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Darkness Within

1: Encounter

2: Consequence

3: On The Edge

4: The Calm Before

5: The Storm

6: Oblivion

7: Desperate Measures

8: Some Riot

9: Catharsis

10: The Heart of the Matter

11: Full of Spices

12: Reaquainting

13: Mending Fences

14: Butterflies

15: One Fine Day

16: My Best Friend

17: Parting Is Such Shit, Really

18: The Letters

19: One Day Like This

20: I Know You

21: Sunshine

22: Epilogue

Darkness Within

neelix

326 Reviews   |   326 Ratings, 0 Likes, 172 Favorites )

Mystery/Suspense Drama Angst Romance Horror Psychological Potions Under Duress 33,678 Words 22 Chapters Complete
Ginevra Weasley Harry Potter Hermione Granger James Potter James Potter (son of Harry) Severus Snape

Severus Snape bumps into his ex-student Hermione Granger, but she's not the Hermione he remembers. Unwittingly pulled into her seedy world, he uncovers a shocking secret.

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Chapters (22)

Chapter 1: Encounter

Chapter 2: Consequence

Chapter 3: On The Edge

Chapter 4: The Calm Before

Chapter 5: The Storm

Chapter 6: Oblivion

Chapter 7: Desperate Measures

Chapter 8: Some Riot

Chapter 9: Catharsis

Chapter 10: The Heart of the Matter

Chapter 11: Full of Spices

Chapter 12: Reaquainting

Chapter 13: Mending Fences

Chapter 14: Butterflies

Chapter 15: One Fine Day

Chapter 16: My Best Friend

Chapter 17: Parting Is Such Shit, Really

Chapter 18: The Letters

Chapter 19: One Day Like This

Chapter 20: I Know You

Chapter 21: Sunshine

Chapter 22: Epilogue


About neelix

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neelix

Member Since 2008  |  21 Stories  |  Favorited by 471  |  528 Reviews Written  |  2,066 Review Responses

Happily married to a sexy Irishman, one teenage son.

Work with teenagers.

Obsessed with Alan Rickman and SS/HG fiction.

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Reviews for Darkness Within

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10/10

braye27

Oh noooooooo...  You did NOT do that!  There must be a problem with my internet connection... it won't download the whole chapter!  Aaarrrggghhh!Yes, you did do that, too.  How could you?Better yet, what are you going to do about it?I'm dying here, neelix.C'mon... help me out a little...Damned good (and damned short) chapter.  And yes I see why.  But I don't have to like it.*grumbles*Five stars anyway!Beth

Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)

Ahh well, you see.. The Admins here work really hard but even they have RL to contend with.. the next chapter is in the queue, and the one after that. We just have to wait... I have a feeling you'll hate the enxt one too though! Sorry!

Response from braye27 (Reviewer)

No problem!  I'm in this for the long haul, and I wouldn't miss it for anything!!!  It's too good!

10/10

Nessa

Oh no you can't do this! Severus go after her! Hermione come back! Please update again soon! Sooner they are back to together the better!

Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)

I know, it's gut wrenching stuff isn't it? Sorry!

10/10

Marble Meadow

UGHHH! Doing something foolish? Have you gone starkers!! Continue on! I hate these evil cliffies! Eccckkk!

Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)

In Severus's head it would have been foolish, particularly as Hermione is leaving for Paris very soon! If it was up to me, he would have snogged her senseless, but my Muse had other ideas... and it's keeping you hooked, right?? Thakns for reviewing, next chapter is in the q!

10/10

kimbee73

Oh no! There is no more to read today! That was an evil cliffie! AHHHHHH!Please update this soon.

Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)

I know and I am truly sorry, but that's the way it came out of my head and onto the screen! Keep reading and thanks for reviewing!

0/10

kimbee73

Okay I am glad that the next chapter is already posted because that was an evil way to end the chapter.

Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)

lol...I just love a cliffie because it's keeps you reading!

0/10

kimbee73

I am really liking this story. I understand where Severus is coming from. He doesn't want to hurt her but....I do hope they will at least talk about it. Or maybe Hermione will have to make the first move. Hmmmm....More to read.

Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)

Wouldn't it be wonderful to have her snog him senseless just as she leave? That would make him think!

0/10

snapefan2007

poor sevvy, he's losing his best friend again.  maybe something will happen and she won't go or Severus will follow her... can't wait to read more!

Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)

Or maybe she will go and he will be miserable! Keep reading.

10/10

braye27

No, I do not hate you, but your cliffies are pure evil!This is such a bittersweet chapter.  Though they both know that it is important for her to go back to school, both are so very sad about it, too.  And I'm sad.  What ever will they do while she is in Paris!The scene of them babysitting James and Albus is priceless, and I almost had a fit when Ginny called out to them just before they were going to kiss.  Aaarrrggghhh!  Evil, evil cliffie... and you've become a real pro at them... just like a good author should.  Keeps 'em comming back for more!Great work, neelix.  I love it!Beth

Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)

Thanks Beth! I'm glad you liked the kissus interruptus... I thought it was important to keep things on the edge!

10/10

Dianne64

Look how domestic Severus is turning out to be!  Hopefully Hermione can find a local school...

Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)

She has signed up to Ecole de Paris.. she won't let them down now will she? Sorry!!

0/10

sunny33

Close, but no cigar! :)

Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)

Yep... it was almost lit, too! Keep reading!

10/10

Nessa

Ginny! Just a minute later and... well things are never that simple. Great update

Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)

Thankyou!! Glad you're still reading!

0/10

kimjo2

very evil cliffie!  love the story, tho.  terrific update.  thanks so much

Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)

Thanks so much for consistently reviewing, it's appreciated!

0/10

Phoenix_Fire

ARGH!  An almost kiss.   I loved this chapter.  I thought it was sweet having Snape see what he could possibly have.  But that almost kiss kills me.  Looking forward to more

Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)

Yes, an alomst kiss... but when they kiss, well... that means the end of the story, really, so I have to string it out a bit more... who knows, maybe she'll just snog him senseless before she leaves!

10/10

Muggline

Of course we hate you! It's some kind of hate-love, though ;-)

Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)

Hate Love... I think I like that in a strange sort of way. Thanks!

0/10

Ugly Kitten

Of course, I adore your cliffhangers! *glowers* Not. I hope nothing happens before Mione goes away, that way things can escalate. ^_~ lol, I can't wait till the next chapter!

Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)

Wouldn't it be hilarious, right, if Hermione snogged him selnseless just as she's about to leave?? That would be soooo funny, don't you think? Hmmm?? next chapter is in the Q. Thanks for reading....

Response from Ugly Kitten (Reviewer)

It would be, especially if Sev decided to chase her down afterwards! LOL

0/10

snapesphoenix

Well it wouldn't Severus and Hermione if things didn't take awhile, would it? It's good this way because, realistically, she needs the time to heal - for herself. Of course, I want them to get together but, imo, I think it would be better, or at least more realistic, if she went back to school first. Not like they can't owl or apparate to see one another. However, I'm really looking forward to that first kiss! Nothing like babysitting with the object of your desire to make you realize what your missing-or depending on who you babysit how much birth control you will need. LoL

Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)

lol... I just wish they'd get on with it though...sheesh! At least this way, we know it's gonna be worth waiting for....

Response from snapesphoenix (Reviewer)

I agree. How long have they been in the same house - 6+ months or longer? Ugh, the tension...I'd go nutz!

0/10

kimjo2

ooohh those two!  just talk to each other!  lovely update.  thanks so much

Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)

haha... they are sooo annoying, in a warm and fuzzy way! Next chapter in the q...

10/10

Muggline

Well, isn't this the moment where the wild desperate chase starts in Hollywood movies?

Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)

Cue music....I think you might be right... BUT this is SEVERUS we're talking about, remember... so don't hold your breath!

10/10

debjunk

Oh, that just went farther and farther downhill!  Hopefully some of her words will sink into his thick skull. 

Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)

ahem.... don't hold your breath...lol

10/10

Nessa

You had to leave it at that point, cruel author indeed!

Severus just sat there and let her run, why didn't he just say 'Hermione I feel the same' .. No he wouldn't say that would he, because he's bloody Severus Snape (Which we all love of course) but god damn stubborn man! Look forward to more by the way haha.

Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)

You know, I was dead cross with him for doing that too. Bloody infuriating man!!! I hope he comes to his senses before the end of the story, I feel the need for serious snogging!

0/10

sunny33

Yikes! Dammit people, communicate!

Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)

I know, but this is Severus we're talking about! Frustrating, isn't it?

0/10

Phoenix_Fire

NOOOOOOOO!!!!!! Oh you wicked wicked author!  Leaving us on the edge of a cliff like that!  Can't wait for the next chapter. *Drums fingers impatiently on desk*

Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)

Don't maon at me!! The story is finished and the chapters are in the Q.... Honest!!!Don't you like cliffie's, then? lol..... *evil grin*

0/10

snapesphoenix

oy - you evil, evil, author you...that wasn't a chapter that was a snack. an evil snack that leaves you unfulfilled (or maybe like chinese food where you just get hungry again in 10 mins after everything has just settled in) lolcan't wait to see what happens next - somethings gotta give with one of them... :-)

Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)

Yes, you'd sort of hope so wouldn't you... heehee... keep reading and let me know your thoughts!

0/10

serenity_potterx

ahh suspense much!!!!! lol good chapter as always hun loving it.S_px

Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)

Thank yuo very much! Hopefully the next chapter will be along soon x

10/10

braye27

What is this?!?!?!  You're ending the chapter here?  You are ebil.  Ebil, I say...  wellllll, not really, only you left us here to wonder what's going to happen next.  Arrggghhhh!Clearly neither wants to be away from the other.  Perhaps after this exchange of words they had just now, Severus will find the courage to tell Hermione how he feels about her... since she's already voiced how she feels about him.*sigh*With a deep, shuddering sigh, he wiped the tears from his eyes and reached for the Firewhisky.  You're breaking my heart here, neelix.  Well written!Beth

Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)

Perhaps after this chapter Severus will tell her how he feels,,, but please don;t hold your breath okay? I do not want to be responsible for the death of a fan!! lol.. next chapter is in the q!!

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