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Can't Take My Eyes Off You
sunny33315 Reviews | 315 Ratings, 0 Likes, 130 Favorites )
Severus and Hermione are both feeling disgruntled after the war is over. Especially with each other. Watch the fireworks when they are sent on a special mission together.
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sunny33
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Hello all, I am a 53 year old from NZ. Although SSHG is how I started and still my main pairing, I'll give pretty much any pairing a try, whether it be reading or writing. Sev and Herms need a bit of variety at times. ;)
Reviews for Can't Take My Eyes Off You
I really enjoyed this whole story if my comments haven't expressed that enough lol
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
I'm happy you enjoyed it as much as I enjoyed writing it. :)
I loved the last few chapters... after the first note I was just ecstatic, my husband and I danced to Muse's cover version of this song as our first dance. I couldn't keep the grin off my face as I read :D
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
I've just been to Sydney to see the musical, Jersey Boys, which is the story of Franki Valli and the Four Seasons, who first recorded the song. It was awesome! :)
UGH!! He has such horrible timing!! :/
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
Yep! :)
"I hate Severus Snape"Awe :(
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
Hehe. She'll come round. :)
I can't stop smiling at these internal monologues :) I really love it
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
Must admit I spent a bit of time smiling as I wrote them! :)
"Hell, I’d be suspicious of me if I started chuckling evilly to myself in front of others."
Lol
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
:D
Just started this and wanted to say I am excited to read the rest :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
Thanks. Hope you enjoy the ride. :)
This was a fun story, and I loved the two point of views!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
Thanks, DD! :)
Lost track of reviewing somewhere along the line here, but I did finish. I note I pegged the wrong culprint, but it all works out in the end anyway. Hermione walking on on wanking Sev - yumm, and he's turned into quite the disk by the end Lovely romp.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
Thanks. I had lots of fun writing this one. :)
Fantastic story! Haha, turns out I read the first few chapters before when it was still wip then I thought I added the story as a favorite but unfortunately didn't. So yeah, all I thought before was that it never updated! But then I found it complete and very amazing as it started out to be! :D
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
Thank you. Pleased you found it again! :)
This is such a fun story!! I love Seth as the anti-Snape, helping him find the real Severus after so many years of playing a role and the irrepressible Hermione who refuses to give up on him! The muggle girls were great, too - you must have a ton of fun at work!Well done!!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
We do, but don't tell anyone! I'm pleased you enjoyed the story. I had a lot of fun writing it. :)
Ooo I loved this....I would almost want to see the wedding with the girls. How much fun would that be?Great job
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
Thanks, kimbee. :)
cute ending~!!!!!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
Thanks for all your reviews! :)
Really cute ending, glad that the girls finally get to see Hogwarts and our favorite couple get engaged.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
Thanks! :)
Michael Corner? Oh loooorrrrdddd...talk about scraping da barrel...
Great funny fic. Amazing that you can do that much with pure dialogue. Then again, it worked for that William fella...
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
Well, I wanted someone differnt! Thanks for your review! :)
Smashing ending! Thanks for sharing!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
Thank you. :)
Smashing ending! Thanks for sharing!You have another up your sleeve right? hehe.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
There is a shorter fic in the SSHG exchange which will be posted here once the exchange has finished posting, And I've just started working on a new one which looks like it will be longer than anything else I've done. Watch this space! :)
Response from Nessa (Reviewer)
God damn posted it twice!But I will keep my eyes peeled :)
Can you add another Severus Snape fan on? Me too me too!!!! Excellent story! I'd fall in love with him too!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
Perhaps I should start making T shirts! :)
Yay! I love it! I'm glad the girls resurfaced for one final scene, and with wizards on their arms no less. I'm not usually a huge fan of OC's but this group was a hoot. I'm sure you've officially moved on, but if you ever get the notion to write more, say the wedding, or the missing scenes where the girls and their wizards hooked up, or whatever, it would not go unread on my end. Thanks for such a fun story!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
Thanks,
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
, for all your support! :)
*squee* That is a perfect ending. I love thise girls and I'm glad for Hermione. She's wonderful friends. And thank you so much for saving my morning which was getting beyond boring.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
You're most welcome,
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
. :)
Nooo! You can't pair Amelia with Ron. Does she even like gingas? Did you discuss this with her?
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
I had great pleasure taunting her with that. ;)
I love Pervert Snape, he's funny.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
I had Hermione call him a pervert in another story. Couldn't help myself! :)