Darkness Within
neelix326 Reviews | 326 Ratings, 0 Likes, 172 Favorites )
Severus Snape bumps into his ex-student Hermione Granger, but she's not the Hermione he remembers. Unwittingly pulled into her seedy world, he uncovers a shocking secret.
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neelix
Member Since 2008 | 21 Stories | Favorited by 471 | 528 Reviews Written | 2,066 Review Responses
Happily married to a sexy Irishman, one teenage son.
Work with teenagers.
Obsessed with Alan Rickman and SS/HG fiction.
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Reviews for Darkness Within
This sounds familiar, I must have started reading it before and not left a review. Bad fangirl. whatever has happened to Hermione? She doesnt seem like herself.
Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)
I think perhaps you read it on Ashwinder, it's complete there...
Ah!! Loved this chapter!After so long building the anxiety, the two of them finally got down to business! Amazing description. One of the best smuts ever!
I am really enjoying this story.Hope the next update is up soon.
Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)
Lol! thanks for the cheerleaders! I'm happy you liked the chapter, I really enjoyed writing it. Next chapter is in the queue.
I agree...It's about damn time!!! I LOVE this story and how we've seen severus and hermione grow! Keep it up!
Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)
Thanks so much. two chapters left and room for a bit more lemonade...!
'Bout time! :)
Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)
hehe... all the good things are worth waiting for.
About darn time!!!!!!!! So glad they are finally together :-)
Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)
thank you! glad you enjoyed it.
yes, perfect. thanks so much for that eminently satisfying update.
Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)
You're welcome, glad you enjoyed it.
Someone get me a fan! Hang on no, Severus please! That is one of the best smut's I've read in a while. I can't wait for the update.
Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)
Thank you, it was very good to finally write a happy chapter!
Whew! *fans self* *fans self again*This is the chapter I've been hoping for! Their love making was hot and sexy, but the tenderness that Severus showed her was beautiful. It's obvious that they mean so much more to each other than they could ever had imagined when Severus first saved her.
You've written a lovely and well deserved chapter for two people who have come through long years of hurt and uncertainty, and I can't wait for your next update!Well done!!!! 
Beth
Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)
bless you! I am so glad you thought it was worth waiting for!
omg! yay finally! I was waiting for it! write moree!!
Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)
lol.. the story is complete and has been for some time, just have to queue the chapters and let everyone else have a go too!
Ah, that was so wonderful. Thank heavens he gave in finally!
Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)
I know. He's stubborn as a mule!
yay, that was great, i can't wait to read more!
Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)
Thanks! Next two chapters are in the queue.
Yay!!! They acknowledge their feelings at last!!! Do we get some hot sex in the next chapter?
Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)
Well.. there is sex in the next chapter... wether it's hot or not I will leave for you to decide!
Response from sapphireduck (Reviewer)
Yay!!!!
Yes, this chapter was about mending fences, and realizing that they are all part of a bigger family. I'm glad that Severus and Harry are being friendly to each other. The picture was a sweet touch.
Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)
I thought it was time they both started to expand their horizons... but I can see storm clouds on the horizon....
That was sweet that Harry had the picture for Severus and that they made him godfather to Albus.
Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)
Thanks!
I'm not sure how much longer he can hold out with her. They should probably talk... but it ain't gonna happen, right?
Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)
Well, Severus is quite stubborn and a bit stupid... so no, it probably won't happen!
What a soft side of Severus! I enjoyed the chapter. Thanks for the frequent updates!
Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)
Thanks. I don't think he can be unfeeling all of the time, not in my world anyway!
This is so sweet. I look forward to more.
Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)
Thanks! More in the queue!
poor bebe! tough going but i have faith that all will be well soon. thanks so much for the lovely update
Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)
Thanks... it may take a couple more chapters, but I think you're right. I hope so actually otherwise I may have some angry readers to deal with!
ahhhhhh i beg you to update soon please!!x
Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)
It's all in the queue, honey... hold on...
Response from serenity_potterx (Reviewer)
thank god lol
oh wow sorry i havent reviewed evey chapter there hasnt been time ive been rushing to read the next. But i had to review this one as im like sobbing. Brilliant, Brilliant writing, tragic yet beautiful story line. well done. x
Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)
Bless you. I hope you understand that I am happy to make you cry - I cried too.
Response from serenity_potterx (Reviewer)
lol yeah Im happy when something ive written makes someone cry too dont worry lol.
Oh, poor Sev, too worried he will scare her off if he tells her how he feels. :)
Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)
Or... scared that she will respond and he will have to deal with the enormity of her feelings for him as well as his own... it's a major minefiled!
How can they not be climbing the walls and taking cold showers?? I know I would be. Lovely build up. I like the tension. I like that he's pushing her to be a better person. True romance!
Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)
It gets so much worse! And I would be the same... in fact, I think I would have to move out, or wak around naked so he got the message!
Oh, this is so sweet... But I understand his reservation. He would be her first in so many ways and it must be quite scary to face such a huge responsibility´.
Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)
Do you think his resolve will hold out??
Response from Muggline (Reviewer)
Oh, I hope it doesn't!
I really love this story!! I'm glad things are looking up for Hermione. Keep the chapters coming!!!
Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)
Thank you so much, glad you like it!