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Severus Big Bang Can't Take My Eyes Off You
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Can't Take My Eyes Off You

1: Chapter One: Watching

2: Chapter Two: Under Orders

3: Chapter Three: Planning the Mission

4: Chapter Four: Studying Together

5: Chapter Five: Another Know-it-all

6: Chapter Six: Investigations

7: Chapter Seven: Happy Birthday, Hermione

8: Chapter Eight: Halloween

9: Chapter Nine: A Private Moment

10: Chapter Ten: Tennis, Anyone?

11: Chapter Eleven: Giving Into Temptation

12: Chapter Twelve: Frustration Leads to Revelation

13: Chapter Thirteen: Spy Tactics

14: Chapter Fourteen: Explaining Magic

15: Chapter Fifteen: Back to Class

16: Chapter Sixteen: Return to Magic

17: Chapter Seventeen: Christmas Comes But Once a Year

18: Chapter Eighteen: New Year's Eve

19: Chapter Nineteen: Back to Hogwarts

20: Chapter Twenty: Avoiding the Issue

21: Chapter Twenty-one: Poetry and Roses

22: Chapter Twenty-two: Can't Take My Eyes Off You

23: Epilogue

Can't Take My Eyes Off You

sunny33

315 Reviews   |   315 Ratings, 0 Likes, 130 Favorites )

Humor Romance Action/Adventure Epilogue What Epilogue? Severus Big Bang 50,451 Words 23 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape

Severus and Hermione are both feeling disgruntled after the war is over. Especially with each other. Watch the fireworks when they are sent on a special mission together.

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Chapters (23)

Chapter 1: Chapter One: Watching

Chapter 2: Chapter Two: Under Orders

Chapter 3: Chapter Three: Planning the Mission

Chapter 4: Chapter Four: Studying Together

Chapter 5: Chapter Five: Another Know-it-all

Chapter 6: Chapter Six: Investigations

Chapter 7: Chapter Seven: Happy Birthday, Hermione

Chapter 8: Chapter Eight: Halloween

Chapter 9: Chapter Nine: A Private Moment

Chapter 10: Chapter Ten: Tennis, Anyone?

Chapter 11: Chapter Eleven: Giving Into Temptation

Chapter 12: Chapter Twelve: Frustration Leads to Revelation

Chapter 13: Chapter Thirteen: Spy Tactics

Chapter 14: Chapter Fourteen: Explaining Magic

Chapter 15: Chapter Fifteen: Back to Class

Chapter 16: Chapter Sixteen: Return to Magic

Chapter 17: Chapter Seventeen: Christmas Comes But Once a Year

Chapter 18: Chapter Eighteen: New Year's Eve

Chapter 19: Chapter Nineteen: Back to Hogwarts

Chapter 20: Chapter Twenty: Avoiding the Issue

Chapter 21: Chapter Twenty-one: Poetry and Roses

Chapter 22: Chapter Twenty-two: Can't Take My Eyes Off You

Chapter 23: Epilogue


About sunny33

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sunny33

Member Since 2008  |  129 Stories  |  Favorited by 689  |  8,383 Reviews Written  |  8,235 Review Responses

Hello all,  I am a 53 year old from NZ.  Although SSHG is how I started and still my main pairing, I'll give pretty much any pairing a try, whether it be reading or writing.  Sev and Herms need a bit of variety at times. ;)

Author Website
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Reviews for Can't Take My Eyes Off You

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10/10

mick42

Loving the banter, and the shopping trip was so much fun. Can't wait to get to school.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Keep reading! :)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Keep reading! :)

10/10

mick42

Severus? being nice to dunderheads?That snake didn't kill him,but this just might. Sev on the sax, inspired.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

LOL Thanks. :)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

LOL Thanks. :)

10/10

mick42

Hermione is playing with fire, and Severus is the one getting hot and bothered.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Too true! :)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Too true! :)

0/10

jectex

Absoulutly wonderful story!   I and I so would like one of those badges. >.<

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Thank you. :)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Thank you. :)

0/10

Bentwaters

This was so much fun to read! Loved the feeling of carefreeness over it all, even if Severus/Seth was trying to be such a "good boy". LOL.  Just a really fun ride that I totally enjoyed. Thanks so much for supplying the vehicle!!

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Thank you for stopping by to review.  I really enjoyed writing that one! :D

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Thank you for stopping by to review.  I really enjoyed writing that one! :D

10/10

ElectricLimeGreen

This story was such great fun to read - I really enjoyed it!!  Thanks!

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Thanks for stopping by to review. :)

10/10

Owlbait

“More vitriol. Say it like you really mean it.”    oh yes, Severus, may I have another?

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Of course you may. :)

10/10

Owlbait

"Go ask that know-it-all Amelia. Look, she’s just about bursting out of her blouse wanting your attention."  My money's on Amelia for the magic distrupter plot thingummy

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Amelia is based on a lovely girl who worked with us for a while.  She is one of the most irrepressibly joyful people to have around. :)

10/10

Owlbait

"He’s playing that saxophone like it was a woman’s body, all delicate caresses and subtle nuances of movement. And the look on his face."  guh.  painter, saxist, I just love your Sevs.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

He too sensitive not to be some sort of artist. :)

10/10

Owlbait

“What was that? I didn’t quite catch it.”  - snerk"Perhaps he’s been sucking on an old stash of Dumbledore’s lemon drops."  bahahahah

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

You know, the Special ones. ;)

10/10

Owlbait

"Although, why I’m interested in Granger’s love life is beyond me. I do fancy her tits though."   hee hee.   Impatiently waiting for the next chapter of Limited Exposure here.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

LOL.  Shouldn't you be writing something, missy? ;)

Response from Owlbait (Reviewer)

only two chapters left!

10/10

magicalpresence

Yay!!!! I loved it :D Light-hearted and very funny. Well done!

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Thank you. :)

10/10

magicalpresence

I would like a W.I.L.F badge!!!

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Someone was selling them after Azkatraz a couple of years ago. That's where I pinched the idea. :)

10/10

katielady08

One of the BEST stories I have read! Entertaining to the last!  THANK YOU!!!!!Please write more like this!:)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Thanks!  I really enjoyed writing this one. :)

10/10

falling_magic

Loved it!!!!   I don't typically enjoy it when the point of view switches back and forth but this was incredibly well done.  Kudos!

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Thank you! :)

10/10

HBAR

Well that was unexpected *grins* (his manner of reveal, I mean) Looking very forward to the return of the girls.  Where on Earth will Snape find enough groomsmen that he can even stand, if she lets all the girls be bridesmaids?  Of course Seth is such an upstanding citizen, he should have no troubles making friends now :)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

No.  Shouldn't be too much of a problem. :)

10/10

pearl city princess

Really adorable chapter, totally loved it. can't wait for more.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Thanks! :)

0/10

Severus49

AHA!  Caught him at last!!!  Well, let's see how receptive Severus is AFTER being caught!! LOVE THIS STORY!  Writing it the way you did might have been a daunting challenge, but it's turned out beautifully!  I mean, we don't all have a narrator going around spelling out things for us, right?  Hee Hee!

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

That is very true! :)

0/10

thepantsparty

LOVE!Bravo, dear. I'm so glad that I found this story :)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Thank you! :)

0/10

quaffswinegaily

Bravo! Can we all get back to work now?

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

What?  Work? That's a four letter word. :)

10/10

Becky

Whoohoo, I absolutely LOVE it....I'm so glad he sent her Roses and finally saw that she did indeed love him..Well done, can't wait to read more!!

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Thanks,

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

! :)

10/10

rubyanjel

Oh goodness! I want this to be a film! yes, I badly want to see this on the big screen. Too bad we can't. I badly wanna see Seth Sneyd in person! And ghads, I want him to be played by none other than Alan Rickman!!! Squee!  Wow, I wanna hear him sing "can't take my eyes off you" wearing muggle outfits but sporting THAT gorgeous hairstyle and tight trousers!!!! You just gave me a good idea for a "beautiful nightmare"... nightmare is that it suck when you love a story so much you're not that interested with the ship anymore and you're too jealous with Hermione. Right on! Gah! I wish I could create a fanart of seth sneyd...

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Thanks!  :)

0/10

lucyferr

“Come on. Let’s all be brave little Gryffindors and go and talk to our friend.”

LOL! nicely put

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Thanks! :)

10/10

snitchette

*hourray* And it was about time he stopped sulking and do something constructive! I didn't know the title came from that song but whenever I read a new chapter I couldn't help humming the air. So I'm glad it's connected. Great story again.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Thanks,

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

. :)

10/10

mimmom

OMG.  That was fun!

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Thanks! :)

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