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What Goes Around....

1: The Interview

2: A Secret Revealed

3: Kindness Personified

4: Quiet Authority

5: A Room with a View

6: Tough at the Top

7: Mysteries and Complications

8: A Taste of Honey.

9: A Key Question

10: Tentative Progress

11: A Bit of a Dilemma

12: So that's where it goes!

13: Faded Grandeur

14: Bewitched, Bothered and Bewildered

15: By the Pricking of my Thumbs...

16: Aftermath

17: Epilogue

What Goes Around....

melusin

548 Reviews   |   548 Ratings, 0 Likes, 364 Favorites )

Drama Romance Drabble/100-Word Potions Under Duress 24,901 Words 17 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Original Character Severus Snape Albus Dumbledore Minerva McGonagall Armando Dippet The Bloody Baron Salazar Slytherin

Down on his luck, Snape returns to Hogwarts to seek employment. Will the Headmistress give him a chance?
Drabble series written for the 'Headmistress Hermione' challenge on Grangersnape100.
**Winner: Best Drabble Series, SS/HG awards, Third Round, 2008**

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Chapters (17)

Chapter 1: The Interview

Chapter 2: A Secret Revealed

Chapter 3: Kindness Personified

Chapter 4: Quiet Authority

Chapter 5: A Room with a View

Chapter 6: Tough at the Top

Chapter 7: Mysteries and Complications

Chapter 8: A Taste of Honey.

Chapter 9: A Key Question

Chapter 10: Tentative Progress

Chapter 11: A Bit of a Dilemma

Chapter 12: So that's where it goes!

Chapter 13: Faded Grandeur

Chapter 14: Bewitched, Bothered and Bewildered

Chapter 15: By the Pricking of my Thumbs...

Chapter 16: Aftermath

Chapter 17: Epilogue


About melusin

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Alan Rickman obsessed ex-civil servant now living the good life in France. I only write in the good ship SS/HG. However, if you think that the only way these two can get together is by some sort of forced marriage, 'binding' or whatever, don't read my stories. You will be disappointed.

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OWL Ashwinder and my IJ asylum (see above).

Reviews for What Goes Around....

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10/10

Prospera

So great, what a terrific start. I love the way you've captured the romance of Hogwarts so well. I can't wait to read all of it.

Response from melusin (Author of What Goes Around....)

thanks - I'll have to get on with writing it

Response from melusin (Author of What Goes Around....)

thanks - I'll have to get on with writing it

10/10

Muggline

Hm. This story's got potential. So many secrets... I am looking forward to the chapters (with a big "s") to come!

Response from melusin (Author of What Goes Around....)

Thank you

Response from melusin (Author of What Goes Around....)

Thank you

10/10

Deeble

'Snape always was a bad lot, but he served his purpose' pretty much sums up the Dumbledore we see in DH, doesn't it? Thank you for these drabbles.

Response from melusin (Author of What Goes Around....)

Thanks for reviewing - more to come

Response from melusin (Author of What Goes Around....)

Thanks for reviewing - more to come

0/10

Lariope

Dumbledore is such a bastard. A lovely start--I can't wait to see more.

Response from melusin (Author of What Goes Around....)

Thanks - more coming

Response from melusin (Author of What Goes Around....)

Thanks - more coming

10/10

Anonymous

Great beginning.  You've totaly captured my interest, can't wait to see what happens next.
:)

Author's Response: Thank you - there's more on the way, but you'll have to be patient as the queue is humungus at the moment

9/10

beaweasley2

That is so nice of her. It's a nice little drabble.

Response from melusin (Author of What Goes Around....)

thanks

Response from melusin (Author of What Goes Around....)

thanks

0/10

kimjo2

good for her!!  you have got albus exactly how i see him esp after dh.  thanks so much and i look forward to further updates...i hope?

Response from melusin (Author of What Goes Around....)

Thanks - yes there's more. Next set in the queue - which is rather long at the moment

Response from melusin (Author of What Goes Around....)

Thanks - yes there's more. Next set in the queue - which is rather long at the moment

10/10

snitchette

I really hope there will be  sequel to this because it can't stop like that. Please.

Response from melusin (Author of What Goes Around....)

There's more - second set is in queue

Response from snitchette (Reviewer)

Great

Response from melusin (Author of What Goes Around....)

There's more - second set is in queue

Response from snitchette (Reviewer)

Great

10/10

aura

It's a good thing that Albus is already dead, and a fictional character, that's all I can say! He'd be lucky to get away with just a lynching the way I feel after what he said about Snape!  Poor Severus! But I'm sure Hermione'll take good care of him. Looking forward to the next!

Response from melusin (Author of What Goes Around....)

Yep, death hasn't mellowed himThanks for reviewing

Response from melusin (Author of What Goes Around....)

Yep, death hasn't mellowed himThanks for reviewing

10/10

pookah

I always knew Minerva and Severus were freinds, good friends.  From one of the early books, when she said Gryffidor hadn't won the quidditch cup in such-and -so years, "as Professor Snape kindly reminded me,"  I KNEW they were good freinds.  I'm glad to see such a promising start to a story.  thank you for sharing this.

Response from melusin (Author of What Goes Around....)

I think Minerva would have been extremely remorseful about the way she treated him in his year as Headmaster - but then, I've never understood why he didn't confide in her - big plot hole in DH methinksThanks for reviewing.

Response from melusin (Author of What Goes Around....)

I think Minerva would have been extremely remorseful about the way she treated him in his year as Headmaster - but then, I've never understood why he didn't confide in her - big plot hole in DH methinksThanks for reviewing.

0/10

debjunk

Good start.  I really hate Dumbledore.  (And not just in your fic.)

Response from melusin (Author of What Goes Around....)

Thanks - so do I

Response from melusin (Author of What Goes Around....)

Thanks - so do I

10/10

MollysSister

Yippeeee! You are posting this. I am a happy fangirl. A slower read this time and I see HG is not the PG one. I may have had a glass of wine under my belt last time. I still want to poke AD in the eye with a sharp stick for this comment "Snape always was a bad lot, but he served his purpose" Bastard.

Response from melusin (Author of What Goes Around....)

Thanks - yeah - it needs a good home. Next part is in the queue

Response from melusin (Author of What Goes Around....)

Thanks - yeah - it needs a good home. Next part is in the queue

10/10

fizzabella

Wonderful start:) I can't wait to read more:) And thank you for not making Albus a saint:)Warm regards,Fizzabella

Response from melusin (Author of What Goes Around....)

Thanks - glad you like it

Response from melusin (Author of What Goes Around....)

Thanks - glad you like it

0/10

sunny33

Interesting, but I am curious. When is this set?

Response from melusin (Author of What Goes Around....)

Thanks, good question. At the moment, I'm visualising Hermione in her mid to late thirties - but this may change

Response from melusin (Author of What Goes Around....)

Thanks, good question. At the moment, I'm visualising Hermione in her mid to late thirties - but this may change

9/10

Anonymous

Albus coming right out and saying Snape was "a bad lot." Hm. Interesting. We rarely hear Albus's real opinion of Snape, we must conjecture, even in fanfic. It's as if we're almost afraid to know the answer. We want to pretend that he had some affection for the man. Well, looks like you won't be going that route, eh?

Interesting set-up, and I feel really awful for Snape. Look forward to more.

Author's Response: Personally, I don't think Albus had any affection for anyone - everyone was just a pawn on his own personal chessboard.  I'm also taking the opinion that as the portraits are there to offer the incumbent Head advice, they can't be quite as shifty as they were in life.

10/10

Sampdoria

I hope there will be more of this. I love the first chapter!  I loved that Severus had the courrage to ask for a job he is highly qualified for and for facing his old demons! I also loved how Minerva (even in her portrait) had no illusions on how Albus manipulated and used Severus! I really, really look forward to read more, not to mentioni the secret about the garden, could it be that even the castle knows that Severus needed someplace that was only his, and that the castle protected that spot for him? Update again soon, I really want to read more!

Response from melusin (Author of What Goes Around....)

yes there is more - second set is already in the queue. Thanks for reviewing.

Response from melusin (Author of What Goes Around....)

yes there is more - second set is already in the queue. Thanks for reviewing.

10/10

Mazzy

Really enjoying this. It doesn't seem so much like a set of drabbles on each page as it does a continuous chapter, I suspect due to your writing style. I like it that each drabble doesn't jump way ahead or to another subject - just a flowing story. And I still love the way Severus is recognized as Headmaster, and as Head of House by Hogwarts. :) Honeslty, making a Gryffindor the Head of Slytherin seems like blasphemy to me - I think the Headmistress' good intentions outweighed her good judgement on that one. And not using the sorting hat?? I know she wants inter-house unity, but just as Severus pointed out to the reader, there are traits that mark one to their House. I hope Hermione doesn't mess with those traditions in the end.

Response from melusin (Author of What Goes Around....)

Thank you/Yes, Hogwarts knows what's what - but Burbage didn't go to Hogwarts. He's muggle-born and Hermione appointed him thinking he'd be impartialWe'll see soon whether her judgment was faulrty or not soonThanks again for reading

10/10

Mazzy

Well, Sev sure bollucks it up.

Response from melusin (Author of What Goes Around....)

Yes, Big time

10/10

Mazzy

Hmmm... so was his late night visitor an elf? Since they did a spell, I'm thinking jsut maybe it was Hermione who came to call??

Response from melusin (Author of What Goes Around....)

No, it was Purdy.

9/10

Mazzy

I kinda secretly love that the house elf is calling him "Headmaster Snape". tee hee

Response from melusin (Author of What Goes Around....)

Old habits die hard

9/10

Mazzy

Interesting start. It's not too often you see a down-on-his-luck Snape when it comes to him leaving Hogwarts - he's typically very successful of course.  And this garden... I assume it's linked to him somehow? Maybe his own personal potions ingredient garden?? Guess I'll see when the time comes. :)

Response from melusin (Author of What Goes Around....)

thanksWell, you'll have to keep reading

10/10

beaweasley2

Oh, so Salazar was put in exile? Why? And Slytherin tower doesn't recognize Gary Burbage? Hmmm. Interesting.

I wish Sev would buck up and make a move on Hermione. He wants her - and should at least try something! 

Response from melusin (Author of What Goes Around....)

He hid the tower when he left, when he died his portrait self appeared there and he was unable to leave.I think severus is getting mixed signals from Hermione and he's a bit wary - for the moment :)Thanks for reviewing

10/10

OpalJade

Love this story! I say this in every single review... I also love your portrayal of SS and HG. :)

Response from melusin (Author of What Goes Around....)

Thank you - next chapter in queue

Response from melusin (Author of What Goes Around....)

Thank you - next chapter in queue

0/10

sunny33

Now she puts the hard word on him! Good girl!

Response from melusin (Author of What Goes Around....)

She's certainly given him something to think about :)

Response from melusin (Author of What Goes Around....)

She's certainly given him something to think about :)

0/10

CharmedForce

Of course the nasty ghost is the biggest gossip!

Response from melusin (Author of What Goes Around....)

He's sneaky.

Response from melusin (Author of What Goes Around....)

He's sneaky.

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