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The Knight Errant Chronicles

1: Lexicon

2: Part First: The Hart Assurgent: Prologue

3: Part First: The Hart Assurgent: Chapter 1

4: Part First: The Hart Assurgent: Chapter 2

5: Part First: The Hart Assurgent: Chapter 3

6: Part First: The Hart Assurgent: Chapter 4

7: Part First: The Hart Assurgent: Chapter 5

8: Part First: The Hart Assurgent: Chapter 6

9: Part First: The Hart Assurgent: Chapter 7

10: Part First: The Hart Assurgent: Chapter 8

11: Part First: The Hart Assurgent: Chapter 9

12: Part First: The Hart Assurgent: Chapter 10

13: Part First: The Hart Assurgent: Chapter 11

14: Part First: The Hart Assurgent: Chapter 12

15: Part First: The Hart Assurgent: Chapter 13

16: Part Second: The Hart Rampant: Prologue

17: Part Second: The Hart Rampant: Prologue, Part 2

18: Part Second: The Hart Rampant: Chapter 14

19: Part Second: The Hart Rampant: Chapter 15

20: Part Second: The Hart Rampant: Chapter 16

21: Part Second: The Hart Rampant: Chapter 17, Part 1

22: Part Second: The Hart Rampant: Chapter 17, Part 2

23: Part Second: The Hart Rampant: Chapter 18

24: Part Second: The Hart Rampant: Chapter 19

25: Part Second: The Hart Rampant: Chapter 20, Part 1

26: Part Second: The Hart Rampant: Chapter 20, Part 2

27: Part Second: The Hart Rampant: Chapter 21

28: Part Second: The Hart Rampant: Chapter 22

29: Part Second: The Hart Rampant: Chapter 23, Part 1

30: Part Second: The Hart Rampant: Chapter 23, Part 2

31: Part Second: The Hart Rampant: Chapter 24, Part 1

32: Part Second: The Hart Rampant: Chapter 24, Part 2

33: Part Second: The Hart Rampant, Chapter 25, Part 1

34: Part Second: The Hart Rampant, Chapter 25, Part 2

35: Part Second: The Hart Rampant, Chapter 26

36: Part Third: The Hart Subvertant: Prologue Part 1

37: Part Third: The Hart Subvertant: Prologue Part 2

38: Part Third: The Hart Subvertant: Prologue Part 3

39: Part Third: The Hart Subvertant: Prologue Part 4

40: Part Third: The Hart Subvertant: Prologue Part 5

41: Part Third: The Hart Subvertant, Chapter 27, Part 1

42: Part Third: The Hart Subvertant, Chapter 27, Part 2

43: Part Third: The Hart Subvertant, Chapter 28, Part 1

44: Part Third: The Hart Subvertant, Chapter 28, Part 2

45: Part Third: The Hart Subvertant, Chapter 29, Part 1

46: Part Third: The Hart Subvertant, Chapter 29, Part 2

47: Part Third: The Hart Subvertant, Chapter 30, Part 1

48: Part Third: The Hart Subvertant, Chapter 30, Part 2

49: Part Third: The Hart Subvertant, Chapter 31, Part 1

50: Part Third: The Hart Subvertant, Chapter 31, Part 2

51: Part Third: The Hart Subvertant, Chapter 32

52: Part Third: The Hart Subvertant, Chapter 33

53: Part Third: The Hart Subvertant, Chapter 34

54: Part Third: The Hart Subvertant, Chapter 35

55: Part Third: The Hart Subvertant, Chapter 36

The Knight Errant Chronicles

Guernica

142 Reviews   |   142 Ratings, 0 Likes, 134 Favorites )

Drama Romance Erotica Smut General Action/Adventure Hogwarts Castle 625,553 Words 55 Chapters WIP
Lucius Malfoy Original Character Severus Snape Ronan Rowena Ravenclaw Rubeus Hagrid Salazar Slytherin Seamus Finnegan Sibyll Trelawney Walden Macnair Bellatrix Lestrange

For centuries, the Faery people have been a mysterious, sometimes persecuted minority in the Wizard world. But now Albus Dumbledore has persuaded them to send an officer of their military to teach the Fae canon of magic at Hogwarts. Meanwhile, Severus Snape spends a memorable evening with a stranger in King's Cross... Set during the Goblet of Fire/Order of the Phoenix timeframe. WINNER of the Multifaceted Fanfic Awards for "Best Snape Fic" and "Identity ~ The Original Character Award."

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Chapters (55)

Chapter 1: Lexicon

Chapter 2: Part First: The Hart Assurgent: Prologue

Chapter 3: Part First: The Hart Assurgent: Chapter 1

Chapter 4: Part First: The Hart Assurgent: Chapter 2

Chapter 5: Part First: The Hart Assurgent: Chapter 3

Chapter 6: Part First: The Hart Assurgent: Chapter 4

Chapter 7: Part First: The Hart Assurgent: Chapter 5

Chapter 8: Part First: The Hart Assurgent: Chapter 6

Chapter 9: Part First: The Hart Assurgent: Chapter 7

Chapter 10: Part First: The Hart Assurgent: Chapter 8

Chapter 11: Part First: The Hart Assurgent: Chapter 9

Chapter 12: Part First: The Hart Assurgent: Chapter 10

Chapter 13: Part First: The Hart Assurgent: Chapter 11

Chapter 14: Part First: The Hart Assurgent: Chapter 12

Chapter 15: Part First: The Hart Assurgent: Chapter 13

Chapter 16: Part Second: The Hart Rampant: Prologue

Chapter 17: Part Second: The Hart Rampant: Prologue, Part 2

Chapter 18: Part Second: The Hart Rampant: Chapter 14

Chapter 19: Part Second: The Hart Rampant: Chapter 15

Chapter 20: Part Second: The Hart Rampant: Chapter 16

Chapter 21: Part Second: The Hart Rampant: Chapter 17, Part 1

Chapter 22: Part Second: The Hart Rampant: Chapter 17, Part 2

Chapter 23: Part Second: The Hart Rampant: Chapter 18

Chapter 24: Part Second: The Hart Rampant: Chapter 19

Chapter 25: Part Second: The Hart Rampant: Chapter 20, Part 1

Chapter 26: Part Second: The Hart Rampant: Chapter 20, Part 2

Chapter 27: Part Second: The Hart Rampant: Chapter 21

Chapter 28: Part Second: The Hart Rampant: Chapter 22

Chapter 29: Part Second: The Hart Rampant: Chapter 23, Part 1

Chapter 30: Part Second: The Hart Rampant: Chapter 23, Part 2

Chapter 31: Part Second: The Hart Rampant: Chapter 24, Part 1

Chapter 32: Part Second: The Hart Rampant: Chapter 24, Part 2

Chapter 33: Part Second: The Hart Rampant, Chapter 25, Part 1

Chapter 34: Part Second: The Hart Rampant, Chapter 25, Part 2

Chapter 35: Part Second: The Hart Rampant, Chapter 26

Chapter 36: Part Third: The Hart Subvertant: Prologue Part 1

Chapter 37: Part Third: The Hart Subvertant: Prologue Part 2

Chapter 38: Part Third: The Hart Subvertant: Prologue Part 3

Chapter 39: Part Third: The Hart Subvertant: Prologue Part 4

Chapter 40: Part Third: The Hart Subvertant: Prologue Part 5

Chapter 41: Part Third: The Hart Subvertant, Chapter 27, Part 1

Chapter 42: Part Third: The Hart Subvertant, Chapter 27, Part 2

Chapter 43: Part Third: The Hart Subvertant, Chapter 28, Part 1

Chapter 44: Part Third: The Hart Subvertant, Chapter 28, Part 2

Chapter 45: Part Third: The Hart Subvertant, Chapter 29, Part 1

Chapter 46: Part Third: The Hart Subvertant, Chapter 29, Part 2

Chapter 47: Part Third: The Hart Subvertant, Chapter 30, Part 1

Chapter 48: Part Third: The Hart Subvertant, Chapter 30, Part 2

Chapter 49: Part Third: The Hart Subvertant, Chapter 31, Part 1

Chapter 50: Part Third: The Hart Subvertant, Chapter 31, Part 2

Chapter 51: Part Third: The Hart Subvertant, Chapter 32

Chapter 52: Part Third: The Hart Subvertant, Chapter 33

Chapter 53: Part Third: The Hart Subvertant, Chapter 34

Chapter 54: Part Third: The Hart Subvertant, Chapter 35

Chapter 55: Part Third: The Hart Subvertant, Chapter 36


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0/10

justjen

There's nothing like a little bit of back-story to enlighten us in such an entertaining way.

Response from Guernica (Author of The Knight Errant Chronicles)

Yes, alas, HBP and then DH canon-shafted me pretty good on Snape's KEC background, BUT, I like this Prologue too much to scrap it.  Glad you enjoyed it!

0/10

justjen

Sometimes a little bit of meddling is not a bad thing! That they are both so private and reserved it may take more than a little push in the right direction.... SHOVE!!

0/10

Titania

The Taerdis CoI love this story, but must confess that I lost track of it all and am having to read from the beginning.  No complaints here.I must confess to being curious...is Taerdis Co, a play on TARDIS?  Are you perchance a Dr. Who fan?  If so, very clever!  If not, great coincendence!Live long and prosper,

Response from Guernica (Author of The Knight Errant Chronicles)

Response from Guernica (Author of The Knight Errant Chronicles)

Indeed it is a Dr. Who reference!  You know you're a total fashion geek when your first response upon discovering the Tardis is "ZOMG could I get a purse or suitcase like that?!  PUHLEEZE?!"These days I've also become something of a Torchwood geek as well, thanks to the wonders of Netflix.   I love getting BBC programming in  the States. 

Response from Guernica (Author of The Knight Errant Chronicles)

Response from Guernica (Author of The Knight Errant Chronicles)

Indeed it is a Dr. Who reference!  You know you're a total fashion geek when your first response upon discovering the Tardis is "ZOMG could I get a purse or suitcase like that?!  PUHLEEZE?!"These days I've also become something of a Torchwood geek as well, thanks to the wonders of Netflix.   I love getting BBC programming in  the States. 

10/10

notsosaintly

Yes, Emily, you really should tell him.  Both of you should end this adolescent nonsense and own up to some like, at the very least, on both of your parts – darn it!Guernica, would you please tell them that Dumbledore's old enough to have been there/done that and to listen to him, for all that is holy on this plane or the next.  If you don't, I shall need to start hexing the pair of them.

Response from Guernica (Author of The Knight Errant Chronicles)

Heeeee, and the fun part is, they both think they've hidden  all their highly inappropriate feelings away so carefully and nobody has the slightest idea how they feel about each other... And they both have all this romantic angst percolating away and absolutely no one with whom to actually talk about it...Can't wait till you see the next chapter!

Response from notsosaintly (Reviewer)

I can't wait as well.  But your little icon there has me a-wonderin' now.  What are you up to?  I have to go check the queue to see if you've loaded it yet.

Response from Guernica (Author of The Knight Errant Chronicles)

Heeeee, and the fun part is, they both think they've hidden  all their highly inappropriate feelings away so carefully and nobody has the slightest idea how they feel about each other... And they both have all this romantic angst percolating away and absolutely no one with whom to actually talk about it...Can't wait till you see the next chapter!

Response from notsosaintly (Reviewer)

I can't wait as well.  But your little icon there has me a-wonderin' now.  What are you up to?  I have to go check the queue to see if you've loaded it yet.

0/10

liagiba84

Wonderful epic story. Waiting impatiently for the rest....

Response from Guernica (Author of The Knight Errant Chronicles)

Oh there will be lots lots LOTS more, believe me! Thanks for sticking with it!

10/10

Maela

Just doing my 6 month check to see if there's any chance you'll post the rest of the chapterson this site and finish this story.  :P  Still one of my all-time favorites!

10/10

notsosaintly

Emily to the rescue?  God, I hope so.  You had my eyes riveted to the screen with this chapter. 

Response from Guernica (Author of The Knight Errant Chronicles)

All the plot points laid out in the last few chapters come to what I hope is a rather pulse-pounding denouement in Ch. 26 -- but no spoilers! It might be a LEEEEETLE bit longer than my usual single chapter, but I've been told it goes by quickly. Can't WAIT till you see it!

For all seasons,

Guernica

10/10

smrahl

I've read your story in its entirety, and I must say -- I'm impressed with your ability to create a dynamic additional world as an addendum to the Wizarding world presented within the Harry Potter books.

I had some difficulty with Emily, particularly at the beginning.  I understand that her race requires that she be physically attractive, but for a while I was suspicious that it was a justification for the dreaded MS beauty.  However, your development of Fae culture, customs, and characters soon made Emily's physical appeal not only plausible, but enjoyable as well.

It becomes easier and easier to forgive her for being too good, too talented, and too innocently trusting of cads like Lucius Malfoy.  She has just enough flaws to keep her from being too perfect, but for a while, there, I wasn't sure.

You've done well.  You deserve the award you've received for original-character development.  Congratulations.  I'll certainly continue reading.

Response from Guernica (Author of The Knight Errant Chronicles)

Well, let's see, she's physically attractive by Caucasian human standards and the standards of Faery fauns, satyrs, sidhe, boggins, and sluagh.

Goblins and pixies might find her kind of overly tall, pale, and skinny, nixies would find her too tall, stocky, and lacking in flight ability, giants would find her too small and her conversation too complicated, tiger pookas would find her too small and too bald and whiskerless, and spider pookas and centaurs would think she had rather too few legs to be really attractive. And seeing as how veela are always female and Emily is straight, she'll never get to pick up on any of them, either. Plus not all Fae sluagh would go for her either -- Emily's marriage to Dorien was considered interracial by Faery standards.

So as with everything, beauty is in the eye of the beholder.

Plus, I find it really humanizes a person to depict her as having inconvenient bodily functions like oestrus, and now and then having a decent sense of humour about walking into a really bad joke at her own expense. Tends to make even an otherworldly character more sympathetic, in my opinion.

Anyway, I hope you had as much fun reading about Em as I did creating and writing her. Thanks for the review!

10/10

kittykat91419

I loved getting this first update since I found this story.  You write very long chapters and I love the story.  You do a particularily excellent job of picking up Lucius' point of view on events.  I think you do a really good job of showing us how events can be manipulated for everyone's goal.  I am a little surprised that Emily would take things so quickly from Lucius with how he talked about Dumbledore given how close Gwydion and Dumbledore seem to be.  I suppose that, knowing the whole story, the reader spends a lot of time cringing at Emily's actions.  Keep on writing and I will definitely keep on reading!!

Response from Guernica (Author of The Knight Errant Chronicles)

Thank you! Yes, seeing as how Emily feels more of an affinity with and has a close peer relationship with her old flame Lucius than she does with the ever-busy and preoccupied Dumbledore, she does just tend to favour the fellow who pays more attention to her without really thinking about it. To her credit though, she does eventually figure out what was going on, and takes steps to remedy her errors in judgment.

And yes, these chronicles of the Knight Errant are very much a fish-out-of-water tale, so oftentimes the ardent Potter fan knows more about the situation Emily is facing than Emily herself. Anyway, thanks for the review!

10/10

lexa

This is ever so heartbreaking...

Response from Guernica (Author of The Knight Errant Chronicles)

Alas, heartbreak happens in JKR's Potterverse with regularity. We can't expect everything to always be hearts 'n flowers for these two, BUT, I promise it won't be this bleak forever. More to come!

0/10

lexa

a brilliant chapter, and really well written, but with you, that's pretty much a given... but you have me deadly curious now: what did snape want to say to emily, when he interrupted her sword-cleaning? If you can't, or don't want to say, that's fine, but maybe...?

Response from Guernica (Author of The Knight Errant Chronicles)

You might find out what Snape wanted to say to Emily that day when he interrupted her sword-cleaning -- it just MIGHT come up in later chapters. (Certainly he's had some time to think about it since then!)

But seeing as how he reacted furiously to Emily's first attempt at patching things up the night before, and not long after that was told that the woman he'd been so angry and suspicious toward had been tragically widowed in years past... well, even Snape has admitted that he's not made of stone, and might have done some hard thinking after the Hallowe'en Ball about whether his harshness toward her was really justified.

However, given how little practice the poor man has at apologizing to women or sustaining interpersonal relationships without any sort of political agenda in mind -- who knows if he would have found the right words to say to her in that moment. He might have just made things worse, kind of like Mr. Darcy offending Lizzie as he tries to propose to her.

But it MIGHT come up again in Part III -- all I can say is stay with it! MUCH more to come

10/10

togspled

So yeah, i totally want some of that blue faerie!!! Story is excellent! was overjoyed to see a new chapter posted. cant wait for the next.

Response from Guernica (Author of The Knight Errant Chronicles)

Glad you enjoyed it so much!  Don't confuse Faery absinthe  from the Seventh Kingdom (which has an effect on Snape much like the human drug Ecstasy) with real, Second-World absinthe, however.  I've tried real-world absinthe in Amsterdam, and all I got for my trouble was one hell of a stomach- and headache.  For all of its literary accounts, it's really pretty foul-tasting stuff, alas.

That said -- I cannot WAIT until you see the next few chapters, in which we see what came of Snape's little foray into Faery nightlife... all I can say is, STAY TUNED!!!

Response from togspled (Reviewer)

too bad i dont do drugs. that sound slike an awesome feeling. oh well. ill stick to living it thru snape. lolanyways... i will definitely stay tuned. I cant wait to see them either!

Response from Guernica (Author of The Knight Errant Chronicles)

Yes, as much as the Fae enjoy their recreational hallucinogens (which for them have religious significance, rather like Native Americans and peyote) they are as you can see NOT recommended for human consumption, especially if you don't have a Fianna knight to keep you out of trouble in that state!!!

And as much fun as Snape had while "in the arms of the Blue Faerie", it's entirely possible that he might end up paying for it later... MUCH more to come of this little development!  

10/10

notsosaintly

Makes me want a Blue Faerie.  I wonder how this will fair for Severus and Emily now?  I'm looking forward to finding out ... and am glad that I get to find out first. *snicker*  

By the way, this story just amazes me.  You have such a wonderful imagination, and the story is written in such depth.  I absolutely love it.

Response from Guernica (Author of The Knight Errant Chronicles)

Alas, tempting as the Blue Faerie may seem, she's a treacherous wench who packs a WICKED hangover, she is...    Snape may live to regret meeting her... but no spoilers!

I am beyond delighted to entertain such a discerning reader (and editrix) as yourself.  Cheers! 

10/10

ylang_two

Boy, has the drama cranked up several decibels or WHAT. At last, Em's (partially) wise to Malfoy's wiles and designs. GOOD. Whatever it takes to push her into Snape's arms, where she belongs.

*happy dances*-for both Hermione and Em. Not that it's a big surprise. I hate the RW/Herm canon 'ship with a passion. I hope you hook dear Hermione with some hot, intelligent Faerie guy not unlike Em's late husband. . . . . .

Oh man--Barty & Malfoy's plans to incapacitate Em give me the creeps. . . . that assassin! *gulp* *yikes* with iron being Faekind's achilles' heel. . . . !!  This has to be the most ominous cliffy you've reached yet, and I know there's much more to come *waiting anxiously for updates*

10/10

togspled

Oh NO!!!!

Response from Guernica (Author of The Knight Errant Chronicles)

Ooooooooooh!!!!  I can't wait till you see what happens next! 

10/10

ylang_two

uh oh!!  I'm kinda holding my breath to see when she finally figures out Lucius' very dark Dark Side.  He makes incest sound very attractive. . . . almost.  I hope that Emily can stand fast and not seriously entertain thoughts of marrying into his family for more than several seconds.  Keep Snape in mind, hon!!  Girrl Power.

Response from Guernica (Author of The Knight Errant Chronicles)

Yes, indeed, while Emily has never thought Lucius was the most morally upright of men, she would never have imagined the depths of cruelty and depravity he's capable of, seeing as how she'd never really seen that side of him until now. 

But she has started to see Snape as something of "conscience"; snarky as he is, he does have her best interests at heart most of the time.  We MIGHT see a great deal more of Snape with Emily later... but no spoilers!  Ooooh, I can't wait till you read the next chapters!!!  *wibble* 

10/10

togspled

Oh shit!!! I hope he didnt mean to do that-- i totally was loving the draco/emily thing. Damn it!

Response from Guernica (Author of The Knight Errant Chronicles)

*evil laugh* Rather a tense place to end it, I was hoping...

And yes, older women are not always immune to the charms of gorgeous young jailbait, even though Emily's code of honour would absolutely prevent her from ever laying a finger on Draco while he's still a minor.

It makes for some SERIOUS dramatic tension though... stay tuned!

10/10

ylang_two

For whatever else Snape is, he's a man of Honour.  I can't wait to see how Emily will react when she realizes Malfoy's sleazy manipulations of her--she'll see RED and more, once she (and Severus) hear Liria's entire story.  For all his wealth and ostentation, I'd take a million Snapes over any Lucius anyday.  

Response from Guernica (Author of The Knight Errant Chronicles)

Exactly, for all his surliness and grudge-bearing, we all know that Snape will always come through when anyone else is in truly desperate danger, even if he dislikes that person. (Look at all the times he's saved undeserving little Harry's neck!) Emily might absolutely agree that she'd take Snape over Lucius any day... but alas, Snape's given every indication that he can't stand her...

That MAY change in the future, but no spoilers! Thanks for the review!

10/10

Brizywitch

Loved the Mot de Puissance lecture - especially Nevilles choice of Dumbledore. And, it was about time Lucius had to leave it blue. That man has way too much sex than can be normal. But, if you've got it, use it. Can't wait for the final installment! I Love...well, you already know how much I'm into this story, so no point reiterating.

Response from Guernica (Author of The Knight Errant Chronicles)

Thank you, sweetie! Yes, when I wrote the "Emily teaching class" scenes, I was definitely trying to establish a sense of fun and playfulness. And believe me, Lucius is a slut nonpareil -- in Ch. 18, he has not yet BEGUN to slut. Can't wait till you see what's coming up next!

10/10

ylang_two

Oh Dear!!  He's trying to recruit her for the DE's???  Good thing she didn't mention seeing his Dark Mark--but she'd better educate herself on what they are and what they mean asap.

Response from Guernica (Author of The Knight Errant Chronicles)

Indeed, in HP canon the Dark Lord seems to have an active interest in recruiting other supernatural factions, i.e. the giants and the goblins over to his side, so I figured it would be natural for him to covet the Faeries as well. And alas -- seeing as how she's a Beauxbatons alum and never spent too much time in the British Wizarding world, Em has never really learned what a Dark Mark is or how they work... this MAY be important later...

All I can say is, STAY TUNED!!! There's lots more to come!

9/10

Fallen_Angel_Mione

This story is brill, and this chapter was awesome! I find it a lovely picture of Lucius, and I'd been suspecting he had ulterior motives for Em a couple chapters back. It would be interesting to see if Em will try to crack Snape's snarky mood soon, and maybe be around when Snape is showing his forearm to the Minister.

Again, excellent chapter. Can't wait for the next one! :D 

10/10

notsosaintly

*gasp*  I should have expected something like this.  Why did I let down my guard as far as Lucius is concerned?  Why?  Gosh, I'm so stupid. 

Okay.  I'm officially on tenterhooks.  Brilliant job!

Response from Guernica (Author of The Knight Errant Chronicles)

Yeah, something about getting showered with diamonds and great sex and having your least little whim indulged can really turn a girl's head, somehow, especially when she's feeling lonesome, homesick, and rejected...!!!

But Malfoy being Malfoy, of course it comes with a price... but trust me, there will be MUCH more to this later! 

Response from notsosaintly (Reviewer)

Oh, I believe you. And I won't be fooled again! ... (I think.)

10/10

shadowcat7130

My god, this epic deserves so much more attention! I just read the whole thing to date in a few sittings, and I'm absolutely enamored of it. Initially I'd been leery of reading an OC, but Emily is no Mary Sue. I love her for her foibles, though her otherworldly perfection - or should I say, the perfection of her other world - can get slightly irritating on occasion.

I'm sure I'll leave more extended reviews for you at some later date, but I just wanted to comment upon one thing you've done a remarkable job of - I've been unknowingly shifted from being enamored with Lucius to hating his dastardly motivations. Initially, I saw him through Emily's eyes, but after reading chapters in his and Severus's perspective, I've gained new insight and newfound disgust. 

I really hope you're publishing something in the real world, because you deserve to make money off of writing this good. 

Response from Guernica (Author of The Knight Errant Chronicles)

Thank you very kindly! I'm always pleased to hear that folks get so interested they tear through this behemoth in record time (and to hear that they don't think the OC is a Mary Sue!)

Regarding Arcadia's seeming perfection though, keep in mind that it's only been described by a homesick Faerie and a Tithe page vacationing at a royal court -- of course it's going to come off as the object of desperate longing to Emily, and as picture-postcard perfect to the wastrel aristocrat that was Lucius. (However, just wait until the later scene when Em walks across a battlefield feeling the blood-soaked ground squelching under her hooves... the place ain't as perfect as all that.)

Thanks for the remarks about my protrayal of Lucius -- I've seen him done as SociopathicHannibalLecter!Lucius so often that I'm having a lot of fun with SilverTonguedWomanizingBastard!Lucius. Yes, he's a pig, but damn it all if he isn't a LOT of fun to write. I've often described him as a "reptilian id in bespoke robes."

Also, I am in the process of writing an original novel right now! It's called Marble Angel, and is an urban noir suspense thriller. (A good friend refers to it as "The River's Edge in the L.A. goth scene.")

You can find a few excerpts from it in the Files section here:

http://groups.yahoo.com/group/Guernica-Fics/

10/10

Mercury193

Best story ever! Very well done!

Response from Guernica (Author of The Knight Errant Chronicles)

And I am ever so grateful!  Thank you!

10/10

ylang_two

The coffee scene betw. Emily and Snape was lovely (during Round 2 of the TT).  Could it be that Snapey's a little jealous of Emily and Malfoy?? 

Response from Guernica (Author of The Knight Errant Chronicles)

Thanks!  As I was writing the "Snape and Emily go off on the Tournament" scene I kept thinking, oh, man, it's a couple of teachers cracking each other up with obscure academic humor -- everybody is going to think this scene is SO geeky. But oddly enough, folks seem to like it.

And indeed Snape's a little jealous of Emily and Malfoy -- maybe even more than a little jealous.  (But could Lucius be twigging on to Emily/Snape?  Hmm...)

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