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Chocolate Enchantment

1: 1: Making Contact

2: 2: Messengers

3: 3: The Interview

4: 4: Confessions

5: 5: Trouble in Class

6: 6: Secret Meeting

7: 7: Pain Brings Enlightenment

8: 8: Telling His Other Master

9: 9: A Night of Bonding

10: 10: Unknown Curses

11: 11: Softer than Indifference

12: 12: Castle Under Attack

13: 13: The Aftermath

14: 14: The Funeral

15: 15: Confronting the Dursleys

16: 16: Getting Even

17: 17: Face to Face

18: 18: Settling in at the Dursleys

19: 19: The Word Gets Out

20: 20: Searching for RAB

21: 21: Dates and Animagus Unveiling

22: 22: Making Memories

23: 23: Seeking Assistance

24: 24: A Little Shopping

25: 25: Scenting The Truth

26: 26: Facing Off and Finding Space

27: 27: Coming Clean

28: 28: Hell Hath No Fury

29: 29: Wedding Day Disaster

30: 30: Cleaning Up

31: 31: Visiting Godric's Hollow

32: 32: One More Down

33: 33: Adulthood Acknowledged

34: 34: Meeting at The Weasleys

35: 35: Proof of Trust

36: 36: Jealous Rages and Bequests

37: 37: Gathering the Pieces, Making Amends

38: 38: Finding the Comb

39: 39: Injuries and Discoveries

40: 40: Sweet And Sour Revelations

41: 41: Coming To An Understanding

42: 42: Putting On A Show

43: 43: Another Meeting At The Burrow

44: 44: The Search For The Cup

45: 45: Meeting the In-Laws

46: 46: Birthday Surprises

47: 47: The Final Horcrux Falls

48: Chapter 48: Going to Battle

49: 49: Arranging a Trial

50: 50: The Trial

51: Epilogue

Chocolate Enchantment

Vivian B

595 Reviews   |   595 Ratings, 0 Likes, 304 Favorites )

Drama Romance Action/Adventure Potions Under Duress 199,892 Words 51 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape

When the Weasley twins decide Hogwarts could use a little love in times of war, Hermione Granger and Severus Snape get caught in the crossfire—finding themselves pulled together by true love chocolates. As Severus Snape is pushed to fulfill his Unbreakable Vow, the two of them must work together to help the Order and Harry prepare for the final battle. This story was completed prior to the publication of DH and is HBP compliant

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Chapters (51)

Chapter 1: 1: Making Contact

Chapter 2: 2: Messengers

Chapter 3: 3: The Interview

Chapter 4: 4: Confessions

Chapter 5: 5: Trouble in Class

Chapter 6: 6: Secret Meeting

Chapter 7: 7: Pain Brings Enlightenment

Chapter 8: 8: Telling His Other Master

Chapter 9: 9: A Night of Bonding

Chapter 10: 10: Unknown Curses

Chapter 11: 11: Softer than Indifference

Chapter 12: 12: Castle Under Attack

Chapter 13: 13: The Aftermath

Chapter 14: 14: The Funeral

Chapter 15: 15: Confronting the Dursleys

Chapter 16: 16: Getting Even

Chapter 17: 17: Face to Face

Chapter 18: 18: Settling in at the Dursleys

Chapter 19: 19: The Word Gets Out

Chapter 20: 20: Searching for RAB

Chapter 21: 21: Dates and Animagus Unveiling

Chapter 22: 22: Making Memories

Chapter 23: 23: Seeking Assistance

Chapter 24: 24: A Little Shopping

Chapter 25: 25: Scenting The Truth

Chapter 26: 26: Facing Off and Finding Space

Chapter 27: 27: Coming Clean

Chapter 28: 28: Hell Hath No Fury

Chapter 29: 29: Wedding Day Disaster

Chapter 30: 30: Cleaning Up

Chapter 31: 31: Visiting Godric's Hollow

Chapter 32: 32: One More Down

Chapter 33: 33: Adulthood Acknowledged

Chapter 34: 34: Meeting at The Weasleys

Chapter 35: 35: Proof of Trust

Chapter 36: 36: Jealous Rages and Bequests

Chapter 37: 37: Gathering the Pieces, Making Amends

Chapter 38: 38: Finding the Comb

Chapter 39: 39: Injuries and Discoveries

Chapter 40: 40: Sweet And Sour Revelations

Chapter 41: 41: Coming To An Understanding

Chapter 42: 42: Putting On A Show

Chapter 43: 43: Another Meeting At The Burrow

Chapter 44: 44: The Search For The Cup

Chapter 45: 45: Meeting the In-Laws

Chapter 46: 46: Birthday Surprises

Chapter 47: 47: The Final Horcrux Falls

Chapter 48: Chapter 48: Going to Battle

Chapter 49: 49: Arranging a Trial

Chapter 50: 50: The Trial

Chapter 51: Epilogue


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10/10

aura

I'm with Hermione on this one.  I sorta feel sorry for Viktor, but on the other hand I really don't.  *sighs*


Hopefully Severus will be able to spin a tale the Dark Lord will buy, and won't punish him for too terribly because of the way Hermione handled things...  She was trying to break the news to Viktor right then afterall...


Also, hopefully the wedding isn't one (or at least not the first) of the memories Harry and Co. are diving into...  And if the Wedding is one of them, hopefully Hermione will both be there where they view it, and be given enough time to explain...


Love this!  Can't wait for more!  ^_^

9/10

CharmedForce

I'm anxious to see what those memories contain. It's unfortunate that Viktor was expecting more from Hermione, but I think she handled it well. I can't beleive Ron actually kept his mouth shut!

10/10

ladyluv

Good chapter - I always like it when Severus acts like a strong male wizard circling his mate and not giving an inch. He was in this form in this chapter and I loved the Mine part. Good chapter.

10/10

snitchette

"but the thought alone was enough to turn Hermione’s stomach. The kitchen smells made her feel a little off as it was, but she managed to push the sensation back, wondering if she had eaten something earlier that didn’t agree with her"


Must we understand some happy news there? I would've thought them more careful about the subject, especially considering the situation they're in.

8/10

harrypotterwanter

I wonder when Hermione will realize that she's pregnant. Hopefully she doesn't blow up too much when she finds out that Severus tricked her. If anyone in the Order finds out, they probably won't let her help out much, since it could affect the baby.

10/10

ladyluv

Okay - I am totally leary of the potions and the sickness - he must have given her a fertility potion and she is pregnant - scold me if I am wrong. I love a good mystery...

Response from Vivian B (Author of Chocolate Enchantment)

How could I even consider scolding you? Not possible. I know, Severus is really no coward, but he does have a healthy sense of self preservation--just sometimes he doesn't know when forthright honesty is best. Tut tut.

9/10

CharmedForce

Uh-oh... quesiness? She won't be happy to discover a pregnancy.

10/10

aura

Ooo!  Bad Severus!  Giving her a potion to help get her pregnant, without telling her (before or afterwards)!  That is going to blow-up in his face.  *rolls eyes*  She'll forgive him, of course, but he'll be in for some angry journaling at the very least!


Hope, since Ron's "almost there" they're smart enough to start "Transfiguration practice" outside, at Godric's Hallow maybe.  Even if the attic can stand up to battle-practice (and a Hippogriff back when Sirius was around) I kinda doubt that there'll be room for a dragon.  ^_~  And Harry, black fur, long tail... some kind of monkey perhaps?


Love this fic!  I do a little happy dance whenever I see there's an update.  ^_^

10/10

aura

I know I've commented on this chapt before, but I was rereading it (to refresh my memory) and I wanted to say that I absolutely LOVE Harry and Hermione's joint speach to the Order at the beginning. ^_^  It's wonderful!  (The type of thing that *should* have happened in the book.)  ^_^

10/10

Merlinsbeard

OMG I can't believe he did that to her!  Conception potion - it must have been.  Boy, if it was, she is going to be so mad he had better run and hide.

0/10

DanaPAH

I love this story.  I'm so glad to see that another chapter is the the queue.

10/10

ladyluv

Loved this chapter - Snape is back with the order with a vow and now Hermione can see he more frequently without raising questions.  Good plot move.

0/10

draegon_fire

That went better than expected. I think Hermione worded everything perfectly, that way Severus wasn't completely stuck. I think that lessened the risk for him.

10/10

snitchette

I'm relieved eveything went well. Harry is not that stubborn after all. Always a pleasure to read you.

0/10

baseballbabe122

Stupid Harry.  Snape is amazing.  I want one for my self.  :)Wonderfully written!  And as per usual, I will be waiting anxiously for the next installment!

9/10

harrypotterwanter

I am glad that the giving of the Vow did not go too poorly. At least Severus is not going to have to meet with anyone other than Hermione. This way, she can do work and have fun at the same time. I look forward to learning about some of the consequences of the Vow.

10/10

kyriaofdelphi

Yummy! Great chapter. Thanks

9/10

CharmedForce

I have mixed feelings on this Vow. I know it is necessary for the Order, but I am just as afraid as Hermione that this could cost Severus personally.

10/10

Gardengirl

Convenient of Harry to forget that *his* vow to Dumbledore ended with him force-feeding that poison to Dumbles, isn't it?

Thanks for a great update!

0/10

potionmistress60

I'm trying to envision what troubles this Vow will bring.  You have me biting my nails.  Good Chapter!

10/10

faerieflightz

Excellent story! Can't wait for more updates, hopefully soon!

10/10

aura

Really don't like the position Remus is trying to put Hermione in. Granted, it's probably better for it to be her than any of the other Order members, but to have one spouse in a position of having so much control over the other will lead to resentment on his part at the very least... 

Good that she finally had that 'talk' with Ron though, he really needs to grow up and move past his puppy-love for Hermione. Think her letting the bit about her marraige slip is either going to be a good thing, or come back and bite her later on.

Love this fic! Looking forward to more!

10/10

snitchette

"so he's being a total prat. Can't be helped. Won't last forever. " Or so I hope. This is getting more exciting each chapter. I really like it.

10/10

enchanter

Wow. I think I started this yesterday night? It's all been a blur, but I loved nearly every minute of it. I had a tendency to catch a few tense mix-ups and missing punctuation among other things, but other than that, this is fantastic. The grammatical errors were definitely in the minority, or else I wouldn't have gotten this far. Ok. These compliments are coming out incredibly backhanded, so I should stop. I think you've made something remarkable and captivating and thank god the next chapter is in queue, or I might've had to pull an Hermione. Happy writing!

10/10

CharmedForce

I think you have Ron pinned perfectly in this chapter. He is upset, and hurt, and his pride is wounded. He is trying to lash out at Hermione any way possible. For a girl who prided herself on being cerebral and didn't waste time on "girly" things to attract boys, being called a whore and having her intellectual attractiveness discounted so easily would be painful. Ron would know this, and would make the comment, even if he didn't really believe it.

Great update! 

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