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Potions Under Duress Equilibrium
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Equilibrium

1: Chapter One

2: Chapter two

3: Chapter Three

4: Chapter Four

5: Chapter Five

6: Chapter Six

7: Chapter Seven

8: Epilogue

Equilibrium

Lady Apythia

111 Reviews   |   111 Ratings, 0 Likes, 214 Favorites )

Angst Romance Erotica Smut Slash Epilogue post-HBP/HBP compliant post-DH/DH What Epilogue? Potions Under Duress 18,353 Words 8 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Remus Lupin Severus Snape

Both Severus and Remus have been imprisoned and will not be released unless someone is willing to be bound to them. Hermione is forced to confront her feelings and history with both men as she debates what is easy verses what is right in love and life

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Chapters (8)

Chapter 1: Chapter One

Chapter 2: Chapter two

Chapter 3: Chapter Three

Chapter 4: Chapter Four

Chapter 5: Chapter Five

Chapter 6: Chapter Six

Chapter 7: Chapter Seven

Chapter 8: Epilogue


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Lady Apythia

Member Since 2005  |  3 Stories  |  Favorited by 45  |  58 Reviews Written  |  195 Review Responses

Reviews for Equilibrium

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8/10

la Chatelaine

Sometimes it is so hard not to believe that something you want so much will be denied simply because you want it so much.  I know I've struggled with that mind set for decades.  You are describing it perfectly. 

Response from Lady Apythia (Author of Equilibrium)

Thank you! I appreciate you reading and taking the time to comment.

Response from Lady Apythia (Author of Equilibrium)

Thank you! I appreciate you reading and taking the time to comment.

0/10

RedOrchid

Very, very good. Things are heating up indeed. Please go on. :-)

Response from Lady Apythia (Author of Equilibrium)

Thanks! The next two chapters are in the queue and it will get steamy.

Response from Lady Apythia (Author of Equilibrium)

Thanks! The next two chapters are in the queue and it will get steamy.

10/10

gabi1791

Wow, what a great story. I'm so glad I decided to read it! I'm really looking forward to more!!!gab

Response from Lady Apythia (Author of Equilibrium)

Thanks so much! I am glad you are enjoying it. The next two chapters are in the queue.

Response from Lady Apythia (Author of Equilibrium)

Thanks so much! I am glad you are enjoying it. The next two chapters are in the queue.

10/10

Muggline

Okay, took her long enough to get it...

Response from Lady Apythia (Author of Equilibrium)

She thinks too much sometimes. Thanks for reading and commenting.

Response from Lady Apythia (Author of Equilibrium)

She thinks too much sometimes. Thanks for reading and commenting.

10/10

blue artemis

Oh, wow.  I understand she is confused, but I have to agree with George.  Jump in there already. 

Response from Lady Apythia (Author of Equilibrium)

Sometimes the girl just overthings things. She'll learn soon enough to just let go and go with it.Thanks for reading!

Response from Lady Apythia (Author of Equilibrium)

Sometimes the girl just overthings things. She'll learn soon enough to just let go and go with it.Thanks for reading!

0/10

Isode

Please never apologize for long chapters. I wish this one had been longer (yes I'm greedy), but I guess I will just have to wait for your next update. Glad to see that Hermione didn't run and jump in between Severus and Remus at the first opportunity, it makes the story just that more tantalizing.

Response from Lady Apythia (Author of Equilibrium)

Thanks so much! The next two chapters are in the queue so hopefully it won't be too long of a wait for you. Thank you for reading and commenting; it's appreciated!

Response from Isode (Reviewer)

Yhea! I'll be looking for the updates.

Response from Lady Apythia (Author of Equilibrium)

Thanks so much! The next two chapters are in the queue so hopefully it won't be too long of a wait for you. Thank you for reading and commenting; it's appreciated!

Response from Isode (Reviewer)

Yhea! I'll be looking for the updates.

8/10

Jenwryn

Oh, this is fantastic. To be totally honest with you, I can't believe I'm using that adjective in conjunction with a story that involves Remus/Severus (it was never high on my list of loves, despite my shipping flexibility) but somehow you've managed to make me accept it in this story. And Hermione, dear Hermione... anyway, I'm waffling, but the point is: I'm liking this, a lot, and am looking forwards to reading more. *hugs*

Response from Lady Apythia (Author of Equilibrium)

Thank you so much for your wonderful comments. The fact that you are enjoying this even though you aren't a Snupin fan means so much! I hope the rest of it doesn't disappoint you!

0/10

hgelman

Neat!  I am really looking forward to what comes next!

Response from Lady Apythia (Author of Equilibrium)

Thanks so much! The next two chapters will be in the queue this weekend.

10/10

blue artemis

That was an interesting chapter.  I hope they can work it out, because the possibilities are really lovely. 

Response from Lady Apythia (Author of Equilibrium)

Thanks. I can't make it too easy for them from the start, but they are all smart people and I am sure some sort of agreement can be reached. ;-)

10/10

Sampdoria

Great update! The Minister should only know that fanfic readers like me are chearing a jolly "YES" with the thougth of Hermione getting both Remus and Severus:-) Though I do expect there to be some rocky road ahead of them still, I also fully expect for you to let Remus have his son back and preferably for them to have a child or three together; I have this picture of a little girl with a riot of black curls who klings to her beloved book and claiming to know what ever obscure fact because her book says so:-))Update again soon!

Response from Lady Apythia (Author of Equilibrium)

Thanks so much! I don't think you'll be disappointed. I'll be adding the next two chapters to the queue this weekend. Thanks again for commenting; I really appreciate it!

0/10

sunny33

Now let me get this straight, Hermione loves Remus, but fancies Sev, Remus loves Severus, but fancies Hermione, and Severus seems to have feelings for both Hermione and Remus.  Sounds like it could work out... with time and lots of, ahem, physical closeness !

Response from Lady Apythia (Author of Equilibrium)

I see no problem with it myself either. :) I hope you enjoy the rest of the story! Thanks for taking the time to comment!

10/10

snuggleslut

this is going to be an adjustment. can't wait for the next chapter

Response from Lady Apythia (Author of Equilibrium)

Thanks! I'll be putting two more chapters in the queue this weekend.

0/10

Quynce

Very fun so far.  I'm looking forward to more....If it's not too much to ask, I would like at least a touch more physical detail about the characters-- either more about their appearences and/or some more about what they are doing with their bodies (scuffling a foot, staring out a window, twiddling a spoon).  Everyone so far is rather abstract... even small nervous tics or an odd habitual phrase tends to make someone seem more real.

0/10

litgirl

Quite an interesting situation here - I wonder if anyone will be willing to be bound to both of them? Hmm...   

10/10

kizzy7

ooohhh, intriguing start. I will have to follow this story ;)

Response from Lady Apythia (Author of Equilibrium)

Thank you! The story is completed, so I will be posting as soon as each chapter is edited.

10/10

Sampdoria

Oh yes, I think I will like this very, very much! I love the plot you have here, probably because it looks like my favourite girl (do I have to say that will be Hermione?) will get to have a relationship with two of my favourite heroes, Severus and Remus:-)I also hope that you will adress the situation about Teddy and make sure that he will grow up with his father? I don't doubt that Andromeda loves her grandson, but he belongs with his father. Update again soon, I look forward to read more.

Response from Lady Apythia (Author of Equilibrium)

Without giving anything away, I think you may be pleased with the story.Thanks so much for taking the time to read and comment! The story is completed, so I will be posting as soon as each chapter is edited.

0/10

nightshift

Interesting start, and an interesting premise on why Remus wasn't really dead. I'm looking forward to more.

Response from Lady Apythia (Author of Equilibrium)

Thank you! I appreciate your comments.I decided to try to keep it canon and come up with a reason why Remus wouldn't come back to the wizarding world immediately and why he didn't have his son.The story is completed, so I will be posting as soon as each chapter is edited.

10/10

amsev

What an interesting twist!  I'm looking forward to reading more.

Response from Lady Apythia (Author of Equilibrium)

Thank you! I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment. The next chapter should be in the queue tomorrow.

0/10

sunny33

Hmm so she is going to offer to bind to them both perhaps? that should make for some interesting times!

Response from Lady Apythia (Author of Equilibrium)

I hope so! Thanks so much for commenting!

10/10

blue artemis

Oh, this is interesting, I can't wait to see where it goes. 

Response from Lady Apythia (Author of Equilibrium)

Thank you! I hope you like where it ends up!

0/10

mock_turtle

I am interested to see where you are going with this.  i like your explanation of lupin's escape, however implausible it is :)  and I am glad you addressed hermione's relations with her parents, as so many authors don't.

Response from Lady Apythia (Author of Equilibrium)

Thanks so much for reading and taking the time to comment. I appreciate it.

0/10

sejmann

Interesting start!  I can't wait to read more.

Response from Lady Apythia (Author of Equilibrium)

Thanks so much! The next chapter should be in the queue tomorrow.

10/10

Sampdoria

I just love this story, I had a great time reading it all over again:-))

7/10

MyaUzamaki

HEy I love the story so far but It seems to me that your ignoring what hermione said she would do for Remus? Like hetting his son back? I don't mean to be pushy or flame or anything I just though you might have gotten distracted. but then again you might not. I just noticed it.

10/10

Lupinfan

Nice story. Love threesome SS/HG/RL. Great last chapter. Please update soon. Want hear what comes next.

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