Loved the two way charmed diaries - great idea and loved the desperate way the Severus kissed her in his office - I just love a romance.  Great chappie and cannot wait to read the next.

Liked the latest chapter - so she has to marry Severus in the future? The last part of the chapter was so sad where he is reflecting on what he will never have with Hermione in marriage and how he would want it - tears

Hermione and Severus discussing how they were going to get back at the twins - great plot and cannot wait to see what you let them do to Fred and George.  I loved the line you wrote with Severus telling her not to court any boy and that it would bring down his wrath - so masculine and sexy.  Now they have to tell Dumbledore - I wonder what you are going to have him say.

Hermione has already put two and two together - the twins are in deep trouble - love it - sure to involved some nasty hexes in the near future - laugh.  I loved Severus waring with himself - no not happening and then him thinking some other youth might have her and already jealousy is rearing its ugly head - good writing I might say. Then Severus finding out the twins are involevd - brillant.

Loved the first chapter and was shocked that it was a permanent love potion - will they fight it or will they through caution to the wind - caution to the wind I am betting.  Love the shocked reactions from Severus. 

LOL!  Oh poor Snape!  Or perhaps I should say... lucky Hermione.  This is an entertaining little fic you have written.  Ah, perhaps they should just run off to Las Vegas and get married.  They could mate like bunnies there because like the Vegas commercial says... "What happens in Vegas, stays in Vegas." 

Snort!  I think I'm gonna like this one.  I love the twins mischief making first of all.  Secondly, I love when Severus battles the love bug.  Heh!  Going back to read.  Thanks for making me giggle.

"AN: And the plot thickens. More mayhem and craziness to follow." That's really good to know.

I just thought transfiguration was exhausting magic. Isn't that dangerous to do so just after destroying a horcrux? For the rest I love it as ever.

i love your story.

it is thoroughly thought-out.

I'm not much of a reviewer, i just adore.

I've been reading this story for a while, and finally decided to leave a review. I love the development of Hermione and Severus' marriage. They obviously truly love each other. I think Hermione's plan regarding the Unbreakable is a really good idea. It might work more to their advantage than they realize. I wonder how Hermione will react to the news that Severus was ordered to get her pregnant. I'm sure she wouldn't mind having his baby, but I know she'll think the timing is horrible; which it is.

And it thickens! She wisely thinks she should keep their actual relationship quiet, yet VM wants him to knock her up and wave it in Harry's face. Curiouser and curiouser!

I'm glad Remus is being more levelheaded about this than he was in the previous chapters. It will be good to Ron and his scheming involved, and I think including Ginny is a stroke of genius. It shows her that even though the others may not agree, Severus, Hermione and Remus at least believe her to be adult enough to be included.

Good job! 

Interesting chapter.  Can't wait for the mayhem this meeting will create.

Love this fic!!! 

Wonder when Severus is going to drop the bombshell about getting her pregnant... and how they're going to keep Harry and the Weasleys from hexing him...

Looking forward to the next! 

FYI Paragraph beginning with "Not  rash." 5th sentence-   bad decision is not pluralized. Should be. / Harry buzzed HER? lips over Ginny's cheeek?   Still some errors, but essentially a great chapter. Thanks. I enjoy this story tremendously.

I wonder when and if Severus will tell Hermione he's been ordered to impregnate her. She might agree since she could then visit him more often in Azkaban if he's sent there. Perhaps having a child would lessen their need to be close together.I look forward to reading about the Unbreakable Vow and how the Order members take the idea of Severus being involved with them again. I am sure that Severus would feel better if some people, like Minerva, start to trust him more.

oh goody more mayhem and craziness is coming I can't wait.  Vivian B you are the Witch.  Keep up the awesome work.

Hey, alright. I just finished CE and am totally happy with the end and that is rare. Very rare.  It was really funny at several points. ^^ Are you aware how often a chapter ends with somebody apparating to some place? Oh, and when Hermione got pregnant I got this thought, when she is in labour, will Severus feel this as well? He would propably be sitting in the waiting room, more desperate then Hermione and have to be consoled by Harry. XD Just wanted to share this thought and praise your story. Really well done, in my opinion.
Mo

I hope that Ron learns to love someone else. Fighting the Horcruxes is bad enough without having him pining after Hermione. Hermione definitely needs to make sure she doesn't reveal anymore secrets to people. Perhaps if Severus makes the Unbreakable Vow in front of the whole Order (or at least the main people) then they won't have to be so secretive about some things.Hermione also needs to learn to trust Severus more. He is so knowledgeable and intelligent that I am sure that he could help her with most of her problems.

Love it! 

Severus' threats to teach Ron a lesson for calling his wife something like that made me grin. Glad he was somewhat okay with her slip (because it would make her 'less miserable' having her friends know the truth). 

Liked Harry's complete and utter shock at the party, and his gratitude to Hermione for thinking of it.

One horcurx down! Now they gotta figure out what, and then where, the other ones are... 

Looking forward to seeing what you come up with next! 

Ok, one thing before praise. I believe the wedding rings were platinum, weren't they? I've read so many of these it's a blur, but I think I'm certain on this one, it came up more than once. Right. So back to the awesomeness. I enjoyed it, I love how your characters reacted to each other, liked the mention on how the effectiveness of the cold shoulder had worn a bit over time, and in general I was happy to see another chapter. Happy writing!

Glad to see the update.  Looking forward to the next.

Wonderful that Ron is coming around to the right way of thinking, I hope it lasts.  Way didn't Harry take his hands out of his pockets to pat him on the back?  Did I miss something?  Do I need to go back and read it again?  Will they ever find out what else was in that locket?  Sorry about all the questions.  I can't wait for the next chapter.

I thought I had noticed other mistakes in your story in the first chapter, but it wasn't until I got to "distain" that I realized your story hadn't been fixed to the standards of TPP.