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Severus Big Bang Can't Take My Eyes Off You
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Can't Take My Eyes Off You

1: Chapter One: Watching

2: Chapter Two: Under Orders

3: Chapter Three: Planning the Mission

4: Chapter Four: Studying Together

5: Chapter Five: Another Know-it-all

6: Chapter Six: Investigations

7: Chapter Seven: Happy Birthday, Hermione

8: Chapter Eight: Halloween

9: Chapter Nine: A Private Moment

10: Chapter Ten: Tennis, Anyone?

11: Chapter Eleven: Giving Into Temptation

12: Chapter Twelve: Frustration Leads to Revelation

13: Chapter Thirteen: Spy Tactics

14: Chapter Fourteen: Explaining Magic

15: Chapter Fifteen: Back to Class

16: Chapter Sixteen: Return to Magic

17: Chapter Seventeen: Christmas Comes But Once a Year

18: Chapter Eighteen: New Year's Eve

19: Chapter Nineteen: Back to Hogwarts

20: Chapter Twenty: Avoiding the Issue

21: Chapter Twenty-one: Poetry and Roses

22: Chapter Twenty-two: Can't Take My Eyes Off You

23: Epilogue

Can't Take My Eyes Off You

sunny33

315 Reviews   |   315 Ratings, 0 Likes, 130 Favorites )

Humor Romance Action/Adventure Epilogue What Epilogue? Severus Big Bang 50,451 Words 23 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape

Severus and Hermione are both feeling disgruntled after the war is over. Especially with each other. Watch the fireworks when they are sent on a special mission together.

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Chapters (23)

Chapter 1: Chapter One: Watching

Chapter 2: Chapter Two: Under Orders

Chapter 3: Chapter Three: Planning the Mission

Chapter 4: Chapter Four: Studying Together

Chapter 5: Chapter Five: Another Know-it-all

Chapter 6: Chapter Six: Investigations

Chapter 7: Chapter Seven: Happy Birthday, Hermione

Chapter 8: Chapter Eight: Halloween

Chapter 9: Chapter Nine: A Private Moment

Chapter 10: Chapter Ten: Tennis, Anyone?

Chapter 11: Chapter Eleven: Giving Into Temptation

Chapter 12: Chapter Twelve: Frustration Leads to Revelation

Chapter 13: Chapter Thirteen: Spy Tactics

Chapter 14: Chapter Fourteen: Explaining Magic

Chapter 15: Chapter Fifteen: Back to Class

Chapter 16: Chapter Sixteen: Return to Magic

Chapter 17: Chapter Seventeen: Christmas Comes But Once a Year

Chapter 18: Chapter Eighteen: New Year's Eve

Chapter 19: Chapter Nineteen: Back to Hogwarts

Chapter 20: Chapter Twenty: Avoiding the Issue

Chapter 21: Chapter Twenty-one: Poetry and Roses

Chapter 22: Chapter Twenty-two: Can't Take My Eyes Off You

Chapter 23: Epilogue


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sunny33

Member Since 2008  |  129 Stories  |  Favorited by 689  |  8,383 Reviews Written  |  8,235 Review Responses

Hello all,  I am a 53 year old from NZ.  Although SSHG is how I started and still my main pairing, I'll give pretty much any pairing a try, whether it be reading or writing.  Sev and Herms need a bit of variety at times. ;)

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Reviews for Can't Take My Eyes Off You

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10/10

HBAR

Yay!  I'm so excited by their progress that I want to jump up and make it a group hug *contemplates the safety of actually trying that*  It seems that it just might be possible for a Snape-Sneyd hybrid to emerge after all.  And even though he didn't come to her room, and she doesn't have a plan, and he said he loved her in code, I am confident they are going to get there.  Can't wait to see the sparks fly.  Loving this, as always!

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Thanks! :)

10/10

mimmom

lol

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

:D

10/10

Becky

I love this chapter....Such a great surprise to see an update..can't wait for more...Well done....I agree Hermione needs to ignore him till he sees the error of his ways..LOL!!!

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

I'm trying to update soon after it falls off the front page, so every 5-7 days. It's all written and ready to post. :)

Response from Becky (Reviewer)

Oh that's wonderful, It's such a joy to see an update...Can't wait to see what Hermione does...LOL!!!

10/10

flowerbed

Great chapter and amazing story. I love the way it's written, only from dialogues and thoughts. It's really original and it gives an insight into the characters that's very, very entertaining. Please update soon.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Thanks.  It was a real experiment to write it like this, but it was a lot of fun. :)

10/10

rubyanjel

i want the next chapter. now. haha. just joking. seriously, I'm looking forward for the next chapter!keep up the good work!

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Hehe.  You can't have it until next week.  :P

Response from rubyanjel (Reviewer)

aww. next week. It seems like bad news for me 'cause i'll be having my summer class. :) i'll try my best to wait for it and read!!!!! yeah!

10/10

kimbee73

Was that an admission of something? Hmmmmm I wonder....well anyway great chapter and keep updating.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Thanks! :)

10/10

Nessa

He admitted something. I think Hermione's plan may just work.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

You'll see soon! :)

Response from Nessa (Reviewer)

Hope not to soon... because I'm kind of enjoying this lol

10/10

snitchette

"And you love me for it.”“Indeed.”Wow!! That is the closest he ever got to admitting his feelings for her. It's a huge improvement. I think everything will be fine now. Althought I long to see how class will go after that.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

She knows he loves her, he knows he loves her, but it just kind of slipped out! :)

0/10

kimbee73

I think she may have him convinced.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

She has a way to go yet, ;)

0/10

lucyferr

“Do you wizards always kiss and make up after you have fought?”“Er… no, Amelia. But I see what you mean about close.”LOL!

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Thanks! :)

0/10

lucyferr

Yay! His patronus changed!

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Yep.  He was over the whole doe idea! :)

0/10

kimjo2

glorious update!  thanks and mucho smoochies

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Thank you. :)

0/10

quaffswinegaily

He's hooked.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Sure is. :)

10/10

HBAR

This just gets better and better.  Hermione's friends are hilarious.  I can't believe they asked him to do the speech.  No wait, I can believe that they asked him.  I just never thought he'd actually do it!I think in RL, it makes him all the more enticing to know that he wants to be appropriate in terms of a relationship with his student.  *psst... Severus.  This is fanfic, not RL.  You can do anything with anyone at anytime.  We don't judge.  A little drooling, and melting, and fanning of selves, but no judging.*  What is he waiting for?!?!Oh, I hope he doesn't look into her mind, because if he sees what expectations she has for him in the bedroom, he will definitely run away screaming.Can't wait for some Grimmauld Place action!

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Don't you think it's funny that as readers, we all think Hermione and Severus are made for each other, and what are they waiting for, whereas if it was real life, we'd be horrified! I suppose that's why they call it fantasy! :)

0/10

aliciana

Right.....yes it would be Katrina, my best mate as she really was a bit witchy. I loved her though......in a very platonic, non-lesbian way you understand. Christ, we were man mad. But I digress. Hermione really did the only decent thing after making such a dreadful comment and I'm glad that it was mutually beneficial to both of them.  You do have a lovely writing style that flows easily but has a delightful soupcon of just being a little tongue-in-cheek. I love it. Oh yes, the second bit of spookiness that really toppled me when the three suspects were named is that my forenames are (drum roll) Morag Alicia! Not many of us about even when I grew up in 60s/70s Scotland and certainly not when I moved to Manchester. So imagine how good I felt when on my first reading of Philosopher's Stone, not only was there an Alicia Spinnet but a Morag McDougall too. Christ I might get a mug with my name on it at last. Thank you Sunny for giving both me and my mate a nod in the realms of HP fanfic. Best wishes, Love Morag Alicia xxxxxx. 

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

That really is uncanny.  And my sister was a McDougall for some years before she divorced LOL. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story as it unfolds. :)

0/10

quaffswinegaily

Nice hugs, nice kiss.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Nice is not what we want though, is it? ;)

0/10

quaffswinegaily

Should I try to imagine the racquet as an extension of me when I try to play tennis; or could I have Snape watching me to improve my technique? The magic between them is building.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

I think the latter would work just fine... ;)

10/10

fuchsiasteerpike

Ooo dang... Can't wait for more! :)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Coming up soon to a screen near you! :)

0/10

aliciana

You're not originally from Ayrshire in Scotland are you Sunny? There's too many coincidences here I'm afraid. We're the same age and when I lived in Ayrshire until 1976 (I now live in Lancashire) my best mate was called.......Hermione Grang....(only kidding).....Katrina Wallace! There is also another big "coincidence" but I'm not revealing that one yet. Ooooooh this is getting weird and very spooky. Love the story by the way and your extremely pervy Sev is certainly floating my boat. Pure magic! Best wishes, Love Ali xxxx.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

That is spooky.  No, my only visit ever to the UK was in 2001 when we spent 2 weeks in London and West Sussex.  Katrina's first name is a nod to one of my colleagues, as are the other girls.  They were all instrumental in helping me concoct the plot over morning tea!  Very productive we are.  *whistles innocently*   Can't wait to find out the other big coincidence! Incidentally, Seth Sneyd and this story were inspired by the new music master at my son's boarding school.  I first saw him at a concert in August last year.  He was the right age and had the leanness, the nose, the unsmiling demeanour (and when he did smile it was more of a smirk).  He worked in the Music Basement and waved his baton like a wand. He was originally from the UK.  I swear it was Snape incognito. I've never spoken to the man himself - he'd probably be horrified he had inspired a smutty story! LOL. :)

10/10

HBAR

You are such an effing tease :)  I am officially going to rename this chapter "Dipping A Little Toe Into The Pool Of Temptation."I did like the Dumbledore conversation that precipitated the kiss.  They've been dancing around the issue for so long, it was going to take something extra to spur them into action.  I, like Hermione, was hoping for a bit more action, but hey, baby steps are good.  At least they love each other, whether they admit it any time soon, or not.I was afraid in the beginning of this story that there was no mystery wizard or witch at this school, but that Kingsley (and who knows what other coconspirators) recognized that they would make a good pair, but that they would never come to that unless forced into close proximity.  So he made up this whole thing.  I say I was afraid, not because it would make for a bad story, but was afraid of what these two would do to Kingsley if they found out.  Anyway, will be anxiously awaiting more.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

There is definitely a mystery to solve, and like good intrepid investigators they will get to the bottom of it. Not without a few diversions along the way... ;)

10/10

HBAR

Ah. That’s the trick. Pretend they are Snape’s balls you are hitting over the net. If he ever mentions this at Hogwarts, it’ll be canaries for him!Boy is she a force to be reckoned with!  Her friends are so intrigued as to the nature of her relationship with Mr. Sneyd, and I think it only makes it worse that she is so nonchalant every time it comes up.  I'm surprised that they haven't tried to follow her to see if there is anything to talk about.I love it when I finish a chapter and there is another one at the ready for my viewing pleasure.  This should become a habit!

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

But then it would all be over far too quickly.  :)

0/10

kimjo2

wow!  the computer screen was sizzling!  great stuff.  thanks and mucho smoochies

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

LOL. Soon they will have to actually work on their mission, bit the hijinks continue. :)

10/10

Becky

Squeeeeeeeeeeeee...an Update, Oh I love it, FINALLY they kissed, now if Severus would just stop this teacher/student/I'm not worthy of love complex..LOL...Bless his heart....Looking forward to more...WELL DONE!!!

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Thanks,

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

! :)

10/10

snitchette

2 chapters in a row! That's almost like Christmas. And A KISS *hourray* I just hope Sev' will come to his senses and act upon his feelings.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

I thought the first one was a bit short, so I gave you two! :)

10/10

snitchette

At least she didn't chose ballet. Poor Sev would have had a hard attack seing her in a tutu.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

He would indeed! :)

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