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A Hero's Worth Chapter 5: Part Five
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Part Five

A Hero's Worth

Chapter 5 of 6

lady_rhian

A six part drabble series. Hermione and other Order members are in St. Mungo?s. Severus has been Obliviated. What does this mean for Hermione?

Drama Romance Drabble/100-Word Potions Under Duress 3,775 Words 6 Chapters Complete
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Disclaimer: I'm not affiliated with JKR - I just play with her creations for kicks. :)

A/N: The series was originally intended to only have four parts, but due to those dastardly inspiring ladies at the 'grangersnape100', there are now two extra segments! Here is the first segment they inspired.

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ONE MONTH LATER

“OH, MY GOD!” Ginny screeched. “YOU’RE PREGNANT!”

Hermione laughed. “Quiet, Ginny, I don’t think your mother heard you.”

“Well, you said you had big news, so I put a silencing charm on the door.” Ginny grinned. She looked at Hermione thoughtfully. “Aren’t you going to tell me who the father is?”

Hermione looked at Ginny pointedly. “If you can’t guess by now, you’re daft.”

Ginny looked at her, bemused. “If you’re telling me that it’s Severus Snape… oh, my God.” She looked at Hermione. “What happened in the cellar at Grimmauld?”

“That’s what Tonks said,” Hermione muttered. “Why does everyone assume we shagged in the cellar?”

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“So, you’re three months along now.” Hermione sat on a stool in Pansy’s office. Pansy was flipping through her chart. “Have you been experiencing any abnormal cramping, any spotting, anything abnormal in general?”

“No.” Hermione shook her head. “Aside from throwing up everything I eat and having an odd craving for carrots, I think I’m pretty normal right now.”

Pansy chuckled. “Well, at least carrots are healthy for you. Ron, the poor dear, was stuck eating all of my leftover chocolate mousse when I tired of it.”

Hermione laughed. She looked at Pansy. “How is he doing?”

Pansy smiled. “He asked for you today.”

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Hermione sat outside Severus’ hospital room door. She shifted uncomfortably. She was six months along now – a very obvious sight. He had been improving at an exponential rate over the past three months. Pansy said that he had recovered all of his mental capacities and that through Legilimency some of the mediwizards had been able to unlock areas of his mind that he had shut away while dueling with Percy.

He remembered everything now, Pansy said. He wouldn’t speak of details to anyone but Hermione, and she hadn’t been to see him in nearly two months.

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She’d written letters, not wanting to showcase her swelling belly to him while he didn’t remember. It would only confuse him, she had told Pansy. If he can’t remember that night, God only knows what he’d think, and he gets jealous easy enough as it is…

Pansy had agreed and had told Severus that Hermione was working overseas. Thus, he had written her letters and she him. With every letter she had seen improvement in his condition. He’d reminisce over a few more details with every day’s epistle, and she had contented herself with Pansy’s updates and the demands of her body, of her child. His child.

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She had not expected him to recover so soon, nor his words to be so harsh. The letter she had received yesterday had only contained two lines.

I remember that night. We need to talk.

And so she waited outside of his hospital room door. Pansy said he was to be discharged later in the week. They were still running diagnostic tests on him, just to make sure all his mental capacities were stable.

She jerked her head as she heard arguing through the door.

Severus was fighting with his attendants. How predictable, she thought, curling a lip.

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“My mental capacities are fully intact, damn it, as they have been for the past two weeks!”

“If you’ll forgive us, Prof… Mr. Snape, but we really have never seen such a full recovery from an Obliviate. You’re a medical marvel.”

“Remove yourselves my presence. And if Hermione Granger is sitting outside the door, have her come in. And lock the door. She has a bloody lot of explaining to do.”

Hermione gulped, her heart racing as she heard the thundering of feet towards the door. The two attendees came out.

“He, er, wants to see you, Hermione,” Terry Boot said. “And… um…”

“I heard, Terry. Thank you,” Hermione said, standing up. It’s now or never.

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One more segment to go!

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Latest 25 Reviews for A Hero's Worth

65 Reviews  |  5.28/10 Average

10/10

HBAR

I'm not sure how I've never read this before.  It was sweet snd with a happy ending, which is the best kind.

10/10

jenidralph

A lovely, happy ending. :)

(I apologize for not reviewing the chapters in the middle.  I was impatient to get to the next part.)

10/10

jenidralph

Damn Percy...

0/10

salvamea

oohh soo romantic. nice endingAnd I did like the idea of  really good friend she has in Ron here. And of course their child must be lovely.a quick look into the eyes of the girl, and he knows he HAS to tell another story. best inheritage one can get.heheTonks really would never get over the thought about the cellar-thing. but thanks to Remus, she will be cured soon. hee.wonderful story. short but to the point. thank you for sharing.

Response from lady_rhian (Author of A Hero's Worth)

Thank you! I am so very pleased that you enjoyed it. Take care!

0/10

salvamea

hey! what is he angry about!!??of course he is a medical wonder. he would not be himself if he weren't.

Response from lady_rhian (Author of A Hero's Worth)

*snort* Too true! Severus would never settle for being an average patient. :-)

0/10

salvamea

such a disilluioning moment, when he says I know you, I feel for you, but not more. grrr.but it is not permanent. it is not permanent. that has got to be her mantra. everything will be all right.someday somehow.and she is pregnant. well if that is not ironic.

Response from lady_rhian (Author of A Hero's Worth)

Indeed; positive thinking is the key!

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salvamea

oh my goodness. " he wouldn't remember me" How deeply hurt can one be. what grief.Percy has to hang for this, I am sure.this break down.A real treat to read your sequel. all compacted in these few lines, but all bursting with emotion. brilliant.

Response from lady_rhian (Author of A Hero's Worth)

Thank you for the kind compliments.

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salvamea

a grand dame of duelling with words. mymy. she really has it.and Percy is the twit of the century.and got what he deserved.at least Arthurs prayers had been heard, and she didn't do worse to his son. like castrate. or so. and then the break down. *sob*

Response from lady_rhian (Author of A Hero's Worth)

Yes, Percy is indeed the twit of the century. Thank you for reviewing each installment; it's a lovely treat when that happens. :-)

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salvamea

hey, what is going on here. (not that I didn't have an idea. but you make it tremendously sound like a "grand entrance"applause for this one. have to read on quick.I'm with the twins. it reads as if there is much fun ahead.

Response from lady_rhian (Author of A Hero's Worth)

Thank you! Glad you're enjoying it. :-) (I apologize for the tardiness of my response!)

0/10

TCFellows5

Fun!

Response from lady_rhian (Author of A Hero's Worth)

Thanks! 

Response from lady_rhian (Author of A Hero's Worth)

Thanks! 

10/10

ickle duddykins

Haha, I think this might be my favorite Hermione/Severus memory story, and it's definitely my favorite set of drabbles. The characters are written so well, Tonk and the twins are friggin' hilarious. Thanks for a great story, I love happy endings...and shagging in cellars :o)Sue.

Response from lady_rhian (Author of A Hero's Worth)

Thank you - what a compliment! This is my favorite drabble series I've written; I'm very attached to it. The grangersnape100 challenge was good for me as I would never have attempted to write a memory!fic of my own volition. I have been so pleased and honored by people's affection for it - thank you so much!  

10/10

FJDS

Loved it!

Response from lady_rhian (Author of A Hero's Worth)

Thank you! :)

10/10

Stormi

Oh my.

Response from lady_rhian (Author of A Hero's Worth)

Indeed. :)

10/10

Stormi

Wow!

Response from lady_rhian (Author of A Hero's Worth)

Glad you're still enjoying it!

10/10

Stormi

I know you are done writing this but I really want a happy ending!

Response from lady_rhian (Author of A Hero's Worth)

That is a really lovely compliment. Thanks.

0/10

Stormi

Go Hermione!

Response from lady_rhian (Author of A Hero's Worth)

Hermione can be pretty amazing, can't she? :)

0/10

Stormi

Great start.

Response from lady_rhian (Author of A Hero's Worth)

Thank you. :)

0/10

Stormi

Great job! Looking forward to reading more of you works.

Response from lady_rhian (Author of A Hero's Worth)

Thank you so much! I'm very pleased that you enjoyed it, m'dear.

10/10

KarenDetroit

Lovely little story. Thanks!

Response from lady_rhian (Author of A Hero's Worth)

Thank you!

10/10

Chartreuse

A lovely set of drabbles. I was especially delighted with the commentary from the gallery, as it were, which provided such nice continuity.And the end sequence was very sweet, indeed.

Response from lady_rhian (Author of A Hero's Worth)

Thank you so much for the lovely review! I'm so glad you enjoy my work. :)

10/10

wildkitty27

That first chapter was AMAZING, and this one, too! I can't wait to find out what happens next. You've hooked me.

Response from lady_rhian (Author of A Hero's Worth)

Thank you so much! The next two segments are in the queue, and I just finished up another twelve drabbles of aftermath for the series. :) Hope you enjoy the rest of it!

10/10

averygoodun

“You git,” Fred muttered. “She’s going to tear him from limb to limb, and you’re blocking my view!”

“Sorry,” Ron said. 

Loved that!  Yo've really got a good rythm going here!  You manage to really make the most out of those hundred words!  I'm looking forward to the rest! 

Response from lady_rhian (Author of A Hero's Worth)

I couldn't resist putting banter in for Fred/George...it's just too good of an oppurtunity to resist! Glad you're enjoying the story - the next two segments are in the queue!

10/10

Southern_Witch_69

She told that git right what he needed to hear. I'm so intrigued and hope he gets his "mind" back.

Response from lady_rhian (Author of A Hero's Worth)

Thank you! We'll have to see what happens to Severus (though if you're validating, you'll know before everybody else - sneaky mod). :)

0/10

Southern_Witch_69

Muahahaha. I love the famous Hermione slap coming into play (and seeing everyone's reactions to the angry witch).

Response from lady_rhian (Author of A Hero's Worth)

Thank you. :) It may be a cliche, but it's just too priceless to not use!

0/10

fire_haired_lovely

I like that someone is finally giving the ponce the what-for.Lots of luck, Here's some chocolate (dark oohhhh!)

Response from lady_rhian (Author of A Hero's Worth)

Thank you for the review, and for the dark chocolate. :) Dark is the best, of course. The next installment will be up today (hopefully).

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