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Can't Take My Eyes Off You
sunny33315 Reviews | 315 Ratings, 0 Likes, 130 Favorites )
Severus and Hermione are both feeling disgruntled after the war is over. Especially with each other. Watch the fireworks when they are sent on a special mission together.
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Hello all, I am a 53 year old from NZ. Although SSHG is how I started and still my main pairing, I'll give pretty much any pairing a try, whether it be reading or writing. Sev and Herms need a bit of variety at times. ;)
Reviews for Can't Take My Eyes Off You
I see trouble!!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
Of course. Where there is a Snape and a Granger, trouble is sure to follow! :)
So prompt! And the plot thickens... I love the new junior detective squad tailing Hermione, and I honestly have no idea what is going to happen next! Of course I love the post-kiss guilt, makes for good turmoil. :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
The junior detective squad may just get more than they bargained for! ;)
Response from fuchsiasteerpike (Reviewer)
Can't wait! I can't imagine Sev will be at all happy about this turn of events. Perhaps they will finally know what Hermione is talking about when she says he's rather unpleasant when angered.
Hmm.... so we've got the three muggle musketeers to the rescue :) How apropriate.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
Yep, and just as well, too, as you will find out in the next chapter. :)
"Dammit, I want all of him. Every skinny, pale, beautiful inch of his skin. Every twisted, sarcastic, brilliant part of his mind. And every tender, needy, passionate scrap of his dear heart."That was the most wonderful description of him. I just adore that sentance.And if Herm or Sev ever learn what the girls are about to do, thay're as good as obliviated.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
Thank you, dear. :)
ohhh my. Can't wait to find out what happens next!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
Thanks! :)
The way these two carry on, I'm not sure what will happen between them once they get back to Hogwarts. Will they be able to wait until she graduates? Perhaps they'll find a time-turner so they can go forward a few months to have some fun together, then come back and finish up the year.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
Now that's got to be the most unique use of a time-turner I've ever heard! :)
Oh you MUST continue. I love the slow transformation of Snape and the development of the relationship between Snape and Granger. FUN FUN FUN!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
There are 22 chapters and it's all written, betaed, and ready to post. I'll update regularly. :)
Response from mimmom (Reviewer)
YAAAAY! I have the bookmark update all set. I love a good fun happy story. Sometimes an angsty thing is entertaining, but I prefer a good laugh.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
You and me both! :)
LOL. Poor Snape, Poor Granger.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
It's tough being nice to each other. :)
Still reading. Still enjoying. I love all the bickering between Snape and Granger. LOL.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
Just between you and me, I think they like it too. ;)
Oh. New chapter :) And Snape - er - Seth, remembered her birthday! Using spy skils to be Nice Snape really is a dirty trick on the poor girl. She's missing real Snape as much as I am. Though, she might take a tip or two from Amelia, just to make time go faster while they wait ... ;)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
Amelia certainly has the right idea. :)
i love the way he's changing by degrees! fake it til you make it has always been one of my mottos (along with never pass up an opportunity to pee). great update! thanks and mucho smoochies
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
Love your mottos! :)
Oh another great chapter! I love the interaction between them.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
Thank you. :)
he heee! This is gonna be goooood!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
Keep going; it's only just started... ;)
I love their interaction. I wonder how long it will take for them to realize they're not pervert or crazy but really attracted to each other. Going back to Hogwarts will be a real challenge.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
They are a bit slow, aren't they? :)
Response from snitchette (Reviewer)
Of course they are. But else where would be the fun? ;)
Fascinating chapter. I love how the girls swoon and drool over him.And Hermione's birthday "present" was priceless. Being scolded by Snape. He won't have a clue what to do with her when they get back to Hogwarts.I can hardly wait!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
She's definitely missing the old Snape. :)
The alternate first person suits this story beautifully. It's hard to have to wait for the next update to come out. Your Severus and Hermione are perfectly consistent and very witty, far beyond what I expect to find in fanfic. I don't want this to ever end!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
LOL. There is quite a way to go yet! Thanks for your review! :)
I just adore this story, and even though it is probably a headache for you, I think the dialogue only format works so well. I can't help but wonder which one will break first and initiate snogging. Or if they wait too long and let it build up, they may just skip ahead to bigger and better things that would have Amelia melting into a puddle... and by Amelia, I really mean me ;)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
Trust me, Amelia melted too. After writing this story, I find I am having trouble now because I want to write all my dialogue without any associated description. :)
what a total hoot!! i adore your knack with dialogue. faboo update. thanks and smoochies
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
Thank you! :)
Yes Sethy you know you want to..... ??? hehe.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
Course he does, the old perv that he is! :)
What a great chapter....I can see Amelia's face if Harmony showed up without that book! I think she should have stopped for that snog. Now that would be worth the looks she would get.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
It sure would! :)
*Snerk* Sounds like they're both doing a first-rate job of keeping each other nicely on their toes. :D“Sethy, sweetheart, don’t run away. You know you want to!”ROFL. More like they both want to!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
It's like hiding your eyes behind your hands but keeping your fingers apart... :)
o.OI have no words for that.More romantic comedy. More discussion about towel!Snappe. What more can a girl ask for?Oh yes, there was the plot again! Wonder how this is going to develop.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
No-towel Snape? ;)