done a little more damage while there were no adult witnesses! ^_^

Response from darktidings (Author of Must Go On)

I think his instinct was more damage, but with both kids watching, he had to behave himself.  It was very hard to resist temptation for him to use some creative curses of the sort he'd have heard from Hermione over the years though!

Response from darktidings (Author of Must Go On)

I think his instinct was more damage, but with both kids watching, he had to behave himself.  It was very hard to resist temptation for him to use some creative curses of the sort he'd have heard from Hermione over the years though!

10/10

Sampdoria

I loved the update. I didn't want Allie to be abused of course, but I absolutely loved Harrys reaction, he was brilliant. I also love the medical/abuse care of the students you have included in your plot, it should have been there from the start, but I am also kind of smug that it is Severus who has implemented the changes. Very well done. I am as always looking forward for more:-))

Response from darktidings (Author of Must Go On)

I agree that the medical care should have been a lot more.  I am not a Dumbledore fan in the least, because he overlooked multiple abusive situations either because he didn't like the child personally or because it suited his Greater Good.  I always found calling him a Light wizard to be a misnomer, because while he might not have been trying to take over the world, he certainly did extensive and lasting damage by his neglect of his job as first professor (Tom Riddle's home situation) and later Headmaster (Severus and Harry's abusive homes).  I don't get into it much in this story, but my newer one has a bit of bashing on the subject.

Response from darktidings (Author of Must Go On)

I agree that the medical care should have been a lot more.  I am not a Dumbledore fan in the least, because he overlooked multiple abusive situations either because he didn't like the child personally or because it suited his Greater Good.  I always found calling him a Light wizard to be a misnomer, because while he might not have been trying to take over the world, he certainly did extensive and lasting damage by his neglect of his job as first professor (Tom Riddle's home situation) and later Headmaster (Severus and Harry's abusive homes).  I don't get into it much in this story, but my newer one has a bit of bashing on the subject.

10/10

snitchette

I'm so glad Harry was there to save the day. I must say I was a bit uneasy when I read the warning. I was also wondering who' Allie's mother. Do you plan to explain how Draco's became a widower too?

Response from darktidings (Author of Must Go On)

I tried to keep the scene lower key to avoid triggering any unhappy RL memories for readers.  I don't think I have it in me to write anything graphic about a child being harmed.  As for Allie's mother, Draco will explain a bit about his arranged marriage and its demise in Chapter 9.

Response from darktidings (Author of Must Go On)

I tried to keep the scene lower key to avoid triggering any unhappy RL memories for readers.  I don't think I have it in me to write anything graphic about a child being harmed.  As for Allie's mother, Draco will explain a bit about his arranged marriage and its demise in Chapter 9.

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moiramountain

Oh, the strengths that parenthood can bring forward.  I'm pleased to see the level of maturity both men have reached and the gentleness Draco shows for his daughter is wonderful, considering his distorted youth.  Heaven help anyone who comes between either of these fathers and their children (or any other child, I suspect) - the outcome would NOT be pretty - the lion and the snake joined in a common cause - look out !!  One point though - did I somehow miss you filling us in on how Draco became a widower? 

Response from darktidings (Author of Must Go On)

Ever since I started reading HP fanfic, I wanted to write a mature Draco/Harry blended family fic.  It was obvious that Harry would be a devoted father, after growing up the way he did, but I think a lot of writers miss the fact that when all the cards were down, family counted most for Malfoys too.  I like my Draco to have a lot more of Narcissa's fierce familial devotion and less of Lucius' former insane ambition and racism.  I can't see him going through what he did in the war without growing up a lot, you know?  And the story about how Draco became a widower will be somewhat explained in Chapter 9.

Response from darktidings (Author of Must Go On)

Ever since I started reading HP fanfic, I wanted to write a mature Draco/Harry blended family fic.  It was obvious that Harry would be a devoted father, after growing up the way he did, but I think a lot of writers miss the fact that when all the cards were down, family counted most for Malfoys too.  I like my Draco to have a lot more of Narcissa's fierce familial devotion and less of Lucius' former insane ambition and racism.  I can't see him going through what he did in the war without growing up a lot, you know?  And the story about how Draco became a widower will be somewhat explained in Chapter 9.

8/10

feisanna

lovely!  i really like your take on grown-up Harry and Draco.  please keep up the good work

Response from darktidings (Author of Must Go On)

I'm glad you're enjoying it!  Grown up Harry and Draco are my favorite of this pairing, especially if one or both has children already to add to the dynamic.

Response from darktidings (Author of Must Go On)

I'm glad you're enjoying it!  Grown up Harry and Draco are my favorite of this pairing, especially if one or both has children already to add to the dynamic.

10/10

snitchette

I believe it will be a wonderful story even if a bit sad in the beginning. I guess Jessie was Richard's mum but I haven't guess who Jamie was. or was Jamie the mum?

Response from darktidings (Author of Must Go On)

Originally, this would have been revealed in Chapter 6, but I somehow mixed up two chapters here so the details come up in Chapter 7 (currently in queue).  You're in the right ballpark.

Response from darktidings (Author of Must Go On)

Originally, this would have been revealed in Chapter 6, but I somehow mixed up two chapters here so the details come up in Chapter 7 (currently in queue).  You're in the right ballpark.

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