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Potions Under Duress Captive
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Captive

clare009

9 Reviews   |   9 Ratings, 0 Likes, 39 Favorites )

Romance Smut post-HBP/HBP compliant Potions Under Duress 4,525 Words 1 Chapter Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape

Five years after the defeat of Voldemort, Hermione Granger is still trying to hunt down the infamous traitor, Severus Snape.

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8/10

CyanaWhite

Very good concept. However it felt a little rushed, especially the jump from harsh Snape to understanding Snape. But it was otherwise entertaining and a good piece of writing. Lotsa Love,

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10/10

MollysSister

OHmygoodness I thought he had pulled a runner on her! You fooled me!

0/10

Gardengirl

A great twist on what could have been a very tired theme! I liked it a lot. Well done, and thanks for sharing

Response from clare009 (Author of Captive)

Ooh, thanks. I do appreciate your comment. :)

10/10

severuslover

Aww...that was rather cute. I wasn't quite sure at the beginning, but I ended up really liking it. Great job!~Jen

8/10

Southern_Witch_69

Good story. I was worried for her briefly, but it worked out nicely.

Response from clare009 (Author of Captive)

Thank you. I'm glad you liked it.

0/10

GinnyW

That was really enjoyable. I really hope that they can someday stop running. Two people running is much harder than one. I enjoyed their back and forth bickering/banter and the resolution. And I liked how you twisted the ending some. I thought he'd left her too. He certainly can be sneaky when he wants to be. Thanks for the delightful read! :)

Response from clare009 (Author of Captive)

I'm glad you enjoyed the story. I almost wanted to end it after she thought he'd left her, but I really couldn't do that to Hermione.

8/10

ancientgirl

I liked the banter between them.  The ending was a nice twist, for a minute there I thought he'd left her too.Nice work.

Response from clare009 (Author of Captive)

Thank you - it was fun to write.

10/10

June W

Phew!  You had me scared there when she woke up and found his stuff missing.  I'm glad they're off together, although I do hope she can get him cleared so eventually he can STOP being on the run.  Thanks for posting this!!!

Response from clare009 (Author of Captive)

Thanks for the review :) I'm sure they'll muddle through and sort it all out eventually.

10/10

barbied011

I got a little nervous that he was really gone again.  Great ending.

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