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Consuming Me

1: No Longer a Student

2: Require Your Assistance

3: Slytherin Tactics

4: What I’d do For You

5: Promises, Promises

6: Dreams

7: The Wicked Games We Play

8: I Want You To Want Me

9: Horcrux Surprise

10: Trust in Me

11: I'll Be There For You

12: Blood Sugar Sex Magic

13: Expect the Unexpected

14: Intimidation

15: The Storm is Brewing

16: Unsettling Surprises

17: Do Not Touch What is Not Yours

18: Man That You Fear

19: You Can't Handle the Truth

20: Shame On Me For the Ruse

21: Secrets Revealed

22: Battle of Evermore

23: Whispers of Treachery

24: Retaliation

25: Dangerously In Safe Hands

26: Pieces of My Heart

27: Come Break Me Down

28: A Curse Between Us

29: Stronger as One

30: Deceitful Strategies

31: Living Nightmare

32: The Beginning is the End is the Beginning

Consuming Me

shellsnapeluver

656 Reviews   |   656 Ratings, 0 Likes, 373 Favorites )

Mystery/Suspense Drama Angst Romance Smut Psychological Alternate Universe Potions Under Duress 120,252 Words 32 Chapters Complete
Albus Dumbledore Harry Potter Hermione Granger Lucius Malfoy Remus Lupin Ronald Weasley Severus Snape Tom Riddle (Voldemort)

What would Severus Snape do to get what he desires the most? Anything--no matter the consequences.

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Chapters (32)

Chapter 1: No Longer a Student

Chapter 2: Require Your Assistance

Chapter 3: Slytherin Tactics

Chapter 4: What I’d do For You

Chapter 5: Promises, Promises

Chapter 6: Dreams

Chapter 7: The Wicked Games We Play

Chapter 8: I Want You To Want Me

Chapter 9: Horcrux Surprise

Chapter 10: Trust in Me

Chapter 11: I'll Be There For You

Chapter 12: Blood Sugar Sex Magic

Chapter 13: Expect the Unexpected

Chapter 14: Intimidation

Chapter 15: The Storm is Brewing

Chapter 16: Unsettling Surprises

Chapter 17: Do Not Touch What is Not Yours

Chapter 18: Man That You Fear

Chapter 19: You Can't Handle the Truth

Chapter 20: Shame On Me For the Ruse

Chapter 21: Secrets Revealed

Chapter 22: Battle of Evermore

Chapter 23: Whispers of Treachery

Chapter 24: Retaliation

Chapter 25: Dangerously In Safe Hands

Chapter 26: Pieces of My Heart

Chapter 27: Come Break Me Down

Chapter 28: A Curse Between Us

Chapter 29: Stronger as One

Chapter 30: Deceitful Strategies

Chapter 31: Living Nightmare

Chapter 32: The Beginning is the End is the Beginning


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shellsnapeluver

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Severus Snape has always been my fav character since I found HP. I enjoy dark, graphic stories, but will read some fluff and I love humour.
Happy to be in Slytherin house.

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10/10

neelix

Ha! Good old Hermione putting Severus in his place!! Looking forward to the kissing and making up now!

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Oh, the kissing and makeup will be waiting for a while--we are NOT over yet. Lots more angst and drama--like I said, you have no idea what I am about to throw at you. I can't wait! hahahahah.

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Oh, the kissing and makeup will be waiting for a while--we are NOT over yet. Lots more angst and drama--like I said, you have no idea what I am about to throw at you. I can't wait! hahahahah.

10/10

braye27

"Not here. I want to go somewhere private. Somewhere no one could bother us for some time.” She rested her warm cheek against his and whispered in his ear, “Take me to the Grotto, Severus.”       How very Slytherin of our Hermione!And now that she is free from the promise made in the Grotto, Hermione is in Severus' office "...destroying it.”  Hell hath no fury like a certain pissed off Gryffindor witch!LOL, poor Severus.  Yes, he deserves some level of retribution, but having his office torn apart?  Umm umm umm umm umm.  How will he repair his situation with the witch of his dreams?You were right.  I did not see this coming.  I had thought she would go think about what Phineas had told her, and come up with a plan, but I never considered the kind of utilitarian seduction she perpetrated on our Potions Master.  A very clever witch, she is!!!I love "Consuming Me" and the way you tell their story is brilliant!  Keep it coming, dear, and thank you.Beth

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Yes, I agree--when that witch gets pissed off--of.shit. However, I PROMISE you, it is NOT what you think as WHY she is in his office doing that.Thanks for the words--hopefully it will help with the muse!!Love Shell~

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Yes, I agree--when that witch gets pissed off--of.shit. However, I PROMISE you, it is NOT what you think as WHY she is in his office doing that.Thanks for the words--hopefully it will help with the muse!!Love Shell~

10/10

makaem

Okay, so I totally suck at predicting plot lines... I am so glad I continued reading this story, it's so good.  The first few chapters  were so dark that I wasn't certain  about this story, but I love your writing so I decided to stick with it.(Your TimeTurner story is the bookmark link that leads me to PP).  Anyway, fabulous story, I love it with the zeal of a convert.

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

I am so glad you contiuned on as well, but I am going to warn you, it is about to get dark again. I mean, can't you just SEE everything crashing down around him? Poor Severus. And WOW! Really, that is awesome about Timeturner leading you here! Thank you for sharing that with me. (you should be happy to know that is my next project, writing tt 2 ) thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

I am so glad you contiuned on as well, but I am going to warn you, it is about to get dark again. I mean, can't you just SEE everything crashing down around him? Poor Severus. And WOW! Really, that is awesome about Timeturner leading you here! Thank you for sharing that with me. (you should be happy to know that is my next project, writing tt 2 ) thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

10/10

Nessa

Great chapter!Oh dear Severus isn't going to be very happy. But i think he's going to have o spill a few home truths to get her back.

Update again soon please!! lol

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

I suspect he will be very angry that his office is getting destoryed. Oh, yes. Spill his guts... but not yet. Thank you for the review!

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

I suspect he will be very angry that his office is getting destoryed. Oh, yes. Spill his guts... but not yet. Thank you for the review!

10/10

Muggline

*snicker* go Hermione, go!

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

You are such an instigator. bwhahahahah.

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

You are such an instigator. bwhahahahah.

10/10

chivalric

Purrrrr... An angry, strong Hermione - do you have any idea how much I like that? Facing him, making him do what she wants, and he honest enough to tell her the truth (well, at least about that bit ;-) Well done, dear. And destroying his office would be a thing only a young and upset woman would do. Fits perfectly.

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Thank you for reviewing, doll. I do like angry Hermione--she is very fun to write. And yeah, that is true, a young upset woman would do that, but I am telling you, you have no idea what is coming as to WHY she is tearing it up. *snickers* I can't WAIT for the next chapter! You will be shocked.I hope.Love you!

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Thank you for reviewing, doll. I do like angry Hermione--she is very fun to write. And yeah, that is true, a young upset woman would do that, but I am telling you, you have no idea what is coming as to WHY she is tearing it up. *snickers* I can't WAIT for the next chapter! You will be shocked.I hope.Love you!

10/10

Maddie

Damn. You are right. I have no idea where you are going next. I feel a major pout coming on.

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

A major pout! hell, she is destroying his office--more than that!! hahahahahah. Won't you be surprised in next chapter when you find out the truth...*snickers*Thanks~

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

A major pout! hell, she is destroying his office--more than that!! hahahahahah. Won't you be surprised in next chapter when you find out the truth...*snickers*Thanks~

10/10

livvy6

All right! Hermione getting her fight on! I love it. Now the pecker is going to get it royally! As he should!Great chapter!Livvy

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Yes, yes he should. He has done some very bad things... but more on that next chapter!

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Yes, yes he should. He has done some very bad things... but more on that next chapter!

10/10

mummy

Sorry I haven't reviewed for a few chapters  but I have read. Oh God help Severus. Getting some idea's but I'm sure you'll confuse me again. many thanks

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Oooo!!! Ideas!!! Send them on! lol.Thanks for reading!

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Oooo!!! Ideas!!! Send them on! lol.Thanks for reading!

0/10

kimjo2

blod, gore squick, etc is ok for greyback and rudy.  at least i hope that's who it's for.  great update.  thanks so much                         

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Oh, yes... you can bet your sweet bottom that is what is up next for those too.Thank you for reviewing!! ANd I love your flame guy!! lol. Go get em!!!

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Oh, yes... you can bet your sweet bottom that is what is up next for those too.Thank you for reviewing!! ANd I love your flame guy!! lol. Go get em!!!

0/10

draegon_fire

You're right, it could've been much worse for Hermione. I keep forgetting about her promise in the Grotto. I can't wait to see what Severus does to those two, I can't even describe. I know he's going to be very imaginative in his torture of them, that's for sure.

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Well, I hope what I have in store for those two statisfies... That silly promise saved her, hmmm?? Not so silly anymore is it? lol.Thank you so much for reviewing~

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Well, I hope what I have in store for those two statisfies... That silly promise saved her, hmmm?? Not so silly anymore is it? lol.Thank you so much for reviewing~

10/10

braye27

Greyback and Lestrange are not long for this world.  Severus is going to tear them, piece by miserable piece, into a pile of bloody guts.I'm glad that Hermione's promise to Severus in the Grotto protected her, and that Ron and Harry found her in time to get her to Madam Pomfrey.This was a very tightly written chapter... everything happened "just in the nick of time."  Good job!!!Beth

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

You think Severus would really do that? REALLY??? But..but... he's so... nice.mwhahahahahahah. Yeah fucking right. Greyback and Lestrange will WISH he would just AK them, but I promise, pain will be involved. Yep, just in the nick of time is right! Thanks for the support!

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

You think Severus would really do that? REALLY??? But..but... he's so... nice.mwhahahahahahah. Yeah fucking right. Greyback and Lestrange will WISH he would just AK them, but I promise, pain will be involved. Yep, just in the nick of time is right! Thanks for the support!

0/10

Gemxk2

I love reading murderous!Snape! Its just....wow. Cant wait to see what he does to them.

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Ooooo!!! I'm so excited! Thank you for reading and reviewing!!! I hope you like the next chapter!Shell~

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Ooooo!!! I'm so excited! Thank you for reading and reviewing!!! I hope you like the next chapter!Shell~

9/10

saravasti

You're evil, but I like it. :D The promise in the Grotto is like a fidelity Unbreakeable Vow. How cunning can Severus be to kill Lestrange and Greyback?

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

I am evil. Ask my betas. Yes, you are SO RIGHT!!!! ABout the grotto... I love how you put that, "fidelity unbreakable vow" Excellent

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

!!! Thanks for reviewing

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

I am evil. Ask my betas. Yes, you are SO RIGHT!!!! ABout the grotto... I love how you put that, "fidelity unbreakable vow" Excellent

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

!!! Thanks for reviewing

10/10

Lkmaide

OMG!!  I hope you go into excruitiating detail over what he is  gonna do to the wolf and Lestrange.  And I look forward to relishing every detail.  You rock and possibly rule the world!  OMG  I just realized, those poor boys at Durmstrag  heehee  veelas.

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

You know me, lkmaide. You know I'll write the details. heheheheh...Rule the world??? OMG. You are so damn AWESOME! You can one of my confidonts. (spelling, is wrong I know...) And dude. I just realized too about the boys and the veelas!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! hahahahahhahahahah. Hope they have a full supply of contrectipive potions...

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

You know me, lkmaide. You know I'll write the details. heheheheh...Rule the world??? OMG. You are so damn AWESOME! You can one of my confidonts. (spelling, is wrong I know...) And dude. I just realized too about the boys and the veelas!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! hahahahahhahahahah. Hope they have a full supply of contrectipive potions...

10/10

kizzy7

Yes, the Grotto and LB72 are genius, as is your use of it. I have to say I'm relieved... for now. Though your evil A/N has me worried again. Though Hermione has been stupid, she does not deserve to be raped. And I look forward to Snape's revenge. *shudders* You have made him delightfully frightening in this. Oh and I loved Ron in this. And you for making him lovable. Eager for more! ~kizzy

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Hi Kizzy,Thank you for such wonderful compliments, you are too sweet. No, Hermione doesn't deserve to be raped--no one does. But, hopefully a close call will have her thinking next time she does something stupid... hopefully. And you really should be shuddering over Snape. Now, if you saw him coming at you with murder and torture in his eyes, wouldn't you just drop dead from fright?I sure as hell would. Thank you so much about saying you like Ron in this. I feel bad for him sometimes, and I wanted him with the level head rather than Harry...More soon!Shell~

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Hi Kizzy,Thank you for such wonderful compliments, you are too sweet. No, Hermione doesn't deserve to be raped--no one does. But, hopefully a close call will have her thinking next time she does something stupid... hopefully. And you really should be shuddering over Snape. Now, if you saw him coming at you with murder and torture in his eyes, wouldn't you just drop dead from fright?I sure as hell would. Thank you so much about saying you like Ron in this. I feel bad for him sometimes, and I wanted him with the level head rather than Harry...More soon!Shell~

10/10

livvy6

oh, man Snape is going to kill them isn't he? Poor Hermione. That was still awful.Livvy

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

I believe it is safe to say Snape is going after them, yes.Thanks for reviewing!

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

I believe it is safe to say Snape is going after them, yes.Thanks for reviewing!

10/10

Maddie

Excellent. I see now. Snape on the warpath, yeah.

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Warpath--you know it!!! I'd be shaken in my boots if I saw him coming. wouldn't you? Thanks love!

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Warpath--you know it!!! I'd be shaken in my boots if I saw him coming. wouldn't you? Thanks love!

10/10

nastygrl

OMG!  My heart was pounding so hard in my chest!  Hermione got in a few good ones before they got her, and thank God one of Severus's misdeeds came in handy!  He may not have been there in person, but he saved her just the same.  And he used the "c" word again.  Those bastards are doomed!!!  Severus is going to lay such a hex weilding smack down on them, and I can't wait!  Good for Ron for stepping up and being mature for once.  He isn't given enough credit sometimes.  Great chapter!  Severus should take Hermione home, have gorilla sex, then go and kill some bastards.  Then go back and have more sex!  I loved this chapter!Get writing!

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Yes! His misdeeds came in handy!!! Soooooo lucky for him, hmmm??ANd yes, the bastards have a nasty death waiting for them...  I hope you like it. Yes, you are right, Ron isn't the one who gets a lot of credit, so that is why I have him do that. More sex.... on the way... sometime... I hope... hehehehheeheLove you!

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Yes! His misdeeds came in handy!!! Soooooo lucky for him, hmmm??ANd yes, the bastards have a nasty death waiting for them...  I hope you like it. Yes, you are right, Ron isn't the one who gets a lot of credit, so that is why I have him do that. More sex.... on the way... sometime... I hope... hehehehheeheLove you!

10/10

makaem

Yes, the Grotto scene now makes huge sense. I like this Snape better and better.

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Gots to love that Grotto, don't ya??? I sure do... saved my story!  Thanks for reviewing and leaving an awesome rating.

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Gots to love that Grotto, don't ya??? I sure do... saved my story!  Thanks for reviewing and leaving an awesome rating.

0/10

rhiannon113

I hope Snape locks them in a small room with Hagrid's Skreswts!!!  That will be a fun chapter to read.

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

OMFG,

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

, you are just too funny!!! Can you imagine!! arrrggghhh. Thanks for reviewing!

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

OMFG,

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

, you are just too funny!!! Can you imagine!! arrrggghhh. Thanks for reviewing!

9/10

sinbad

Not bad, I liked the spell's effects.

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Thank you!

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Thank you!

0/10

LettieFairweather

omg that was sooo good! please hurry up and write more!! I can't wait!!

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Ahhhh, thanks. *blush* More coming, soon.

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Ahhhh, thanks. *blush* More coming, soon.

0/10

kimjo2

so is he evil!snape or not?  only time (and you!) will tell.  but only after an evil!cliffie (tm reg).  i look forward to the next exciting adventure.  thanks so much

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

well, kimjo, I dunno. You tell me what YOU think... is he evil or not?And those evil cliffies are not stopping any time soon! lol.Thanks so much for reviewing.

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

well, kimjo, I dunno. You tell me what YOU think... is he evil or not?And those evil cliffies are not stopping any time soon! lol.Thanks so much for reviewing.

10/10

nastygrl

Oh God!  How the hell is Severus going to explain all this to Hermione so won't kill him or blame herself even more?   I hope like hell Hermione gets away - I can't believe they used glamours, those bastards!  I hope she hexes their bits off!  Severus better do something to help her!  You are an evil person.  Pure evil.  Keep writing!!!!!

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Yeah, they may be bastards... but darling, you've got to admit, that's pretty smart thinking. Thank you for reviewing. I love them. I love you.

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Yeah, they may be bastards... but darling, you've got to admit, that's pretty smart thinking. Thank you for reviewing. I love them. I love you.

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