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The Knight Errant Chronicles

1: Lexicon

2: Part First: The Hart Assurgent: Prologue

3: Part First: The Hart Assurgent: Chapter 1

4: Part First: The Hart Assurgent: Chapter 2

5: Part First: The Hart Assurgent: Chapter 3

6: Part First: The Hart Assurgent: Chapter 4

7: Part First: The Hart Assurgent: Chapter 5

8: Part First: The Hart Assurgent: Chapter 6

9: Part First: The Hart Assurgent: Chapter 7

10: Part First: The Hart Assurgent: Chapter 8

11: Part First: The Hart Assurgent: Chapter 9

12: Part First: The Hart Assurgent: Chapter 10

13: Part First: The Hart Assurgent: Chapter 11

14: Part First: The Hart Assurgent: Chapter 12

15: Part First: The Hart Assurgent: Chapter 13

16: Part Second: The Hart Rampant: Prologue

17: Part Second: The Hart Rampant: Prologue, Part 2

18: Part Second: The Hart Rampant: Chapter 14

19: Part Second: The Hart Rampant: Chapter 15

20: Part Second: The Hart Rampant: Chapter 16

21: Part Second: The Hart Rampant: Chapter 17, Part 1

22: Part Second: The Hart Rampant: Chapter 17, Part 2

23: Part Second: The Hart Rampant: Chapter 18

24: Part Second: The Hart Rampant: Chapter 19

25: Part Second: The Hart Rampant: Chapter 20, Part 1

26: Part Second: The Hart Rampant: Chapter 20, Part 2

27: Part Second: The Hart Rampant: Chapter 21

28: Part Second: The Hart Rampant: Chapter 22

29: Part Second: The Hart Rampant: Chapter 23, Part 1

30: Part Second: The Hart Rampant: Chapter 23, Part 2

31: Part Second: The Hart Rampant: Chapter 24, Part 1

32: Part Second: The Hart Rampant: Chapter 24, Part 2

33: Part Second: The Hart Rampant, Chapter 25, Part 1

34: Part Second: The Hart Rampant, Chapter 25, Part 2

35: Part Second: The Hart Rampant, Chapter 26

36: Part Third: The Hart Subvertant: Prologue Part 1

37: Part Third: The Hart Subvertant: Prologue Part 2

38: Part Third: The Hart Subvertant: Prologue Part 3

39: Part Third: The Hart Subvertant: Prologue Part 4

40: Part Third: The Hart Subvertant: Prologue Part 5

41: Part Third: The Hart Subvertant, Chapter 27, Part 1

42: Part Third: The Hart Subvertant, Chapter 27, Part 2

43: Part Third: The Hart Subvertant, Chapter 28, Part 1

44: Part Third: The Hart Subvertant, Chapter 28, Part 2

45: Part Third: The Hart Subvertant, Chapter 29, Part 1

46: Part Third: The Hart Subvertant, Chapter 29, Part 2

47: Part Third: The Hart Subvertant, Chapter 30, Part 1

48: Part Third: The Hart Subvertant, Chapter 30, Part 2

49: Part Third: The Hart Subvertant, Chapter 31, Part 1

50: Part Third: The Hart Subvertant, Chapter 31, Part 2

51: Part Third: The Hart Subvertant, Chapter 32

52: Part Third: The Hart Subvertant, Chapter 33

53: Part Third: The Hart Subvertant, Chapter 34

54: Part Third: The Hart Subvertant, Chapter 35

55: Part Third: The Hart Subvertant, Chapter 36

The Knight Errant Chronicles

Guernica

142 Reviews   |   142 Ratings, 0 Likes, 134 Favorites )

Drama Romance Erotica Smut General Action/Adventure Hogwarts Castle 625,553 Words 55 Chapters WIP
Lucius Malfoy Original Character Severus Snape Ronan Rowena Ravenclaw Rubeus Hagrid Salazar Slytherin Seamus Finnegan Sibyll Trelawney Walden Macnair Bellatrix Lestrange

For centuries, the Faery people have been a mysterious, sometimes persecuted minority in the Wizard world. But now Albus Dumbledore has persuaded them to send an officer of their military to teach the Fae canon of magic at Hogwarts. Meanwhile, Severus Snape spends a memorable evening with a stranger in King's Cross... Set during the Goblet of Fire/Order of the Phoenix timeframe. WINNER of the Multifaceted Fanfic Awards for "Best Snape Fic" and "Identity ~ The Original Character Award."

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Chapters (55)

Chapter 1: Lexicon

Chapter 2: Part First: The Hart Assurgent: Prologue

Chapter 3: Part First: The Hart Assurgent: Chapter 1

Chapter 4: Part First: The Hart Assurgent: Chapter 2

Chapter 5: Part First: The Hart Assurgent: Chapter 3

Chapter 6: Part First: The Hart Assurgent: Chapter 4

Chapter 7: Part First: The Hart Assurgent: Chapter 5

Chapter 8: Part First: The Hart Assurgent: Chapter 6

Chapter 9: Part First: The Hart Assurgent: Chapter 7

Chapter 10: Part First: The Hart Assurgent: Chapter 8

Chapter 11: Part First: The Hart Assurgent: Chapter 9

Chapter 12: Part First: The Hart Assurgent: Chapter 10

Chapter 13: Part First: The Hart Assurgent: Chapter 11

Chapter 14: Part First: The Hart Assurgent: Chapter 12

Chapter 15: Part First: The Hart Assurgent: Chapter 13

Chapter 16: Part Second: The Hart Rampant: Prologue

Chapter 17: Part Second: The Hart Rampant: Prologue, Part 2

Chapter 18: Part Second: The Hart Rampant: Chapter 14

Chapter 19: Part Second: The Hart Rampant: Chapter 15

Chapter 20: Part Second: The Hart Rampant: Chapter 16

Chapter 21: Part Second: The Hart Rampant: Chapter 17, Part 1

Chapter 22: Part Second: The Hart Rampant: Chapter 17, Part 2

Chapter 23: Part Second: The Hart Rampant: Chapter 18

Chapter 24: Part Second: The Hart Rampant: Chapter 19

Chapter 25: Part Second: The Hart Rampant: Chapter 20, Part 1

Chapter 26: Part Second: The Hart Rampant: Chapter 20, Part 2

Chapter 27: Part Second: The Hart Rampant: Chapter 21

Chapter 28: Part Second: The Hart Rampant: Chapter 22

Chapter 29: Part Second: The Hart Rampant: Chapter 23, Part 1

Chapter 30: Part Second: The Hart Rampant: Chapter 23, Part 2

Chapter 31: Part Second: The Hart Rampant: Chapter 24, Part 1

Chapter 32: Part Second: The Hart Rampant: Chapter 24, Part 2

Chapter 33: Part Second: The Hart Rampant, Chapter 25, Part 1

Chapter 34: Part Second: The Hart Rampant, Chapter 25, Part 2

Chapter 35: Part Second: The Hart Rampant, Chapter 26

Chapter 36: Part Third: The Hart Subvertant: Prologue Part 1

Chapter 37: Part Third: The Hart Subvertant: Prologue Part 2

Chapter 38: Part Third: The Hart Subvertant: Prologue Part 3

Chapter 39: Part Third: The Hart Subvertant: Prologue Part 4

Chapter 40: Part Third: The Hart Subvertant: Prologue Part 5

Chapter 41: Part Third: The Hart Subvertant, Chapter 27, Part 1

Chapter 42: Part Third: The Hart Subvertant, Chapter 27, Part 2

Chapter 43: Part Third: The Hart Subvertant, Chapter 28, Part 1

Chapter 44: Part Third: The Hart Subvertant, Chapter 28, Part 2

Chapter 45: Part Third: The Hart Subvertant, Chapter 29, Part 1

Chapter 46: Part Third: The Hart Subvertant, Chapter 29, Part 2

Chapter 47: Part Third: The Hart Subvertant, Chapter 30, Part 1

Chapter 48: Part Third: The Hart Subvertant, Chapter 30, Part 2

Chapter 49: Part Third: The Hart Subvertant, Chapter 31, Part 1

Chapter 50: Part Third: The Hart Subvertant, Chapter 31, Part 2

Chapter 51: Part Third: The Hart Subvertant, Chapter 32

Chapter 52: Part Third: The Hart Subvertant, Chapter 33

Chapter 53: Part Third: The Hart Subvertant, Chapter 34

Chapter 54: Part Third: The Hart Subvertant, Chapter 35

Chapter 55: Part Third: The Hart Subvertant, Chapter 36


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10/10

teshara

McNair. OMG great insert. I like the way Emily really has the feel of belonging in this world. Most OCs are awkward or godlike but she fits into the existing storyline smoothly and makes this a truly believable AU.

Response from Guernica (Author of The Knight Errant Chronicles)

Yes indeed, I thought Walden Macnair should be the one to commend our heroine for getting rid of a dangerous beast -- of all the guests present, that line was going to him.Thanks for your comments on the OC -- I couldn't be more pleased that she's believe-in-able. Yay!

Response from Guernica (Author of The Knight Errant Chronicles)

Yes indeed, I thought Walden Macnair should be the one to commend our heroine for getting rid of a dangerous beast -- of all the guests present, that line was going to him.Thanks for your comments on the OC -- I couldn't be more pleased that she's believe-in-able. Yay!

10/10

teshara

Thank you! Someone that remembers Snape isn't old! Ahhhh. This was a great chapter and Snape was dead on when he finally let Emily have it. I really like the way the characters interact and how they're staying true to their canon personalities.

Response from Guernica (Author of The Knight Errant Chronicles)

Yeah, for some reason people always seem to write Snape like he's fifty or sixty when he's really the same age as Harry's parents for heaven's sake.  He's only 35 in KEC, and that's not even middle-aged -- he's still a young man with a young man's desires and ambitions.Plus I've seen SO many fics that pair Snape with early-twenties and teenage women that I wanted to see him with a woman who is very nearly his own age -- Emily is only a few months younger than he is, even though she looks younger because Faeries are a longer-lived people than humans, and as such their young adulthood is longer.I do love JKR's characterizations and try to keep them in character as much as humanly possible.  Glad you're enjoying it!

Response from Guernica (Author of The Knight Errant Chronicles)

Yeah, for some reason people always seem to write Snape like he's fifty or sixty when he's really the same age as Harry's parents for heaven's sake.  He's only 35 in KEC, and that's not even middle-aged -- he's still a young man with a young man's desires and ambitions.Plus I've seen SO many fics that pair Snape with early-twenties and teenage women that I wanted to see him with a woman who is very nearly his own age -- Emily is only a few months younger than he is, even though she looks younger because Faeries are a longer-lived people than humans, and as such their young adulthood is longer.I do love JKR's characterizations and try to keep them in character as much as humanly possible.  Glad you're enjoying it!

10/10

teshara

A Tardis? Like the Doctor? For a suitcase?!

Response from Guernica (Author of The Knight Errant Chronicles)

You picked up on the Dr. Who reference! Yes, my fictional "Taerdis Leather Goods Company" makes suitcases, satchels, handbags, etc. with more room on the inside than on the outside. I threw that little detail in there just because I travel a lot and would love to have one myself. Preferably in black alligator leather with a green silk interior and a temperature-controlled wine cabinet.But ya know, not that I've thought about this or anything.

Response from Guernica (Author of The Knight Errant Chronicles)

You picked up on the Dr. Who reference! Yes, my fictional "Taerdis Leather Goods Company" makes suitcases, satchels, handbags, etc. with more room on the inside than on the outside. I threw that little detail in there just because I travel a lot and would love to have one myself. Preferably in black alligator leather with a green silk interior and a temperature-controlled wine cabinet.But ya know, not that I've thought about this or anything.

0/10

jessica

I used to read, and re-read this story on Occlumency. I am so thrilled that you are revising it (and only slightly - thank goodness) since I have long feared that it was an abandoned work of fiction.Re-reading this chapter was wonderful - your writing style is so fluid, lovely and lucid.

10/10

teshara

It was nice to see a flirty Lucius without him being a sleezeball.

Response from Guernica (Author of The Knight Errant Chronicles)

Thank you! I'd just read too many fics where Lucius is either a) a totally repulsive sleazeball trying to boff everything female, or b) a Hannibal Lecter-style eyeball-carving psycho, or c) an adoring sex god better endowed than John Holmes.And dammit, I just can't see him as ANY of the above! Besides, if he was an oozing sleaze, Emily would see through him in about one minute, so there wouldn't be all that fun sexual tension percolating between the two of them.Thanks for staying with it!

Response from Guernica (Author of The Knight Errant Chronicles)

Thank you! I'd just read too many fics where Lucius is either a) a totally repulsive sleazeball trying to boff everything female, or b) a Hannibal Lecter-style eyeball-carving psycho, or c) an adoring sex god better endowed than John Holmes.And dammit, I just can't see him as ANY of the above! Besides, if he was an oozing sleaze, Emily would see through him in about one minute, so there wouldn't be all that fun sexual tension percolating between the two of them.Thanks for staying with it!

10/10

teshara

Heh. Getting found out is always embarassing. I like the way you've put together the theory of fae magics with HP.

Response from Guernica (Author of The Knight Errant Chronicles)

Thank you!  Yes, after I read "Fantastic Beasts and Where to Find Them," and saw the entry about Fairies as vain little insects, I started thinking about how the current descendants of Puck, Oberon, and Titania would feel about that...and it kind of went from there.  I'm an absolute nerd for fantasy lit and European folklore, so it was great fun to put as much of it into KEC wherever I could.Thanks for all the reviews!

Response from Guernica (Author of The Knight Errant Chronicles)

Thank you!  Yes, after I read "Fantastic Beasts and Where to Find Them," and saw the entry about Fairies as vain little insects, I started thinking about how the current descendants of Puck, Oberon, and Titania would feel about that...and it kind of went from there.  I'm an absolute nerd for fantasy lit and European folklore, so it was great fun to put as much of it into KEC wherever I could.Thanks for all the reviews!

10/10

teshara

I like the way he reacts to her when she arrives at Hogwarts. I think it's very honest the way he's portrayed.

Response from Guernica (Author of The Knight Errant Chronicles)

Yes, I didn't think Snape would turn into some swingin' bachelor capable of being flirty or cheeky right under Dumbledore's nose; no, I figured he'd be monumentally embarrassed to discover his callbox paramour materializing under his nose at Hogwarts, and upon being confronted with her, to instantly begin to worry about his reputation rather than his romantic life. Thanks for the review!

Response from Guernica (Author of The Knight Errant Chronicles)

Yes, I didn't think Snape would turn into some swingin' bachelor capable of being flirty or cheeky right under Dumbledore's nose; no, I figured he'd be monumentally embarrassed to discover his callbox paramour materializing under his nose at Hogwarts, and upon being confronted with her, to instantly begin to worry about his reputation rather than his romantic life. Thanks for the review!

10/10

teshara

Ah so sad, leaving him like that. This is such a tantellizing story.

Response from Guernica (Author of The Knight Errant Chronicles)

Oh trust me, SS won't be left behind for long. Miss Spelled-With-a-Y and her romantic nemesis are just getting started!I hope you enjoy what's to come -- but no spoilers!

Response from Guernica (Author of The Knight Errant Chronicles)

Oh trust me, SS won't be left behind for long. Miss Spelled-With-a-Y and her romantic nemesis are just getting started!I hope you enjoy what's to come -- but no spoilers!

10/10

teshara

It's nice to see the fairies addressed in the HP universe. I also like the fact that the wizarding world is a little nervous about their presence.

10/10

teshara

I just wanted to tell how you how unique and special this story is. It's a real treat to have something this well thought out and well written in the fandom.

10/10

notsosaintly

Argh! Severus is always willing to entertain the benefit of the doubt ("if he's sincere")! Lucius is, I think, more evil than the Dark Lord. What would the Dark Lord say if (and when?) he finds out what Lucius is doing, that the reason Severus stays away is because of Lucius' antics? But all that aside, it is absolutely tender how Severus depends on Emily and how he tended to her needs when she was burned. Little by little their relationship changes as their perpectives change and realizations occur. I'm enjoying watching this aspect of the story...... as much as I want to ream Lucius a new one and roast him on a spit.

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10/10

kiwimom

This is far and away the best fan fiction I have ever read. Please keep it coming!!

Response from Guernica (Author of The Knight Errant Chronicles)

Thanks so much!  We've got another chapter soon to be validated, and lots more to come!  Thanks for reading!

Response from Guernica (Author of The Knight Errant Chronicles)

Thanks so much!  We've got another chapter soon to be validated, and lots more to come!  Thanks for reading!

0/10

antigeech

Your Severus is amazing. A-maz-ing. I want him to be real. I melted at that last bit, and the defensive he went on for Emily? Pure perfection. This is a work of art. 

10/10

Alexia Evans

I'm sure you hear this a lot but I still have to say it.  This story is sensational!! 

Response from Guernica (Author of The Knight Errant Chronicles)

Thank you! The second half of this chapter with the resolution of the Big Murder Plot Cliffhanger should be up very soon!

Response from Alexia Evans (Reviewer)

Great!!!  I can't wait :)

9/10

zenobia

oooh, your wicked girl, such a  cliffhanger.Please, update soon.

Response from Guernica (Author of The Knight Errant Chronicles)

C'mon, if I spent all my time assuring you that all would be love and sunshine, I'd bore you all to tears!  But never fear, the second half of this chapter is coming right up!

10/10

a1severuslives

Hi there, thanks so much for your story. I honestly haven't been able to stop reading it. I have read through to the end , and was unable to stop myself from reading  it on the other site. Please, please continue your work, as your story is the only one I have read that is substantial enough to save Severus from book seven. Though after having read what you had posted up at the other site I know Severus is truly not dead and I am happy where he is!  If you ever do tire of updating KEC could you pretty please jump forwards and save him in DH!

10/10

Isode

Your's is one of the first strories I read in fanficdom, but I was dissappointed when it just stopped and was no longer being updated.  When I saw  KEC on this sight I have to admit I neglected to even look at it again because I like closure and was affraid that it was just being posted here with no updates intended.  But something made me check the reviews for Chpt.1 and noticed that you were activiely responding and working on the story. Your writting was and is my inspiration.  So far not many stories I have read can compare to yours, the detail and the element of fantasy is a wonderful mix and the length of KEC is fantastic (love indepth long reads).  Emily is a strong female character who is intellegent, meaning I have never felt a "squishy" awkward moments when reading your work.  Lacking confidence in the past to leave a review on the other sight I want to say please continue this story, you are very talented, and I need closure! 

9/10

brontegirl04

Juliet was the Capulet and Romeo the Montague.

Response from Guernica (Author of The Knight Errant Chronicles)

Into everyone's brain, there sometimes comes a little flatulence. Fixed!

9/10

a1severuslives

You have done a grand job of making the Slytherin set have 3D personalities. Much more interesting than the original work. Love your dialog. Enjoy your original characters. Please continue. I enjoyed Sirius. Adore Severus of course. Credible motives for all joining DeathEaters, more believable than flimsy original JKR .JKR seems to have forgotten that even amongst real life Nazis there were genuine heros obliquely foiling Hitler where they could. Once more great job.

0/10

justjen

I like the way you portray Draco. He lives such a sheltered, priviledged life. It's no wonder he acts like such a prat towards 'the low lives' he has to associate with.

Response from Guernica (Author of The Knight Errant Chronicles)

Thank you!  I've always though that Draco was a fairly ordinary spoiled brat who turned out the way he did because he picked his parents badly.  This really came to a head when I read HBP, what with his private crying jags in the bathroom when the pressure to commit horrible crimes got to be too much,  Draco strikes me as nothing so much as a kid who happened to be the son of a Nazi war criminal -- sure, he's a corrupt bully, but he's not as bad as they're trying to force him to become.

Anyway, thanks for the review!  There'll be lots more to come in future chapters!

10/10

zenobia

I hope you continue this story, I do liked it.

Response from Guernica (Author of The Knight Errant Chronicles)

Next chapter is in the queue!  Thanks for staying with it!

10/10

firefly124

Yay!  Much as I've enjoyed the forays into the past, I'm glad to have caught back up to the "present."  Excellent showdowns between Emily and Severus, and I love that he found himself spurred on to research how to better treat iron burns for the Fae.  Can't wait to see this Order meeting!

10/10

firefly124

Yikes.  Bella really is systematically digging her claws into him, isn't she?  And he's handing her ammunition and doesn't even realize it.    I can see why he was even more upset than some men might be at getting "loved and left" at King's Cross!  Much as I'm anxious to get back to the "present," I am very much enjoying learning all this history of Severus' life.

Response from Guernica (Author of The Knight Errant Chronicles)

Indeed, poor Severus starts out laboring under the illusion that he can trust and confide in the woman he's sleeping with, naive lad that he is. And you're also right in thinking that having the rug yanked out from under him like that might have left him more sensitive than the norm in the face of betrayal (or perceived betrayal) by his lover. Maybe the dressing-down he gave Emily at the Hallowe'en Ball was just a little more vehement than her offense truly deserved... but we'll see what comes of that in future chapters!

10/10

firefly124

Then he reached for her True Name.

Damn! I knew he was being slimy and manipulative but had no idea to what extent!

Response from Guernica (Author of The Knight Errant Chronicles)

Yes, for me much of Lucius's character is about that which he covets, and seeing as how he's had the best of everything the Wizarding world has to offer from before it ever occurred to him to ever want anything, I see him as getting a little obsessive about that which someone else wants more than anything in the world.  (Like Dorien Tumnus's wife, for example.)  The idea that Emily has something that he can never, EVER have, no matter how thoroughly he seduces and debauches her physically... you know that's gotta drive the man crazy.

But Lucius has only begun with the sliminess and manipulations -- I cannot WAIT until you see Part III!

10/10

firefly124

I really love seeing this side of Severus.  You do an excellent job contrasting the usual Bastard!Snape with Honorable!Snape and yet keeping him identifiably the same character.

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