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Severus Big Bang Can't Take My Eyes Off You
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Can't Take My Eyes Off You

1: Chapter One: Watching

2: Chapter Two: Under Orders

3: Chapter Three: Planning the Mission

4: Chapter Four: Studying Together

5: Chapter Five: Another Know-it-all

6: Chapter Six: Investigations

7: Chapter Seven: Happy Birthday, Hermione

8: Chapter Eight: Halloween

9: Chapter Nine: A Private Moment

10: Chapter Ten: Tennis, Anyone?

11: Chapter Eleven: Giving Into Temptation

12: Chapter Twelve: Frustration Leads to Revelation

13: Chapter Thirteen: Spy Tactics

14: Chapter Fourteen: Explaining Magic

15: Chapter Fifteen: Back to Class

16: Chapter Sixteen: Return to Magic

17: Chapter Seventeen: Christmas Comes But Once a Year

18: Chapter Eighteen: New Year's Eve

19: Chapter Nineteen: Back to Hogwarts

20: Chapter Twenty: Avoiding the Issue

21: Chapter Twenty-one: Poetry and Roses

22: Chapter Twenty-two: Can't Take My Eyes Off You

23: Epilogue

Can't Take My Eyes Off You

sunny33

315 Reviews   |   315 Ratings, 0 Likes, 130 Favorites )

Humor Romance Action/Adventure Epilogue What Epilogue? Severus Big Bang 50,451 Words 23 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape

Severus and Hermione are both feeling disgruntled after the war is over. Especially with each other. Watch the fireworks when they are sent on a special mission together.

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Chapters (23)

Chapter 1: Chapter One: Watching

Chapter 2: Chapter Two: Under Orders

Chapter 3: Chapter Three: Planning the Mission

Chapter 4: Chapter Four: Studying Together

Chapter 5: Chapter Five: Another Know-it-all

Chapter 6: Chapter Six: Investigations

Chapter 7: Chapter Seven: Happy Birthday, Hermione

Chapter 8: Chapter Eight: Halloween

Chapter 9: Chapter Nine: A Private Moment

Chapter 10: Chapter Ten: Tennis, Anyone?

Chapter 11: Chapter Eleven: Giving Into Temptation

Chapter 12: Chapter Twelve: Frustration Leads to Revelation

Chapter 13: Chapter Thirteen: Spy Tactics

Chapter 14: Chapter Fourteen: Explaining Magic

Chapter 15: Chapter Fifteen: Back to Class

Chapter 16: Chapter Sixteen: Return to Magic

Chapter 17: Chapter Seventeen: Christmas Comes But Once a Year

Chapter 18: Chapter Eighteen: New Year's Eve

Chapter 19: Chapter Nineteen: Back to Hogwarts

Chapter 20: Chapter Twenty: Avoiding the Issue

Chapter 21: Chapter Twenty-one: Poetry and Roses

Chapter 22: Chapter Twenty-two: Can't Take My Eyes Off You

Chapter 23: Epilogue


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sunny33

Member Since 2008  |  129 Stories  |  Favorited by 689  |  8,383 Reviews Written  |  8,235 Review Responses

Hello all,  I am a 53 year old from NZ.  Although SSHG is how I started and still my main pairing, I'll give pretty much any pairing a try, whether it be reading or writing.  Sev and Herms need a bit of variety at times. ;)

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10/10

pearl city princess

OMG.........Hermione sure is bold, but Severus is just as bad.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

They are a naughty pair! :)

10/10

pearl city princess

Finally some progress, it will be interesting to see who it is and what they are doing at the muggle school.  I love all the flirting between Seth and Harmony, it looks like they are making progress too.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

They are indeed. :)

10/10

fynnsmom

It is hard to believe that Hermione isn't good at something.  I'd think she'd be really good at muggle sports.  Severus would have to go and watch her tennis lesson--pervert:D  I'm really beginning to wonder who's using magic at this school.  Great chapter.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Thank you! :)

10/10

HBAR

Oh man.  There is so much here to love... and hate.  I want to know what is in their letters.  Surely not just a mission report.I'm glad she called him out on the charter and was quite sneaky with her methods.  Too bad he stopped things where he did.  I was really hoping she'd give him something good for his birthday.  Although I guess she was trying to, LOL.I quite enjoyed the conversation about the triple-S project.  Those boys make me laugh everytime.As for the end, I was truly hoping that Draco knew about the feelings between them, and because he likes Snape and maybe knows that he won't go there on his own, that he was setting up some jealousy to spur him into action.  Doesn't look like that is the case.  Fucking Malfoy, indeed.  And while we're at it fucking Snape as well.  That man needs to get it together and quit being such a killjoy about their relationship.  What else can Hermione do to confirm her devotion to him?  I'm afraid of what comes next.  But not so afraid that I won't  tell you to update soon!

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Draco is being a prat and winding her up.  He knows nothing about Hermione and Snape.  Mind you, it could have been a good idea to have him finding out and deliberately making Snape jealous. :)

10/10

snitchette

It's a good thing he's becoming jealous. And maybe that'll help him ask her to be his date on the Hogsmeade week-end.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

You'll have to wait until next week to find out. :)

0/10

quaffswinegaily

Get Snape to blast the arrogant socks off Draco.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

There's a thought. :)

0/10

thepantsparty

Draco, you cad! *hem* Sorry. Got a little caught up in the story.Loved it :)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Good.  I like it when readers really get into the tale! :)

10/10

fynnsmom

That was too funny.  How embarrassing--Snape's gotta be a strong man to just sit there like nothing happened:P  Actually I was reading this at work and it was hard not to laugh out loud.  Great chapter.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

LOL.  Don't get yourself into trouble now! :)

10/10

fynnsmom

Oh goody--some progress has been made.  It was hilarious that both Snape and Hermione wore their real clothes as costumes and that Snape dressed like a vampire.  It's funny how all of the older girls are lusting over him.  Great chapter.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Hehe.  They say the best way to lie is to tell the truth... or part of it. :)

0/10

fynnsmom

I like how Hermione and Snape keep having conversations with themselves.  I wonder who's dong magic.  Funny that the school colors are green and silver.  Great chapter.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Thanks! :)

10/10

pearl city princess

Snape should be thrilled, he never had a fan club at Hogwarts, maybe he will loosen up and enjoy it.  Hermione sure would hate it if he did.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

She sure will! :)

10/10

Becky

Bloody Stubborn Severus....Maybe seeing Hermione with Malfoy will make him Jealous....Well done, I love it!

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Thanks! :)

10/10

rubyanjel

Damn you Malfoy! Oh, it seems that Granger attracts Death Eaters... Oh, if this were in the movies, a lot of fangirls would risk everything to hex her! Haha. Their jealousy is so powerful, yah know. And I wouldn't mind being locked up in the Astronomy Tower  with good ol' Snape...for the rest of my life. It'll be fun!:)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Shall we try and arrange it then? ;)

10/10

mimmom

LOL.  Severus...get it together, silly man.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

He will... eventually! :)

10/10

pearl city princess

I love all the banter back and forth, I hope it continues at the new school.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

You'll see soon. :)

10/10

pearl city princess

This is really cute so far, I can't wait to see how they work together once they go undercover.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Thanks. :)

10/10

pearl city princess

Severus on the Sax, I can definitely see it, it's a very sexy instrument.  I love the idea of them being undercover.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Don't think they like it... yet. ;)

10/10

pearl city princess

Good start, can't wait to see where this goes.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Thanks. :)

10/10

fynnsmom

Very entertaining as always.  I suppose I'd be annoyed if I found out that I could've been using simple things, like a drying charm, but I'd been doing things the muggle way.  Fun to think of Snape strolling to his room in just a towel:D  Great chapter.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Thank you. :)

0/10

fynnsmom

It's funny to think of fictional Snape as having a fan club.  Now Alan Rickman, on the other hand, most definitely has a fan club.  It's also funny to think that there's another student who's just as know-it-all as Hermione ever was--and she's annoying Hermione.  Great chapter.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Thanks! :)

0/10

thepantsparty

I stayed up until 2 a.m. reading this all in one go, dear author. I love the banter between Severus and Hermione.Can't wait to read more!

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Supreme effort! :D

10/10

fynnsmom

That was too funny.  One of the things I like the best about this story is the occasional odd thought out of the blue--like Hermione commenting on how good Severus looks in jeans.  I wouldn't mind seeing him in jeans.  I loved it when they were picking out names for themselves.  I like Harmony and Seth seems about right for Severus.  I can't wait for the sax playing moments.  Great chapter.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Thanks! :)

10/10

fynnsmom

That was too funny--especially the first part.  She even has a bossy patronus--gee, who would've expected that:D  I'm still laughing:P  Shacklebolt is pretty funny too what with his sharing their secrets.  I can't believe Severus plays the sax.  I'm with Hermione--I'll believe it when it happens.  Great chapter.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Thank you! :)

9/10

fynnsmom

This is my first story on this site.  So far I like it.  That was a very interesting game that Hermione and Severus were playing.  I can't believe Hermione engaged in a wet t-shirt contest on purpose.  I agree with Severus.  A couple of weeks ago the Golden Trio was fighting the Dark Lord.  I don't think they need a babysitter.  I don't have a lot to say yet since I just started reading.  I enjoyed the chapter.  There were some very humorous parts.  Humor is always good.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Thanks for reading an reviewing.  I hope you find a lot of humour in this.  It was intended to be more funny than serious. :)

0/10

ClayPotter

Another adorable chapter. I just knew Snape would give good hugs.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Sometimes the dark and silent type can surprise you! :)

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