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Potions Under Duress Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road
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Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road

1: Part One

2: Part Two

3: Part Three

4: Part Four

5: Part Five

6: Part Six

7: Part Seven

8: Part Eight

9: Part Nine

10: Part Ten

11: Part Eleven

12: Part Twelve

13: Part Thirteen

14: Part Fourteen

15: Part Fifteen

16: Part Sixteen

17: Part Seventeen

18: Part Eighteen

19: Part Nineteen

20: Part Twenty

21: Part Twenty-One

22: Part Twenty-Two

23: Part Twenty-Three

24: Part Twenty-Four

25: Part Twenty-Five

26: Part Twenty-Six

27: Part Twenty-Seven

28: Part Twenty-Eight

29: Part Twenty-Nine

30: Part Thirty

31: Part Thirty-One

32: Party Thirty-Two

33: Part Thirty-Three

Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road

devsgma

418 Reviews   |   418 Ratings, 0 Likes, 173 Favorites )

Humor Romance Alternate Universe Potions Under Duress 118,415 Words 33 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Original Character Severus Snape Ginevra Weasley Harry Potter Albus Dumbledore Minerva McGonagall Cormac McLaggen Astoria Greengrass Draco Malfoy

Darned Child and Devsgma have combined their talents to tell you the story of what has happened to our favorite pair. It starts with a few letters from one extremely grouchy Potions maker to the manager of a used book store. Canon through Deathly Hallows to the point of Severus Snape's supposed death at which point it becomes AU.

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Chapters (33)

Chapter 1: Part One

Chapter 2: Part Two

Chapter 3: Part Three

Chapter 4: Part Four

Chapter 5: Part Five

Chapter 6: Part Six

Chapter 7: Part Seven

Chapter 8: Part Eight

Chapter 9: Part Nine

Chapter 10: Part Ten

Chapter 11: Part Eleven

Chapter 12: Part Twelve

Chapter 13: Part Thirteen

Chapter 14: Part Fourteen

Chapter 15: Part Fifteen

Chapter 16: Part Sixteen

Chapter 17: Part Seventeen

Chapter 18: Part Eighteen

Chapter 19: Part Nineteen

Chapter 20: Part Twenty

Chapter 21: Part Twenty-One

Chapter 22: Part Twenty-Two

Chapter 23: Part Twenty-Three

Chapter 24: Part Twenty-Four

Chapter 25: Part Twenty-Five

Chapter 26: Part Twenty-Six

Chapter 27: Part Twenty-Seven

Chapter 28: Part Twenty-Eight

Chapter 29: Part Twenty-Nine

Chapter 30: Part Thirty

Chapter 31: Part Thirty-One

Chapter 32: Party Thirty-Two

Chapter 33: Part Thirty-Three


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devsgma

Member Since 2007  |  9 Stories  |  Favorited by 76  |  14 Reviews Written  |  830 Review Responses

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Reviews for Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road

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10/10

jessica

Hilarious darling, and very sweet!

Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)

I'm so sorry it's taken me so long to respond to your review.  RL has reared it's ugly head and stolen me away.  I think I've found my way back.  Thank you so much for your kind words.

Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)

I'm so sorry it's taken me so long to respond to your review.  RL has reared it's ugly head and stolen me away.  I think I've found my way back.  Thank you so much for your kind words.

10/10

Becky

Squeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!  Poor Hermione, and Simon!! Blast Mrs. Carmichael.. I'll Avada Kedavra her myself!!  Wonderful chapter, MORE...Hurry!! LOL!!!   Will be looking forward to the next chapter...can't wait to see what happens....WOW!!!!

Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)

I'm so sorry it's taken me so long to respond to your review.  RL has reared it's ugly head and stolen me away.  I think I've found my way back.  Thank you so much for your kind words.

Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)

I'm so sorry it's taken me so long to respond to your review.  RL has reared it's ugly head and stolen me away.  I think I've found my way back.  Thank you so much for your kind words.

0/10

kimjo2

more wonderfulness.  thanks, youse guys, so much and i await the next chapter semi-patiently.

Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)

I'm so sorry it's taken me so long to respond to your review.  RL has reared it's ugly head and stolen me away.  I think I've found my way back.  Thank you so much for your kind words.

Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)

I'm so sorry it's taken me so long to respond to your review.  RL has reared it's ugly head and stolen me away.  I think I've found my way back.  Thank you so much for your kind words.

10/10

MistressSnape

I began reading this yesterday, and I had to finish the last of this chapter this morning.Bravo!  I love this story.  I don't comment very often...only when a story stands out enough for me to have something different to say.  This one has been wonderful.  There are so many elements to it that are surprisingly fresh.  I have to say, though, that my favorite part is Simon calling his falcon 'chicken.'  I laugh every time.  I swear, the little sub-plot going with the bird is one of those things that makes a great story.  It's a quirk of the character that is utilized and expounded upon to make the character more believable.  Hermione's description of why women read romance....*sigh*  Were you in my head, dear authors?  Did you lay open my heart for all the world to see?  I read this particular ship because the characters remind me of people I know, and so even though I know there isn't a man alive capable of the romance that Snape exhibits (even at his snarky best, which is why I love him), I am drawn to it because it's my ideal - an intelligent man that is complicated enough to keep me from getting bored.Alas, I've babbled, but take it as a compliment.  This rarely happens.  There are few stories that 'get' to me like this.  I eagerly await the next installment.

Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)

First of all, I am so sorry it has taken me so long to respond to your wonderful review.  I normally respond within a few days, but RL has reared its ugly head in my life and in Darned Child's life her hubby was home on leave.Second, your review is priceless.  It's wonderful beyond words.  We hoped we'd appeal to the "it could be me" writing that story when we started and it looks like we've had some success.Hermione's words, thoughts and feelings come from the pen of Darned Child.  A marvelous writer and a wonderful friend.Thank you again for your more than kind words.

Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)

First of all, I am so sorry it has taken me so long to respond to your wonderful review.  I normally respond within a few days, but RL has reared its ugly head in my life and in Darned Child's life her hubby was home on leave.Second, your review is priceless.  It's wonderful beyond words.  We hoped we'd appeal to the "it could be me" writing that story when we started and it looks like we've had some success.Hermione's words, thoughts and feelings come from the pen of Darned Child.  A marvelous writer and a wonderful friend.Thank you again for your more than kind words.

10/10

Charmaine

good one here

Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)

Thank you!

Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)

Thank you!

10/10

snitchette

Absolutely perfect. They're so good and fun to read when they're together, arguing or not. "Unease [...]in his midsection" *smirk* Indeed. Hope he will work on it quickly...

Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)

Hee, thank you. 

Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)

Hee, thank you. 

10/10

Sampdoria

I really love this chapter, they are getting so  much closer and if only Severus can actually believe that there is infact somethingn good in his future and that he deserves it, the feeling in his stommach should dissapear without any trace (because you don't intend to let anything bad comming their way, do you? (Sending a stern look your way)). I loved the comment about Hermione telling Molly that she didn't intend to marry any of her sons....:-))

Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)

*looks totally innocent while crossing fingers*  Nope, nothing bad planned at all, honest!   (Couldn't hope to top what dear old JKR did to him!)  Ahem, anyway – Darned Child will be very pleased you appreciate Hermione's spirit.  A woe-is-me Hermione this one isn't!

Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)

*looks totally innocent while crossing fingers*  Nope, nothing bad planned at all, honest!   (Couldn't hope to top what dear old JKR did to him!)  Ahem, anyway – Darned Child will be very pleased you appreciate Hermione's spirit.  A woe-is-me Hermione this one isn't!

10/10

Becky

Wonderful, I was so excited when I received the update notice...I am so loving this story...Oh my I hope Simon is wrong and nothing bad happens to them, More soon please....Excellent chapter, Looking forward to more!!

Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)

We're quite glad you love it.  We love writing it and the next chapter is in the queue.

Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)

We're quite glad you love it.  We love writing it and the next chapter is in the queue.

10/10

Muggline

It's a good thing they came to their senses in time to prevent a major disaster (fight) – the scenes on the roof/in the air are pure magic...

Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)

Thank you so very much!  ;)

Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)

Thank you so very much!  ;)

10/10

blue artemis

He doesn't understand that contentment is OK?  Poor Severus, that was so romantic.  It scared him. 

Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)

I don't imagine he's had much contentment in his life, so it might be a completely unfamiliar feeling.  Hee!  Maybe he thinks it's indigestion?  ;)

Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)

I don't imagine he's had much contentment in his life, so it might be a completely unfamiliar feeling.  Hee!  Maybe he thinks it's indigestion?  ;)

0/10

sunny33

Come fly with me, come fly, let's fly away...

Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)

Narrowed dark eyes look in Sunny33's direction and one brow rises."And where – exactly – do you intend to take me, young lady?"

Response from sunny33 (Reviewer)

Fly me to the moon, let me play among the stars,Let me know what spring is like on Jupiter and Mars...

Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)

Narrowed dark eyes look in Sunny33's direction and one brow rises."And where – exactly – do you intend to take me, young lady?"

Response from sunny33 (Reviewer)

Fly me to the moon, let me play among the stars,Let me know what spring is like on Jupiter and Mars...

10/10

faeriebell

I just love how Simon can't keep his hands off her. She doesn't seem to mind, but I can almost hear her brain working towards getting the answers she hungers for. Can't wait for the next chapter!! (The babe decided to hang in for a while, but she'll be here by Thursday! Hope to find a new chapter when I get home!! :)

Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)

I'm actually answering this on Wednesday, and there's a new chapter up... 

Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)

I'm actually answering this on Wednesday, and there's a new chapter up... 

0/10

kimjo2

lordy, lordy...she's stronger than i would be!  i'm dying to see how he's going to work arround this.  i just love youse guys!  thanks so much                                     

Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)

Hee!  Thank you!

Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)

Hee!  Thank you!

0/10

snapefan2007

that was great and i can't wait to read more. 

Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)

We're very glad you want to read more, because we have quite a bit more.   ;)

Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)

We're very glad you want to read more, because we have quite a bit more.   ;)

0/10

sunny33

wonder who will win?

Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)

;)   Both?  Neither?  We'll find out one of these days, I'm positive!

Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)

;)   Both?  Neither?  We'll find out one of these days, I'm positive!

10/10

Becky

OH MY! I have read all eleven chapters in one sitting, and I must say ladies, I am so enjoying this story...It's wonderful and I love the letters they are sending, teasing, and funny...WELL DONE!!  I can't wait until another chapter is ready...Excellent, excellent!!! and so saved!!!

Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)

We're always happy to welcome a new reader, and one that expresses such delight is a wonderful addition. We're quite glad you like it. ;)

Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)

We're always happy to welcome a new reader, and one that expresses such delight is a wonderful addition. We're quite glad you like it. ;)

10/10

WriterMerrin

I stayed up late into the early morning hours to read this whole story, and now I have to add it to my list of addictions.  I think I'll be happy with the next chapter whether Hermione gives in or not ;)  I had to smile when you were describing the reasons Hermione likes Romance novels.  This story provides all the romance of a slow build wonderfully.

Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)

;) We're always happy to welcome a new reader to our tale. Hermione's list of reasons why women like romances come from the pen of Darned Child and she does list them very, very well, doesn't she?

Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)

This is going to bug me until I ask and hopefully you answer.  It seems like you validated at least one part of this story.   At least your name seems very, very familiar for one reason or another.   LOL

Response from WriterMerrin (Reviewer)

Yes, I believe I had validated chapter 9 or 10, and that made me want to go back and read the whole thing.  It makes so much more sense in context.

Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)

;) We're always happy to welcome a new reader to our tale. Hermione's list of reasons why women like romances come from the pen of Darned Child and she does list them very, very well, doesn't she?

Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)

This is going to bug me until I ask and hopefully you answer.  It seems like you validated at least one part of this story.   At least your name seems very, very familiar for one reason or another.   LOL

Response from WriterMerrin (Reviewer)

Yes, I believe I had validated chapter 9 or 10, and that made me want to go back and read the whole thing.  It makes so much more sense in context.

10/10

Nessa

Playful, i love it haha!!!

Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)

Wonderful. We're glad you do. ;)

Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)

Wonderful. We're glad you do. ;)

10/10

snitchette

I think that promises to be a memorable afternoon and evening. Pity she doesn't want to go to bed. Well, I can still hope she'll change her mind with a bit of help and persuasion from Simon... *wide grin*

Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)

I don't know. Hermione, once her mind is made up, is hard to sway.

Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)

I don't know. Hermione, once her mind is made up, is hard to sway.

10/10

Muggline

*FG* I love this one... And I am anxious to know who will win this little contest...

Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)

If we lucky – both will! ;)

Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)

If we lucky – both will! ;)

10/10

pookah

Thanks for continuing this tale!  very nicely paced and sweetly written.

Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)

You're very welcome and thank you!

Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)

You're very welcome and thank you!

10/10

geomancer

Tea????? OMG please update soon!!!

Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)

LOL.  The next chapter is already in the que.  ;)

Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)

LOL.  The next chapter is already in the que.  ;)

10/10

Lkmaide

Ladies, any ideas as to why Ashwinder isn't loading?  I've missed your updates since I haven't been able to load the homepage in about three days.  AHHH!!!!  And I adored you last update there -  her saying his name in the thoes of passion OMG!!

Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)

As far as Ashwinder, I believe they were upgrading their server, but as I'm late responding, I believe it's working again.  At least it did when I tried loading it.  And SSSHHHHH!  We aren't that far over here yet.  LOL.

Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)

As far as Ashwinder, I believe they were upgrading their server, but as I'm late responding, I believe it's working again.  At least it did when I tried loading it.  And SSSHHHHH!  We aren't that far over here yet.  LOL.

0/10

Isode

Tap away.This is the most refined chapter so far, written so beautifully, the pace, meter and insight to each character is perfect. I am in awe and can't find the words to express what I am trying to say.

Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)

You've expressed it very well as far as I'm concerned and I know Darned Child appreciates the kind words as much as I do.  We do discuss them, you know.  ;)

Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)

You've expressed it very well as far as I'm concerned and I know Darned Child appreciates the kind words as much as I do.  We do discuss them, you know.  ;)

10/10

reets67

Great writing - a wonderful slow burn. It seems quite fitting for such a cerebral intelligent pair to conduct a flirtation on a cerebral level in letters rather than in person with physical/visual cues.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)

I think the fact they are writing letters makes it a lot easier.  At least for Simon.  Thank you and I hope you enjoy the next ones as much.

Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)

I think the fact they are writing letters makes it a lot easier.  At least for Simon.  Thank you and I hope you enjoy the next ones as much.

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