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Malfoy Manor Blond and Awkward
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Blond and Awkward

1: A Peculiar Business

2: A Peculiar Question

3: A Peculiar Saturday

4: A Peculiar Meeting

Blond and Awkward

Mischief Unlimited

55 Reviews   |   55 Ratings, 0 Likes, 55 Favorites )

Humor Romance Alternate Universe Epilogue What Epilogue? Malfoy Manor 6,468 Words 4 Chapters WIP
Hermione Granger Lucius Malfoy Severus Snape Ginevra Weasley

A pool table, a klutz, and a conversation. You only thought you knew Lucius Malfoy.

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Chapters (4)

Chapter 1: A Peculiar Business

Chapter 2: A Peculiar Question

Chapter 3: A Peculiar Saturday

Chapter 4: A Peculiar Meeting


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Member Since 2009  |  1 Story  |  Favorited by 9  |  2 Reviews Written  |  3 Review Responses

Mischief Unlimited is the combined efforts of LivingTheDream and karelia.  We hope you enjoy our collaborations of mayhem and humour.

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0/10

DeeMichelle

Who'd've thought of a nervous Lucius?  :)  I like him that way ... just a bit.  Cute story thus far.

0/10

sexy_snake

This is good so far.  I can't wait to read more.

10/10

Gardengirl

Lovin' it!

The give-and-take between Severus and Hermione is great.

And a shy Lucius? Totally new territory you're writing - well done!

10/10

braye27

Lunch with Lucius Malfoy on Saturday. Good heavens.

Yes, indeedie!  I can't wait to see how this lunch date goes.  Shy!Lucius is a dear, and he may yet sweep Hermione off her feet... but I'm not yet convinced that she and Snape are only friends.

You've definitely got my attention, girls!  I look forward to the next update.
Beth

10/10

braye27

LOL!  I can't believer how klutzy Lucius has become.  Narcissa's leaving him for someone else, and all those witches just showing up at Malfoy Manor whenever they feel like it must have really rattled his senses.

And I have to wonder how it is that Severus and Hermione are still so close after breaking up.  This bears watching, so I'm sticking around!

Well done.
Beth

10/10

irishredlass

Okay now this is getting completely bizzare.  Severus a food addict? Do not keep me in suspense.

10/10

irishredlass

Oh snerkers!  Lucius a clutz and Sev having to give him dating advice?  LMAO! I wonder just what Sev and Hermione are really up to because I cannot see those to breaking up and staying friends... they are upto something.

9/10

kyriaofdelphi

Self-warming parkas?????? This is too cool. Love it. Thanks for sharing.

10/10

makaem

So is Snape really out of the picture?

0/10

HermioneJeanSnape

Sense of humor Severus! Haha. Very nice. Loving this! Ooh, but think of the possibilities if Severus decided he wanted her back...and he and Lucius don't mind sharing.... *Eyes glaze over*

10/10

HannahSmith

And here I was, thinking that I wrote an OOC Lucius – but no complaints! Somehow I don't think it's completely over between H and S...

0/10

HermioneJeanSnape

Lucius Malfoy, klutz? Oh, now this is going to be fun!

Heehee

10/10

Muggline

ROTFL! This keeps getting better!

0/10

asnapeintime

good grief..an awkward lucius, how amusing.  wonderful so far.

10/10

sunny33

Poor, chunky Sev. He needs some fashion advice.:P

10/10

debjunk

How funny that she was suspicious of both of them.  Another funny entry.  I can't wait to see why Lucius has dropsy.  Did Narcissa curse him or something?

You've convinced me that a shy Lucius is an incredibly endearing Lucius.

10/10

debjunk

Wow, that was pretty hilarious!  I love the idea of a klutzy Lucius.  He's so straight-laced, it's nice to see him wrecking stuff!  And Severus is so laid back.  I loved the repeated 'what's' from him. Very fun!

10/10

beaweasley2

This is quiet a different Malfoy than I'm used to. It will be so fun to read what you do with the 'date.' 

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carley9

LOL  They seem a little OOC (which if that was a warning, I skipped right over it) but in a very funny way :)

Response from Mischief Unlimited (Author of Blond and Awkward)

Yep, it's there.

9/10

jenonymous

So far this is highly entertaining, even though I am solidly a SS/HG-er.  Lucius as inept is comical.  Severus seems like he might come out of a closet himself, soon, though.

10/10

aura

Laughed all the way through this!  Can't wait to see the next chappie.

10/10

mia madwyn

Delightful! I'm wondering why Lucius is such a klutz, though.  Story reason?  Or just your spin on him?  Looking forward to more!

10/10

HannahSmith

That's great – another LM/HG! Don't see to many of those which is why I started writing them myself). It's quite a challenge to picture Lucius as clumsy in anything, but then most people seem to find it difficult to picture him as genuinely interested in Hermione, so why not. I'm very curious to see the development. Any chance of a nice threesome along the way...?

10/10

makaem

Really fun. This reminded me of the dating conversation in Sleepless in Seattle.  At least Malfoy didn't think a fajita was something you did.

10/10

chivalric

Good start. Looking forward to more - and I like a Lucius who is not completely perfect, but unsure about himself, dropping his cane whenever possible ;-)

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