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Potions Under Duress Darkness Within
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Darkness Within

1: Encounter

2: Consequence

3: On The Edge

4: The Calm Before

5: The Storm

6: Oblivion

7: Desperate Measures

8: Some Riot

9: Catharsis

10: The Heart of the Matter

11: Full of Spices

12: Reaquainting

13: Mending Fences

14: Butterflies

15: One Fine Day

16: My Best Friend

17: Parting Is Such Shit, Really

18: The Letters

19: One Day Like This

20: I Know You

21: Sunshine

22: Epilogue

Darkness Within

neelix

326 Reviews   |   326 Ratings, 0 Likes, 172 Favorites )

Mystery/Suspense Drama Angst Romance Horror Psychological Potions Under Duress 33,678 Words 22 Chapters Complete
Ginevra Weasley Harry Potter Hermione Granger James Potter James Potter (son of Harry) Severus Snape

Severus Snape bumps into his ex-student Hermione Granger, but she's not the Hermione he remembers. Unwittingly pulled into her seedy world, he uncovers a shocking secret.

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Chapters (22)

Chapter 1: Encounter

Chapter 2: Consequence

Chapter 3: On The Edge

Chapter 4: The Calm Before

Chapter 5: The Storm

Chapter 6: Oblivion

Chapter 7: Desperate Measures

Chapter 8: Some Riot

Chapter 9: Catharsis

Chapter 10: The Heart of the Matter

Chapter 11: Full of Spices

Chapter 12: Reaquainting

Chapter 13: Mending Fences

Chapter 14: Butterflies

Chapter 15: One Fine Day

Chapter 16: My Best Friend

Chapter 17: Parting Is Such Shit, Really

Chapter 18: The Letters

Chapter 19: One Day Like This

Chapter 20: I Know You

Chapter 21: Sunshine

Chapter 22: Epilogue


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neelix

Member Since 2008  |  21 Stories  |  Favorited by 471  |  528 Reviews Written  |  2,066 Review Responses

Happily married to a sexy Irishman, one teenage son.

Work with teenagers.

Obsessed with Alan Rickman and SS/HG fiction.

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Reviews for Darkness Within

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marisamarinee

:(

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marisamarinee

Making me tear up here

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marisamarinee

I'm very curious now

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marisamarinee

Interesting. 

10/10

mkwiant

Awesome.  I loved this.  Though the hardest part to read was actually when she left - Severus crying on the steps.  Gut wrenching.  Thank you for writing such a lovely story of pain, loss, and love!

8/10

NINgal

Wow you and your beta have done a wonderful job. Keep up the good work.

Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)

Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)

Thank you :)

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Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)

Thank you :)

10/10

mo112

... and he'll never babysit... :) Thank you!

Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)

Thank you for reading, I'm glad you enjoyed it x

10/10

katielady08

Beautiful story ... from tragety to love.  I WISH life was this way.Thank you for sharing you talent!:)

Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)

Bless you Katie :) I know life isn't always like that. Thanks for reading.

0/10

roseraven

Very nice story:) sad, hard to read in parts but with a happy ending, thanks for writing it.

Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)

Thanks for reviewing x

10/10

mimmom

awww, how sweet!I was thinking what a long time 25 year is then suddenly thought OMG, my 22nd anniversary is coming up in June.  Doesn't seem like such a long time now.

Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)

Exactly - my husband reminded me that we've been together 23 years and I was like, have we? Really? lol... it seems so much loonger! *snort* Not really., I am with you!

10/10

mimmom

woo hooo!

Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)

aww... I know! Kissing and Everything!

10/10

mimmom

Around the time of my 5th wedding anniversary my husband paid for me to do a MSc in London despite both being Americans.  So I was away from him for a whole year.  It was very difficult but it was also wonderful and coming home was difficult and wonderful.  So many mixed emotions.  It's very scary to just pick up and go like that and we already both knew how we felt given that we'd married 5 years prior.  It wasn't like anything was up in the air.  I imagine that would make it so much worse!Excellent chapter.  I like the letters.

Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)

Thanks - I needed to move things on, and yet miscommunication can happen in letters as much as face to face!

10/10

mimmom

oohh poor things.  Sad and happy at the same time.

Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)

heartwrenching wasn't it?

10/10

mimmom

Oh I love the cliffies, but then I know there's another chapter after this.  If I was reading and there wasn't another chapter I'd probably whine a bit.  Fortunately, there's this fantastic add update bookmark thing that is soooo fantastic.  Otherwise I'd be quite insane by now.

Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)

I so feel that - quite often I'll wait for a story to be completed before i even start - I am not patient for updates!

10/10

mimmom

Poor things.  She doesn't want to leave him, he doesn't want her to go but he thinks she wants to leave and she think he wants her to go...aggg.  They get so muddled up by not speaking.  Snape was always going to be this way.  He's used to hiding emotions.  Hermione...maybe she wasn't this way before her awful experience in Australia.  I hope they work it out.  Excellent story!

Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)

Thanks - I'm glad you are still reading x

10/10

mimmom

Of course they both really do want the same thing...how long before they figure that out?  Hmmm, I can't wait to find out.

Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)

lol... it's the age old story of miscommuication.

10/10

mimmom

Now we're getting into some sentimental stuff!  :)  Excellent.  Makes my all teary-eyed.

Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)

ahhh... I love a happy ending, me!

10/10

mimmom

I knew it was coming.  I knew they had to be dead, but it's still a shock.  It's so damned awful.  OMG.

Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)

Sorry :( Like I said, life was rough this end when I wrote this!

Response from mimmom (Reviewer)

no apology needed.  It's an excellent story and sometimes rough things happen in good stories.  It's certainly true of the Harry Potter books so of course it's going to be in fanfics too.

10/10

mimmom

OMG.  Of course I knew it had to be horrible and worse yet to come.  I'm glad Severus is trying to help.

Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)

And he does in his way. Keep going, it does get brighter!

10/10

mimmom

oh noooo.

Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)

I know... depressing isn't it?

10/10

mimmom

wow.  Poor Hermione...I must read more.  Need to find out what happened to her.

Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)

lol... read on!

10/10

mimmom

so sad

Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)

Isn't it? I had been dealing with a really hard situation at work and this story was the result :(

10/10

mimmom

oh this is so awful.  Poor Hermione.one comment about the repetition of the word gently in two sentences.  Just feels awkward.  No huge deal.  But wanted to mention it.The story is great and I'm going to read the next chapter.

Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)

Thanks for pointing that out - again, I wrote this a long time ago - I'll go and check that and change it.Thanks for being so enthusiastic!

10/10

mimmom

oh this does not bode well.

Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)

mmm... doesn't quite fit in with twee and fluffy either does it?

Response from mimmom (Reviewer)

No, but that's okay, Snape being concerned against his natural inclination to sneer is rather sweet.

10/10

Morsmordre

This is really good, but as Im an alcohlic, its very difficult to read. Dont take offense that I cannot finish this.Oh, props to hermione for being sneaky enough to stun snape AGAIN! (PoA)

Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)

I apologise if I've touched a nerve - if it helps, this is the last chapter where she falls off the wagon and there is positive healing from now on.Look after yourself x

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