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Potions Under Duress Off the Deep End
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Off the Deep End

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Off the Deep End

sevfank

11 Reviews   |   11 Ratings, 0 Likes, 6 Favorites )

Romance Alternate Universe Potions Under Duress 752 Words 1 Chapter Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape

On Hermione's 18th birthday, she receives a present she never expected.

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Chapter 1: Off the Deep End


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i am an almost 43 year old with 2 children 16 and 12 and a wonderful husband who ignores my Alan Rickman/Harry Potter obsession.

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0/10

sarahetc

Crazy! And a little hilarious. Off to read the sequel!

Response from sevfank (Author of Off the Deep End)

Thanks - i am so glad you liked it!!

9/10

apisa_b

I don't know Dark Harbor, but I enjoyed this nonetheless.I loved the "I see no difference," statement from Hermione. Perfect.

Response from sevfank (Author of Off the Deep End)

Thanks for the review and the kind words. 

0/10

mom7knox

excellent work!!! Thanks for the great laugh!

Response from sevfank (Author of Off the Deep End)

Thank you for the review.  I am glad you liked it!

10/10

luvsev

That was a very nice thing Neville did for Hermione. This was a nice oneshot, though I wish there was more to it. Still, it was really great!

Response from sevfank (Author of Off the Deep End)

Thanks!  I am writing the follow up scene and will send it off to my sis to edit and add a little lemony flavor when I finish.

Response from luvsev (Reviewer)

Oh yay! I look forward to reading it. *Squees in delight*

Response from sevfank (Author of Off the Deep End)

The sequel is up - "Consequences" has been posted.

10/10

ClayPotter

Oh, that was hysterically funny! I would love to have seen it. I have never seen "Dark Harbor," although I would like to. It is not available through Net Flix yet. Maybe someday... I saw a clip of the scene where Alan dives off the back of the boat naked. But alas, the camera is too far away. *sigh*Really fun story. Thanks for posting it.

Response from sevfank (Author of Off the Deep End)

Thanks for the review!  Should I be embarrassed that I hit the zoom and pause button several times during that scene?? No, surely there are many other obsessed fans just like me.I am glad you liked the story.

10/10

neelix

HA!!  I totally love Dark Harbour, so this was perfect... a fave film and Severus!

Response from sevfank (Author of Off the Deep End)

I am so glad you liked it.  Thanks for the review!

0/10

sunny33

Poor Hermione got the blame! :)

Response from sevfank (Author of Off the Deep End)

Thanks for your review!

10/10

snitchette

I think I will be of a great need of that powder *innocent* Do you know where I could procure it (in vaste quantity prefereably *grin*)

Response from sevfank (Author of Off the Deep End)

I'm sorry it is a family recipe.  My sis would never forgive me if i let him - oops, i mean - it out of my possesion.  Thanks so much for your review!!! 

10/10

debjunk

Dang it.  That was hot!  Mean, but hot.

Response from sevfank (Author of Off the Deep End)

Thanks!  Hopefully someday i will graduate to actual lemons but that will be many stories in the future.  Meanwhile, Ksevfansd (my sis and beta) will help with the detention scene.  She is awesome.

10/10

braye27

This was a right scream!  I would love to have seen the look on Severus' face when he realized that he was standing nearly nekkid in front of Hermione and all the host in the Great Hall.Hummmm...I wonder how detention went?Vey funny!  Beth

Response from sevfank (Author of Off the Deep End)

Thanks for reviewing!  I am happy you enjoyed it.  Detention is still being written....

0/10

jectex

You go ,Neville!!!

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