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Severus Big Bang Can't Take My Eyes Off You
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Can't Take My Eyes Off You

1: Chapter One: Watching

2: Chapter Two: Under Orders

3: Chapter Three: Planning the Mission

4: Chapter Four: Studying Together

5: Chapter Five: Another Know-it-all

6: Chapter Six: Investigations

7: Chapter Seven: Happy Birthday, Hermione

8: Chapter Eight: Halloween

9: Chapter Nine: A Private Moment

10: Chapter Ten: Tennis, Anyone?

11: Chapter Eleven: Giving Into Temptation

12: Chapter Twelve: Frustration Leads to Revelation

13: Chapter Thirteen: Spy Tactics

14: Chapter Fourteen: Explaining Magic

15: Chapter Fifteen: Back to Class

16: Chapter Sixteen: Return to Magic

17: Chapter Seventeen: Christmas Comes But Once a Year

18: Chapter Eighteen: New Year's Eve

19: Chapter Nineteen: Back to Hogwarts

20: Chapter Twenty: Avoiding the Issue

21: Chapter Twenty-one: Poetry and Roses

22: Chapter Twenty-two: Can't Take My Eyes Off You

23: Epilogue

Can't Take My Eyes Off You

sunny33

315 Reviews   |   315 Ratings, 0 Likes, 130 Favorites )

Humor Romance Action/Adventure Epilogue What Epilogue? Severus Big Bang 50,451 Words 23 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape

Severus and Hermione are both feeling disgruntled after the war is over. Especially with each other. Watch the fireworks when they are sent on a special mission together.

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Chapters (23)

Chapter 1: Chapter One: Watching

Chapter 2: Chapter Two: Under Orders

Chapter 3: Chapter Three: Planning the Mission

Chapter 4: Chapter Four: Studying Together

Chapter 5: Chapter Five: Another Know-it-all

Chapter 6: Chapter Six: Investigations

Chapter 7: Chapter Seven: Happy Birthday, Hermione

Chapter 8: Chapter Eight: Halloween

Chapter 9: Chapter Nine: A Private Moment

Chapter 10: Chapter Ten: Tennis, Anyone?

Chapter 11: Chapter Eleven: Giving Into Temptation

Chapter 12: Chapter Twelve: Frustration Leads to Revelation

Chapter 13: Chapter Thirteen: Spy Tactics

Chapter 14: Chapter Fourteen: Explaining Magic

Chapter 15: Chapter Fifteen: Back to Class

Chapter 16: Chapter Sixteen: Return to Magic

Chapter 17: Chapter Seventeen: Christmas Comes But Once a Year

Chapter 18: Chapter Eighteen: New Year's Eve

Chapter 19: Chapter Nineteen: Back to Hogwarts

Chapter 20: Chapter Twenty: Avoiding the Issue

Chapter 21: Chapter Twenty-one: Poetry and Roses

Chapter 22: Chapter Twenty-two: Can't Take My Eyes Off You

Chapter 23: Epilogue


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sunny33

Member Since 2008  |  129 Stories  |  Favorited by 689  |  8,383 Reviews Written  |  8,235 Review Responses

Hello all,  I am a 53 year old from NZ.  Although SSHG is how I started and still my main pairing, I'll give pretty much any pairing a try, whether it be reading or writing.  Sev and Herms need a bit of variety at times. ;)

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Reviews for Can't Take My Eyes Off You

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quaffswinegaily

Obliviate them all! Especially after they've seen the real magic between Severus and Hernione.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Hehe.  You meanie! :)

10/10

fuchsiasteerpike

Ooo PDA! :) LOVED IT! As usual, of course. :)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Thanks, they couldn't help themselves! :)

10/10

Becky

Whoohoo!!!  EXCELLENT CHAPTER!!!  I LOVE IT! I'm so glad they finally kissed and in front of Kingsley and the girls...Can't wait to see what happens next....WOW!! I LOVE IT!!!!

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

LOL.  More PDAs to come! :)

10/10

Nessa

Where are those hands?!?!?!?!? Now they can have a little fun?? Hmmm they deserve it after all.... Great chapter.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Where, indeed? ;)

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kittyperry

Funny :)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Thanks. :)

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rubyanjel

wah!i'm so glad! another chapter! just what i was waiting for. i lol-ed after reading these parts..."do you wizards always kiss and make up after you have fought?""er...No Amelia. But I see what you mean about close."just like her, i wanna know where those hands were up to.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Feel free to use your imagination. ;)

10/10

HBAR

Wait, I can't see where their hands are!  Out of my way, girls!  Their work is over, now they can play, right?  Thanks for brightening up an otherwise gloomy day!

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

You're most welcome! :)

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kittyperry

Fabulous chapter as always.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Thanks, mate! :)

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kimbee73

What a great chapter! Oh my Hermione is going to have alot of explaining to do to her friends. Or she could just obliviate them all. I guess I will have to wait and see.Thanks for the update.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Thank you for the review! :)

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quaffswinegaily

Yay! Go the girls! Katrina's a bit feckless isn't she?

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

She is.  Can't think why I named her that... ;)

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rubyanjel

oh, at last!!!! well, looking forward to the next chapter! it's so much fun reading this...and always worth the wait!!!! i so much love this!!! :)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Thank you! :)

10/10

mimmom

LOL.  Hee hee, that was fun!

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Thanks! :)

10/10

Jinxie

LOL.  Well worth the wait to read.Can't wait to see what happens next!

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

They have a wee bit of explaining to do! :)

10/10

Nessa

A cat??? Isn't Hermione's an otter?? Hmmmm.. Loved the chapter.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Yep, a cat.  Wonder why? ;)

10/10

snitchette

Thank God they've finally admitted it. Well, I'm not doing the happy dance yet because knowing him and his profound stick in his arse... He might change his mind ten times before they really try for a relarionship.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

You're on the money! ;)

10/10

Becky

Oh dear, I do hope Severus and Hermione can make those nosy girls understand what is going on, I'm so glad he finally kissed her....Well done, can't wait for more! I love it!

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Thank you! :)

10/10

HBAR

I just adore this story.  I'm quite addicted to the dialogue only format that in the beginning seemed to me like it would never be able to work forever, but it really does.  This was a great chapter all around, but what really made me laugh was that  Professor Masterspy was boasting his super stealth at not being noticed, while her three friends were watching them, plain as day.  And this version of Snape and Hermione are so much fun, that while this story will no doubt end at some point, I'd like to persuade Kingsley to take them on full time, solving the world's mysteries one location at a time. *nudges you Kingsley in that direction*

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Thanks,

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

.  I must admit, when I started I wasn't sure i could pull it off, but it seemed to work. Only problem is, I want to write all my dialogue this way now, with no extras! :)

Response from HBAR (Reviewer)

Ok, do it.  I don't see that as a problem at all :)

10/10

fuchsiasteerpike

Uh-oooooh!

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

:D

10/10

luminosa

Ooh, it just gets better!  Hermione is a big surprise here, spilling secrets like that.  And now they have a whole posse of inept Nancy Drews on their trail.  I love it and am really glad you update regularly.  I would give this more than 5 stars if I could.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Poor Hermione.  It was all too much for her.  Thanks for your review. :)

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quaffswinegaily

Can you trust Amelia to keep a secret? She seems like a bit of a blether to me.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Amelia has a heart of gold, and she's very protective. :)

10/10

mimmom

awww, poor Snape.  Needs a hug.  :(I love it.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

He'll get one later on. :)

10/10

reets67

And she didn't ask if he took his coffee with cream? Or wanted some 'sugar'? He He!

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

LOL.  Perhaps she thought he had all the cream he needed? ;)

10/10

reets67

As usual another stellar effort...I love it. I have read from the start to here and find the dialogue exquisite. Just the right amount of venom from Snape and pluck from Hermione, that transforms into a believable relationship. I love that Hermione gives back at least as much as she gets! I will certainly be on the lookout for updates.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Thanks, reets! :)

10/10

HBAR

Ooooh, we are getting in deeper and deeper.  None of her friends seemed to react at all to her story, so they are not likely involved in any way.  But, three Nancy Drews on their team could really help, or really wreck things.  At least she doesn't have to be quite so secretive about going to his rooms and such... if he'll even let her in that is. 

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Yeah, at least they can cover for her. :)

10/10

Becky

Whoo hoo an update, Just made my day....Poor Hermione, I hope Severus will see things her way eventually...Can't wait to see what happens next, but I fear telling those 3 girls will be trouble, big trouble....Well done!!!

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Thanks,

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

. :)

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