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Severus Big Bang Can't Take My Eyes Off You
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Can't Take My Eyes Off You

1: Chapter One: Watching

2: Chapter Two: Under Orders

3: Chapter Three: Planning the Mission

4: Chapter Four: Studying Together

5: Chapter Five: Another Know-it-all

6: Chapter Six: Investigations

7: Chapter Seven: Happy Birthday, Hermione

8: Chapter Eight: Halloween

9: Chapter Nine: A Private Moment

10: Chapter Ten: Tennis, Anyone?

11: Chapter Eleven: Giving Into Temptation

12: Chapter Twelve: Frustration Leads to Revelation

13: Chapter Thirteen: Spy Tactics

14: Chapter Fourteen: Explaining Magic

15: Chapter Fifteen: Back to Class

16: Chapter Sixteen: Return to Magic

17: Chapter Seventeen: Christmas Comes But Once a Year

18: Chapter Eighteen: New Year's Eve

19: Chapter Nineteen: Back to Hogwarts

20: Chapter Twenty: Avoiding the Issue

21: Chapter Twenty-one: Poetry and Roses

22: Chapter Twenty-two: Can't Take My Eyes Off You

23: Epilogue

Can't Take My Eyes Off You

sunny33

315 Reviews   |   315 Ratings, 0 Likes, 130 Favorites )

Humor Romance Action/Adventure Epilogue What Epilogue? Severus Big Bang 50,451 Words 23 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape

Severus and Hermione are both feeling disgruntled after the war is over. Especially with each other. Watch the fireworks when they are sent on a special mission together.

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Chapters (23)

Chapter 1: Chapter One: Watching

Chapter 2: Chapter Two: Under Orders

Chapter 3: Chapter Three: Planning the Mission

Chapter 4: Chapter Four: Studying Together

Chapter 5: Chapter Five: Another Know-it-all

Chapter 6: Chapter Six: Investigations

Chapter 7: Chapter Seven: Happy Birthday, Hermione

Chapter 8: Chapter Eight: Halloween

Chapter 9: Chapter Nine: A Private Moment

Chapter 10: Chapter Ten: Tennis, Anyone?

Chapter 11: Chapter Eleven: Giving Into Temptation

Chapter 12: Chapter Twelve: Frustration Leads to Revelation

Chapter 13: Chapter Thirteen: Spy Tactics

Chapter 14: Chapter Fourteen: Explaining Magic

Chapter 15: Chapter Fifteen: Back to Class

Chapter 16: Chapter Sixteen: Return to Magic

Chapter 17: Chapter Seventeen: Christmas Comes But Once a Year

Chapter 18: Chapter Eighteen: New Year's Eve

Chapter 19: Chapter Nineteen: Back to Hogwarts

Chapter 20: Chapter Twenty: Avoiding the Issue

Chapter 21: Chapter Twenty-one: Poetry and Roses

Chapter 22: Chapter Twenty-two: Can't Take My Eyes Off You

Chapter 23: Epilogue


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sunny33

Member Since 2008  |  129 Stories  |  Favorited by 689  |  8,383 Reviews Written  |  8,235 Review Responses

Hello all,  I am a 53 year old from NZ.  Although SSHG is how I started and still my main pairing, I'll give pretty much any pairing a try, whether it be reading or writing.  Sev and Herms need a bit of variety at times. ;)

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10/10

HBAR

The WILF badge had me rolling!  Actually, all of the gifts were great.  This could very well be the most gifts he has ever received at one time.The bathroom scene was great!  If she continues to be so bold, he'll have to give in eventually.  I always enjoy the interaction when all four housemates are there.  The boys are so endearing, but clueless.  There are comments and private jokes between Severus and Hermione that go way over the boys heads, and I like their reactions to the way she talks to him.And then it  had to leave off at the mention of New Year's Eve.  I'm with Snape, I hope she finds him!  And by find him, I mean snog him senseless (or whatever else she can get away with).  More soon please!Oh and it would not do to leave out the fact that I thoroughly enjoyed the story of the naked woman jumper.  Makes you wonder what she puts on Arthur's!

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Glad you liked the jumper snippet! :)

10/10

lucyferr

I really shouldn't be laughing so hard. I really, really shouldn't. At the very least, it's bad for my fine sculpted cheeks.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

LOL. Laugh away! :)

Response from lucyferr (Reviewer)

The LOLing has been reduced with time to mere SASing (smirking and sniggering) ... fyi, the parts I liked most were Molly's sweater designs (she'd be so much cooler if she really did do that) and the line “Professor, you do realise you don’t have to do what she says. She’s bossy enough at the best of times; if you start giving in, she’ll make our life hell.” which is, given who said it, surprisingly logical :)

0/10

Becky

Whoohoo, an update..I LOVE IT....Glad Hermione walked in on Severus, I could KILL Ronald Weasley...Grrrrr..... WILF....PRICELESS!!!!     Can't wait to see what happens next..WELL DONE!

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Thanks! :)

0/10

roughcut

WILF?  Mebbe you should sell those.  Snapylicious!

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Someone already is! :)

10/10

snitchette

MILF!!! ROFL!! And she's wearing it?!! I too hope she'll find him so they can properly celebrate the New Year.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

I'm glad everyone got the WILF thing. :)

10/10

Prof M McGonagall

*giggling here*

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

:D

9/10

Prof M McGonagall

I'm not sure what I think of Hermione spilling everything like that.  I wonder if the other girls will keep their promises.  And what will happen when she meets the rune salesman?

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

You will see. :)

10/10

Prof M McGonagall

I think you have done a very good job of writing the hotter scenes in first person or dialogue only.  That can't be an easy thing to accomplish.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

It was tricky in places, but I was determined to continue as I started. :)

0/10

Prof M McGonagall

*gigglesnort*  Quick, Sev... find your inner rage.This should be interesting.  ;)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

LOL. Thanks. :)

10/10

Prof M McGonagall

I definitely sense a little flirtation going on in this chapter.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

You think? ;)

10/10

Prof M McGonagall

Severus doesn't know what to do with his new-found popularity.  It's a pleasure to watch these two interact with each other... although I'd like less snarking and more... interaction... if you know what I mean.  ;)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Patience, my dear, patience! :)

10/10

Nessa

That speech is amazing. I'd melt in his class and NOT because of the steaming cauldrons!! They do deserve each other. Hopefully she'll break him soon. But however I don't mind for now sitting back and watching how she does it.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

LOL. She's working on it! :)

0/10

sharris

I like this story.  I can totally see why Snape would be concerned.  Of course, he has forgotten that Hermoine has been exposed to war and that matures a person faster than normal.  She is still a teenager though.....

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Yes, he is trying to do the right thing. :)

0/10

elsolel

Crookshanks, perhaps?  hehehe

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

LOL :)

0/10

elsolel

The little truth taken as a lie.   I love it!

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

She's learned a few things off Sev. :)

10/10

Becky

Severus is so darn stubborn...Hopefully Hermione will break through that armor he is wearing....Well done, I love it!   I especially loved it when he went to his office and came back banging the door shut to say his speech...Whoohoo!!!  *MELTS*

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

I think he hoped he'd scared the bejeezus out of the girls so they wouldn't get too friendly! :)

10/10

mimmom

OMG.  I'm swooning, I think.  ROFL

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

What, you're not sure? :P

Response from mimmom (Reviewer)

when one swoons, one gets a little goofy in the head.  ROFL.

10/10

mikimoto

You have her so right as a teenager - completely convinced she has all the facts and understands it all correctly.  You can't tell her anything.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

It is Hermione, you know, Hogwarts biggest bossy-know-it-all! :P

10/10

snitchette

Watch your back Sevie Darling. You'll never recover from what she has in mind (Well, I hope do for her sake ;)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

She'll get to him eventually. :)

10/10

rubyanjel

woah! i was lucky to read it just now! wah! i can't believe she could hold that grudge! stupid bloody snape, he's just pretending not to love her.:( aww...! i hope the next chapet's in queue...

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

He's trying to convince himself, really. :)

0/10

flowerbed

Oh wow, that was some chapter. I can't believe Hermione is strong enough not to use that key. I wouldn't be! We'll have to wait till next chapter to see them at GP, i guess. Great work!

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Thanks! :)

0/10

kimjo2

loved the duel!  especially the reparte!  great update.  thanks and mucho smoochies

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Thanks! :)

10/10

snitchette

I lovd their termes of endearment whime dueling. It's so cute. And where precisely do they have their hands. I'm really curious now.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Hehe.  You'll never know. :P

10/10

mimmom

ROFL.  That was fun.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Thanks. :)

0/10

kimbee73

Oh another great chapter. And the PDA loved it!

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Thanks! :)

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