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Potions Under Duress Redivivus
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Redivivus

1: Prologue

2: Chapter 1

3: Chapter 2

4: Chapter 3

5: Chapter 4

6: Chapter 5

7: Chapter 6

8: Chapter 7

9: Chapter 8

10: Chapter 9

11: Chapter 10

12: Chapter 11

13: Chapter 12

14: Chapter 13

15: Chapter 14

16: Chapter 15

17: Chapter 16

18: Chapter 17

19: Chapter 18

20: Chapter 19

21: Chapter 20

22: Chapter 21

23: Chapter 22

24: Chapter 23

25: Chapter 24

Redivivus

ayerf

269 Reviews   |   269 Ratings, 0 Likes, 156 Favorites )

Drama Angst Romance Alternate Universe Potions Under Duress 67,776 Words 25 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape

Hermione Granger starts her sixth year at Hogwarts with a crash.

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Chapters (25)

Chapter 1: Prologue

Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Chapter 3: Chapter 2

Chapter 4: Chapter 3

Chapter 5: Chapter 4

Chapter 6: Chapter 5

Chapter 7: Chapter 6

Chapter 8: Chapter 7

Chapter 9: Chapter 8

Chapter 10: Chapter 9

Chapter 11: Chapter 10

Chapter 12: Chapter 11

Chapter 13: Chapter 12

Chapter 14: Chapter 13

Chapter 15: Chapter 14

Chapter 16: Chapter 15

Chapter 17: Chapter 16

Chapter 18: Chapter 17

Chapter 19: Chapter 18

Chapter 20: Chapter 19

Chapter 21: Chapter 20

Chapter 22: Chapter 21

Chapter 23: Chapter 22

Chapter 24: Chapter 23

Chapter 25: Chapter 24


About ayerf

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ayerf

Member Since 2006  |  30 Stories  |  Favorited by 277  |  151 Reviews Written  |  1,977 Review Responses

Jumped on the Harry Potter bandwagon in 2000 (when Goblet of Fire was out in hardback). Prisoner of Azkaban is my favourite in the series, followed by Order of the Phoenix. I read and write in the SS/HG corner of the Potterverse.

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Reviews for Redivivus

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7/10

Celestial Melody

Oh, dear, I am very disappointed with Harry and Ron. They're acting slightly, well a little more than slightly, OOC.  But I'm still enjoying the story very much.  You're  a good writer! :)

~Julia~ 

Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)

Well, with OOC!Harry, you'll have to thank my beta for stopping him from wreaking havoc in some of the later chapters (still to come up).Glad that you're enjoying the story anyway... I'll just have to make a mental note never to write a story with Harry or Ron as the main character.But I thought they'd have to be (especially in Ron's case) completely mental to have no misgivings about having a Necromancer for a friend.Thanks for reviewing. You had this author gibbering in shock as her reviews increased past 80.

8/10

Celestial Melody

Wow.  Hermione is just like Phoenix from the Marvel Comics.  Poor thing...made me very sad, :(

Great story!

~Julia~ 

Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)

I can see the likeness, but she won't be:destroying stars, bursting into flames, coming back from the dead... oh wait, that last one has already happened.Hmm, good thing Hermione ain't a redhead!

7/10

Celestial Melody

Hmm...Hermione is a brazen, little thing, isn't she? Still, I liked it. This story is very interesting! :)

~Julia~ 

Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)

She's never given me the impression of being shy, that's for sure. Insecure, yes; shy, no.I'm glad you like it.

9/10

Celestial Melody

Oh, my.  Wow, poor Hermione.  And, call me crazy, but I actually felt sorry for poor Bellatrix, :(

She is very dumb to stay with such a cruel master...but I still felt sorry for her.  Good job on bringing the characters out!

~Julia~ 

Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)

You'll be feeling even sorrier for poor Bella when Hermione meets Voldy... although, if you are primarily a Snape fan, you might cheer Hermione on.The problem with focussing on particular characters is that it can be a struggle to hide the fact that the extras were sometimes an afterthought... Bella wasn't.

7/10

Celestial Melody

Whoa.  Hermione isn't in shock because of her parents? Hmm...well, other than that, I love the idea of her being a Necromancer! :) Have you ever read The Abhorsen Trilogy by Garth Nix? If you haven't...I'm sure you would enjoy it! :)

Well done!

~Julia~ 

Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)

There are many different ways of experiencing grief... and I imagine being a Necromancer rather changes how she feels too.I have read those books, and I'm doing my best not to copy Nix's ideas about the powers of a Necromancer... although some similarities are inevitable.

9/10

Celestial Melody

Oh, my! So it was Severus that was writing those letters! Ok...now it makes sense.  Lovely! Reading on...

~Julia~ 

Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)

JKR left me an opening... we never see Hermione read any letters from Krum, so how do we know that they're really from him?

9/10

Celestial Melody

Oh, how exciting.  I'm too anxious and excited to read the next chapter, I can't leave a long review.  Well done! :)

~Julia~ 

Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)

Fortunate for you that you seem to have discovered this when it's got half of the chapters up! Thanks.

10/10

Celestial Melody

Oh, that was a NICE chapter.  I can't wait to read more.  Fantastic job of keeping the reader...or, rather, ME, on the edge of my seat, hehe.  Well done!

~Julia~ 

Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)

Be careful what you wish for: there are 12 chapters up... and at least 12 more to come.

9/10

loony_old_fan

I'm a llittle sick of Quidditch myself, but not this story.  Keep it up.

Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)

I'm glad to hear it. Chapter 13 coming soon: hopefully by Saturday, while I'm in progress of writing 22 of 25ish chapters.

0/10

DeathSong

Well, this is an interesting development.  Literally allergic to anything Quidditch...that's very interesting and creative.  Though I don't exactly approve of how Dumbledore cast the curse at Hermione.  The Room of Requirement scene...that was rather funny.  Poor Severus, ouch.  Once again, you've written a brilliant chapter and I, as always, await the next chapter with great anticipation!  Update again soon!

Cheers,

Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)

Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)

The allergy curse also gave me an excuse not to write Quidditch games. Not that a story focussing on Hermione and Snape needs broomsticks and enchanted balls.As for Dumbledore, he can be both manipulative and underhanded... and I don't think Hermione would stand still with a wand pointed at her.It might be interesting to write a story about Severus's nose, with details of every time it'd been broken.Next chapter won't be up before another three days because I had two up in the queue at once... a rule I only noticed afterwards.

10/10

Amethystique

The plot thickens......Mmmmmm.......I am gagging for the next bit and can't wait for Hermione to meet Ole' Mouldy Wart!  This is going to be a fantastically explosive scrap!  *Brit slang for a fight*More soon PLEASE?Blessings x

Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)

Hermione gets the pleasure of meeting Tommy in chapter 20 (has been written and betaed, but will take a while yet to be posted).TWO chapters are in the validation queue now that I'm getting ever closer to writing the end, so more is coming soon.Explosive is a very fitting term, considering my plans for the end of the story. I'm well aware of brit slang, being a brit meself. It's slang of other nations that I don't have a clue of...

0/10

DeathSong

Brilliant!!  A lot more of Snape in this chapter!  I'm very pleased!  This fic is coming along quite nicely!  Again, I cannot wait for the next chapter.  Also, thanks for the mention in the AN in this chapter.  I'm quite honoured!  Until the next chapter!

Cheers,

Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)

Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)

I'm glad you like it. There are at least ten more chapters to come (I'm coming ever closer to writing the end). The next two are in the queue.I'm honoured meself to have loyal reviewers like you! IT's encouraging to know that I'm doing something right.

0/10

helshez

One word, three letters... WOW! That was awesome! I'm a sucker for noble self sacrifice and suffering and all that jazz. I thotoughly enjoyed this whole story, sorry I didn't review earlier chapters, I just have a habit of reading to the end before I review. Right, I'm off to read the sequels now. Keep up the good work! ;)

Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)

Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it, and thanks for reviewing.

10/10

pickles

another wonderful chapter. thank you.

Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)

Glad you liked it! More coming soon...

10/10

DeathSong

Wow.  Good chapter!  This just keeps getting more and more interesting!  Update again soon! 

Cheers,

Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)

Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)

Thanks, I just hope I can keep it interesting. Of course, different people might find it interesting if I killed everyone off in the last chapter... just kidding!Chapter 11 is in the depths of the queue, and will hopefully be up soon enough to put you out of your misery.

10/10

pickles

excellent chapter. thank you. waiting for more.

Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)

Thanks. I hope you won't have to wait too long. It'll possibly be up by the end of the week.

9/10

ylang_two

whoa.  Hermione is saving lives as a result of her newfound power, but she's still Hermione enough to snap at Harry for hanging onto the HBP book. . . .       Go Herm!!

Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)

Well, if she didn't hate the concept of cheating, she wouldn't be Hermione anymore. If that happened I'd have to call her 'Necromancer' or come up with a title to use ('Lady Nocturne'?) all the time, and that would be both wearing and stupid.

10/10

siage

This is great!!!! Really well written and unique. I can't wait for more. Thanks!

Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)

Thank you, glad you like it. More coming as soon as the admins validate it. Hopefully I can finish (and post) this before vanishing into the black hole that is University.

0/10

teshara

I like that Mr. Granger has all his terminology wrong :D

Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)

Thank you! I hoped it would be funny that he gets the wizarding terminology as wrong as Arthur Weasley gets the Muggle terminology!

10/10

andromeda_moon

Very nice :)

Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)

Thank you!

Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)

Thank you!

10/10

andromeda_moon

Very sweet :)  Poor Severus, though, having to be pulled away from his Hermione after that mindblowing experience.

Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)

Thank you! What can I say? Dark Lords have a rather strange idea of good timing.

Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)

Thank you! What can I say? Dark Lords have a rather strange idea of good timing.

10/10

andromeda_moon

Oooh, that had better not be Ron parading as Severus, he's going to be in so much trouble!

Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)

Big trouble...

Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)

Big trouble...

10/10

andromeda_moon

Scrimgeour is just plain mad!  It's surprising he's not on Voldemort's side.  Lovely chapter, especially at the end, very sweet.

Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)

He quite possibly is mad, and frightened to boot. Thank you!

Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)

He quite possibly is mad, and frightened to boot. Thank you!

10/10

andromeda_moon

Harry is such a dolt.  Part of me almost hopes that Hermione won't befriend him again, but I suppose she must.  Wonderful chapter :)

Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)

Definitely a dolt. He still has a lot to learn. Unfortunately, Hermione needs all the friends she can get.

Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)

Definitely a dolt. He still has a lot to learn. Unfortunately, Hermione needs all the friends she can get.

10/10

andromeda_moon

Oh my!  He kissed her in the classroom in front of everyone?  Even after the rest of the chapter I'm still getting over that - it was brilliant :D

Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)

Thank you! I seem to remember that aspect of the plot sneaked up on me, too.

Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)

Thank you! I seem to remember that aspect of the plot sneaked up on me, too.

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